花燦眾人酒677Please respect copyright.PENANAHsEZv9TkEK
酌中無相求677Please respect copyright.PENANARucMK6o5qR
望月成影愁677Please respect copyright.PENANAHCGqz7nZgf
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醒時渺渺久677Please respect copyright.PENANACDDcqzN1y2
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(解釋)677Please respect copyright.PENANAYTz5YQlJv5
(仿李白<<月下獨酌>>字數及尾韻)677Please respect copyright.PENANAHsZ1AMaZjf
諷家長、社會競爭比較心態677Please respect copyright.PENANAJ8SmMAlxJH
第1句:如花美好的社會, 但社會的人也醉了, 認為競爭是一切677Please respect copyright.PENANAtGMgpEZRHG
第2句:若無相爭便覺悶(人們渴競爭勝利)677Please respect copyright.PENANAJZYi95W3if
第3句:望子(代月) 成龍(代影),父母為此而愁677Please respect copyright.PENANA6NNgylTu19
第4句:父母對子女如對龍嚴格(秋:代秋月)677Please respect copyright.PENANA7IjjO4eTac
第5句:但月影(子女)根本不明為何要競爭(人人也醉,只有子女醒)677Please respect copyright.PENANA0Rgw7l8CjG
第6句:偏偏社會就是如此677Please respect copyright.PENANAxPF5f6zr27
第7句:子女只好暫時隨父母意, 因月影為人想象出來(父母生育子女)677Please respect copyright.PENANAnL5oEqn2W1
第8句:令他們愁677Please respect copyright.PENANA6GGXKmZ1jn
第9句:人們看月比較影, 在歌方面月較好, 故留下(人各有長處, 何必比較?)677Please respect copyright.PENANAJntf5GIgMt
第10句:人們看影比較月, 在舞方面影較流利(人各有長處, 何必比較?)677Please respect copyright.PENANACkVdB5vyfj
第11句:子女離醒已感到很久了677Please respect copyright.PENANATEQZTdDlbG
第13句:父子變得十分無情677Please respect copyright.PENANAH6i96yXZ8L
第14句:他們距離美好理想世界, 已如雲漢遠了677Please respect copyright.PENANAtRlaqxggFe
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