終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名648Please respect copyright.PENANAXDm7rCi7tw
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕648Please respect copyright.PENANAfxGq9l3lvU
劉元山->海柏648Please respect copyright.PENANAfWHe55R8SO
陳生->曉尚648Please respect copyright.PENANAvDG6lv76BY
李生->曉珀648Please respect copyright.PENANA2AJhpjhRHT
嚴生->迎豐648Please respect copyright.PENANAGA1HpahCXS
史生->富薈648Please respect copyright.PENANAq8AJK8o8dR
林生->傲形648Please respect copyright.PENANA0ozunsIw9f
黃生->利奧648Please respect copyright.PENANALoPNB49H3W
張生->曉岸
執文法648Please respect copyright.PENANAbtDAOqIYnw
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。648Please respect copyright.PENANAqs67XWe4uP