終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名754Please respect copyright.PENANAnJNBCDQTK9
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕754Please respect copyright.PENANArk0bISLD2T
劉元山->海柏754Please respect copyright.PENANAZq2aGn8c32
陳生->曉尚754Please respect copyright.PENANAE75msAHTJ8
李生->曉珀754Please respect copyright.PENANA0bPwxFx89H
嚴生->迎豐754Please respect copyright.PENANA35agsHhxd1
史生->富薈754Please respect copyright.PENANAElRUbg2Jke
林生->傲形754Please respect copyright.PENANASthn4FSXAJ
黃生->利奧754Please respect copyright.PENANAHI98BSW2FX
張生->曉岸
執文法754Please respect copyright.PENANA1m20sPgyIM
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。754Please respect copyright.PENANA6XXJsqrh4y