終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名751Please respect copyright.PENANAPtyRQlTpWb
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕751Please respect copyright.PENANAGuHeBxBYAa
劉元山->海柏751Please respect copyright.PENANAvMssriAY9p
陳生->曉尚751Please respect copyright.PENANAPmlJaYMt1P
李生->曉珀751Please respect copyright.PENANAGXauwEJx1q
嚴生->迎豐751Please respect copyright.PENANAtU1hjHDO05
史生->富薈751Please respect copyright.PENANAumyA7Aonbb
林生->傲形751Please respect copyright.PENANAjnFQYqVU6w
黃生->利奧751Please respect copyright.PENANAWDmQD8kMYp
張生->曉岸
執文法751Please respect copyright.PENANAmaCUf76Pwi
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。751Please respect copyright.PENANAcXqGNOGdjf