A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANA5LTUwFQWA3
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—491Please respect copyright.PENANAT37XLcYyMC
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAWEfvVDS9mJ
你指標題?491Please respect copyright.PENANAv7LasYEV4C
但有時訂標題也很困難~491Please respect copyright.PENANAbgYN04Beby
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANA81VxTbUJDy
嗯對啊,491Please respect copyright.PENANA9SLPBSFLAg
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANArUmkyXqoBG
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,491Please respect copyright.PENANAwz3Yypwtnr
所以沒有中心思想在。491Please respect copyright.PENANAcPl7VJwSox
我猜的對嗎?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAWzkRFnlXdy
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。491Please respect copyright.PENANAMeRf4cgL5V
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?491Please respect copyright.PENANAfpjiDYkeOK
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANA3SW7bqBAzx
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!491Please respect copyright.PENANA87CTOftnQ4
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAIJwzfN0uu8
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAioN5RWSTQc
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD491Please respect copyright.PENANANCutpYbQC7
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。491Please respect copyright.PENANAPbOTT0GqHQ
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,491Please respect copyright.PENANAABCUwLkGdC
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANARPqjx7a4xj
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。491Please respect copyright.PENANAJiOicwKvw1
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。491Please respect copyright.PENANAmhjOtCB1yS
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANARBoFFVJhFu
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。491Please respect copyright.PENANA2P2gEpyxam
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANABcMha1NdhT
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAlboiJ4tiR7
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANACzbTHJaXgi
好啊。
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANA7oXk6kvd7F
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。491Please respect copyright.PENANASgzA15zAAg
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。491Please respect copyright.PENANASxmstAtXSU
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。491Please respect copyright.PENANA20mm3b99se
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAYhvgMlTFbl
好的,491Please respect copyright.PENANAxeJl6T9R1c
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、491Please respect copyright.PENANANAmDI7kzln
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANA3jST89bQU2
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,491Please respect copyright.PENANAZfj1pzuOCo
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAFUhrtNIdPZ
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAodQAsrwkj3
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。491Please respect copyright.PENANAeagyKJqv0n
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料491Please respect copyright.PENANAjnGagesmUc
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。491Please respect copyright.PENANAGYWv5k9Syx
比如:491Please respect copyright.PENANAiY6KNugLwi
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。491Please respect copyright.PENANArKh1Ec7Lkf
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。491Please respect copyright.PENANAL2KhFsdXXz
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAgA07OuRQkr
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAZyMp7ZInli
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAf93Zp1Btlj
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAHpJK8bEnwu
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係491Please respect copyright.PENANAig2X00hjxx
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANArdINaDy5Kh
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAtEJkJJM6xS
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,491Please respect copyright.PENANArx7EhgxRrh
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAqt7ctJHiIw
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANADpempFZMvQ
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:491Please respect copyright.PENANArSdM4esJPu
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。491Please respect copyright.PENANAwErDJ8IQfI
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAEAYDoQJvh2
哦~
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAfgcgF3dcuO
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:491Please respect copyright.PENANAGHQWJaZcXe
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)491Please respect copyright.PENANAAdvZJ8mRUq
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)491Please respect copyright.PENANAMsqiEiPNM0
的故事
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAR058t7NoY4
好的、491Please respect copyright.PENANAlKK7DEaQBp
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANA0H4mzpQR0e
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAhswfN1kpW6
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAw6VcGkX5Nl
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAdRg4h7Q1kb
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAF6PBTdRW3O
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAQuzeUEof9d
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:491Please respect copyright.PENANAXKI5Nbdm1g
1.『爭執』491Please respect copyright.PENANATJC6hVf7pb
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』491Please respect copyright.PENANAklANu1DwkU
3.『分手的情人(主角)』491Please respect copyright.PENANAFjoVZXq6NR
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』491Please respect copyright.PENANA6yo1XQvkF1
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAuf7341w1xd
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANA3OYC2iYBr8
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAugLpnafHMo
那如果加入復仇呢491Please respect copyright.PENANAdBjD4kDs9s
搶她大姐的未婚夫491Please respect copyright.PENANA9CgGawHWhR
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAGxiLvg1cWR
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了491Please respect copyright.PENANA6byckbuRA8
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……491Please respect copyright.PENANAJriyp9wpd0
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAH7y3kGiYu2
好的,了解啦
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAQLFtVVD3QA
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAo6pullGYlI
不一定要有吧~?491Please respect copyright.PENANASNetUjgb9h
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAYlhGgANXNT
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANArF2BVWGR69
比如491Please respect copyright.PENANAjjJslhbFmK
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』491Please respect copyright.PENANAenKqg3OwNB
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAnPATZffqwe
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!491Please respect copyright.PENANA9BX9275RSn
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD491Please respect copyright.PENANADIpbfEuWmX
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAIHAfe7TVIS
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 491Please respect copyright.PENANAYYBoSM8jpc
A君:491Please respect copyright.PENANAkkZSTNxplw
你好厲害啊!491Please respect copyright.PENANAqNUd4CzquP
(重新把故事編排)491Please respect copyright.PENANATCXGQouScF
龍晨P:491Please respect copyright.PENANAit7PtlFJIb
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~491Please respect copyright.PENANAkCJiLni0C5