第1點320Please respect copyright.PENANAY9Mxj8Mrgq
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。320Please respect copyright.PENANA8wS3ocIhHt
第2點320Please respect copyright.PENANAMzxCqupGso
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。320Please respect copyright.PENANA7SadjjvI4f
第3點320Please respect copyright.PENANA41XP58VsQp
例如:320Please respect copyright.PENANAV8QH6U5QiY
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。320Please respect copyright.PENANAaCJ4Of16j4
「嗯──」320Please respect copyright.PENANAvj5u6L0SWy
「該怎麼辦呢?」320Please respect copyright.PENANANrhy70CxOB
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。320Please respect copyright.PENANAcw2049NMDK
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」320Please respect copyright.PENANA2pZk4Y37C4
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。320Please respect copyright.PENANAt7Ji7LFfwL
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。320Please respect copyright.PENANAu8NnjvW14k
例如:320Please respect copyright.PENANAfg2dhGHfix
米莉亞拿到一封信。320Please respect copyright.PENANAPPaOPz16ff
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」320Please respect copyright.PENANAJaBLt2COv0
三河願表示。320Please respect copyright.PENANAcch3DuLs1E
「那可是一封情書耶。」320Please respect copyright.PENANAGH7tobi0VG
第4點320Please respect copyright.PENANAHHf9f7PdX9
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。320Please respect copyright.PENANAL2a6IUPrT5