第1點350Please respect copyright.PENANAHyJFUK77ex
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。350Please respect copyright.PENANAobYAjkQmgg
第2點350Please respect copyright.PENANApaWzxK5TSc
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。350Please respect copyright.PENANAWAxQF0g5Ph
第3點350Please respect copyright.PENANAKDbjDmV5Vz
例如:350Please respect copyright.PENANABRxoGgcVpC
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。350Please respect copyright.PENANASeWPA2BAUL
「嗯──」350Please respect copyright.PENANAhbgZQkExsB
「該怎麼辦呢?」350Please respect copyright.PENANAy28UKNBL0q
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。350Please respect copyright.PENANAR8acqaKLgv
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」350Please respect copyright.PENANAnIXzooKAWW
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。350Please respect copyright.PENANAaiOV2eXJWw
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。350Please respect copyright.PENANA6Wd0SU3qXo
例如:350Please respect copyright.PENANATK1sihF2PH
米莉亞拿到一封信。350Please respect copyright.PENANAiS7UDVDWx0
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」350Please respect copyright.PENANAjj1uL1Agkf
三河願表示。350Please respect copyright.PENANAMdeTb3SRq6
「那可是一封情書耶。」350Please respect copyright.PENANA4zQQA0O7oE
第4點350Please respect copyright.PENANADMv9QwtEND
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。350Please respect copyright.PENANAcUqfrqgQie