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天上寒霜降吶 天上寒霜降吶
May 21, 2020 445 1 Min Read 68 Words
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上回我寫的《幻雪》寄託著自己對文章的祝福，希望大家都可以通過自己的心靈去描述一個世界，述說自己的祝願，當然我也有很多需要改進的地方，就是嘛，脫離實際唄～

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