《專業RPG玩家誤闖異世界成為勇者》作者:生如夢協231Please respect copyright.PENANAHRhtlqCtv7
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故事大綱及人物設定231Please respect copyright.PENANALefBjOsXZa
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Art手上中拿著的正是新小說的大網概念書,然後他大力嘆氣231Please respect copyright.PENANA58OqRG965F
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「Thomas,以作品的故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足的水準。」231Please respect copyright.PENANA2iYuGTr57D
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「對吧!對吧!我就説這是非常吸引的故事喔!」231Please respect copyright.PENANABNeN53yXlG
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「但是,正正是這樣才讓人擔心。」231Please respect copyright.PENANANelBNdXKZT
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「吓,為何會擔心啊!不是說質素十足嗎?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAbj967wyXWx
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論故事走向和角色人物都是超水準的作品卻讓人擔心?231Please respect copyright.PENANAgmD20PObwK
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「異世界題材的確是目前輕小說的主流,不過挺老實説,你並不適合異世界類型作品。」231Please respect copyright.PENANAuHuMTIv6lD
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「為什麼不適合啊!你不是説故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足嗎?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAvOORN0wJlt
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受不了這種剌激的我,大大力搖晃Art的手臂231Please respect copyright.PENANAZhl9Aamoad
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的確,已經擁有「故事內容和人物性格都是質素十足」的大綱,就應該可以準備好下筆的功夫,但Art竟然告訴我並不適合異世界類型的輕小說?!231Please respect copyright.PENANAOF5TXALWs7
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「簡單來說,說異世界題材對你風格太過不利了!記得你前兩部作品都敗在什麼嗎?」231Please respect copyright.PENANACJJoobAJYQ
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「敗在,敗在文筆?」231Please respect copyright.PENANA0beZpZGn8l
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「無錯!就是敗在你的文筆喔!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAzi2ez2gNZd
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「但是輕小說的原意不就作者輕鬆寫,讀者輕鬆讀嗎?理論上文筆不是作品最優先的考慮因素喔!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAOXod40ACTK
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「如果是日常類或是校園戀愛類確實可以先撇除文法水平,問題是異世界類型絕對不能將這種想法套入。你試試思考一下,做一套好的異世界作品需要什麼要素?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAe92N9cplWw
「好囉!怎樣也要賣關子!死要面子!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAhjga8F55Ol
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異世界是怎樣的作品?Thomas如此思索。231Please respect copyright.PENANAbhAH9Udziy
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優秀的人物角色,需要不同種類的生物,通常是獸人或是會説話的非人型物種,他們通常會有別於人類的才能和身體特色。231Please respect copyright.PENANAJ4AKR1pavT
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可能是討伐統治世界為目標的魔王攻略戰,亦可能是男主化成龍傲天開後宫故事231Please respect copyright.PENANADbGaocdd5I
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但戰爭場面是必不可或缺的,難道就是描寫戰鬥場面方面需要文筆好?但戰鬥場面不是異世界的專利喔!應該不是這個原因~難道,難道是!231Please respect copyright.PENANAQsq5dGhZer
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「難道是。。異世界獨有的世界觀設定?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAB7PR47An7r
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「正是如此!」231Please respect copyright.PENANABYwGAOyWaP
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「在上兩部作品裹,世界觀設定的確不能清楚描述喔!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAQv1VbXfoUJ
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「異世界就是需要由宏大的世界觀去吸引讀者互相討論,藉此增加人氣的一種題材,所以問題來了!文筆欠佳的你如何描寫令人討論的世界觀就是讓人擔憂的地方啊!Thomas」231Please respect copyright.PENANAStkqZSN5Kc
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「No!!我辛苦創造的故事和人物就此白費了!你還番啲心血畀我呀!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAwly2KXhHBN
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「浪費這個故事實屬可惜,但用三流的文筆去寫這個故事就更為可惜!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAJS5Mk4qzU2
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「你説話會不會太過直接啊!但這個事實卻無可否認。」231Please respect copyright.PENANAVhzpScLGgS
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「文筆越好,出來的效果就越佳,這就是現實啊!Thomas」231Please respect copyright.PENANAH0YwvtXW7r
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「唉。。那我應該如何是好,我還要創造出世界最強的輕小說,不可以因為文筆欠佳就放棄!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAcpGqiWwkki
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「冇錯,就是要這種心態!我認為你開始要進入文筆修行了!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAourSO9Wjet
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「文筆修行?你開班教我啊?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAHyuErUvSyn
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「當然不是,你忘記了我們學校有位實力級的作文高手嗎?」231Please respect copyright.PENANASadQ8FPVob
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「找她?但她是校花啊!隨便接近會引起公眾騷擾啊!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAHZgVZpxM4F
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「白痴就是白痴!她是文藝學會的!加入學會不就輕鬆解決認識的問題了嗎?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAeLAbRTTYON
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雖然白痴我並不想承認,但他卻說得很有道理,我無法反駁。231Please respect copyright.PENANAYvoeDKL0Mj
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「Ok,My Bad我放學就向老師申請加入文藝學會吧!」231Please respect copyright.PENANALBpc1o8uNC
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「等等,我想再看看你的故事大綱,一會兒才還給你吧。」231Please respect copyright.PENANA3geqw4daHQ
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「好~故事是否很棒呢~」231Please respect copyright.PENANA9NBYXmopCB
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「等你把大綱寫成了故事再作評論吧!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAaPnI3S9eH5
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「••••••」231Please respect copyright.PENANAl6udEofUtI
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Art君輕輕的微笑231Please respect copyright.PENANAun9U5f4dN5
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「真是的,你總是喜歡賣關子啊!」231Please respect copyright.PENANATEhosAQ0vQ
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「人總要帶點耐人尋味啊~」231Please respect copyright.PENANAWTerLgD5jR
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---我是跳過上堂的時間軸---231Please respect copyright.PENANAGKgK39QXXf
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「所以説,現在的大網概念書就在文藝學會會長手中?」231Please respect copyright.PENANAgPOXLvyVgA
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「現是這樣!Thomas君真聰明!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAf9HCLwPmMF
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是這樣的,Art君未經我同意就把大網概念書交到文藝學會的投稿箱裹231Please respect copyright.PENANAbxTASc5BP6
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「比起貿然向老師申請入會,倒不如毛遂自薦,令學會的人都知道你的實力, 這也是最容易讓校花注意的方法。」231Please respect copyright.PENANAmVT1TWApLU
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由好像挺有道理的,啊不對!231Please respect copyright.PENANAGv1y4zuc4C
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「那應該向我事先商量!大綱概念書是我!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAGvI2vOXWlU
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「向你討論,你做事如此自卑,一定會事先否決。商量完等於冇商量過啊!Thomas君。」231Please respect copyright.PENANATiHOHu5vfv
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好,我認輸,一切依足你的計劃行事!231Please respect copyright.PENANArYyKrADFaL
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所以現在,我一個人站在文藝學會的門口,宅男就是沒有自信別人對自己的評論啊!Art只是認識很久,而且興趣相同才能放心將作品交給他看。現在要面對的是一群陌生人,現在正可能嘲笑我的作品,感覺很可怕啊!!231Please respect copyright.PENANA9AwHabQKjq
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在門口掙扎了十多分鐘後,231Please respect copyright.PENANA2BNpflwTUO
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「死就死吧!一切都是為了實現目標的那刻!就算以後要面對多艱難的事!我都要勇敢去面對!文藝學會的各位!我來了!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAL14ANcbOp0
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鼓起勇氣打開門口,然後閉起雙眼90度鞠躬,咬緊牙關大聲叫231Please respect copyright.PENANA1SRygBuw0k
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「大家好!我叫Thomas!請各位以後多多指教!」231Please respect copyright.PENANAHPMiESElaT
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一個宅男為了夢想為了目標,到底願意改變多少,我們就拭目以待吧!231Please respect copyright.PENANAGJCJ30sVG1
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