作者妳好758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn9Y5qh5E0V
受到妳的邀请758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvgllQUV7uf
稍微看了下这本佩姬758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxdp0Nc2RVj
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwc8H7WP48U
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbl86RUeehn
现世一堆东西758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx6IoF4XD96
其实就很简单一个道理758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSODBiv1aY7
主角想要被爱758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtIJBKann1a
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI7T6qTXnIP
男主卢克爱758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbRICJz6DS7
主角就爱回去758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwcc4iI9kgJ
女主伊莎爱758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlmEmNgdnX9
主角就爱回去758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ95qNcGgKV
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIN5cMMmKV0
想要被爱是佩姬的主题758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMsD4MC4FxK
主角性别不是问题758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgdZtQqGFVB
内心冲突不是问题758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbDZavrLhvP
主角被爱就迎刃而解758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5dYrzO8W76
看不懂这点整部书就看不了758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZmfVA4BIj6
妳的书乏人问津是这道理758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc0CmZn1myI
作者妳说主角口是心非758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsfXMR3gTt6
欸我说这不对758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTKK6m0lt6
这明摆着口非心也非758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnx1qkZbNs8
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPCnRwgZzs1
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPRC8uBrrsD
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQNhUmmvfO8
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDTEo5GXz2G
为了被爱758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0cSQHeraeZ
连原本的性别都不要了758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFKYobZbO6d
这主角疯的傻的758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6tMVMocgDR
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoQQucTujKZ
女主伊莎758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ4h63BoPZK
单纯的色鬼758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHW96PHpeUf
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYovPV2ZAc2
黑化可能
艾德兰758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbZuzDuqii9
可怜虫阿758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3QxcgW1fQP
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEj8CfrcBpO
妳说解释不够758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3IiBfqxehP
我到觉得清楚758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVd3gCMD3NE
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmp1hPcgFq4
他为啥强758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4O0ZhgZgNh
妳啥都没讲758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ615mmbq0hw
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKjnnSwraGJ
也是除主角外最明白的角色758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3YikEKne06
她就拿来爱主角的758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡShOgyPRfHp
功能性角色
还有其他许多758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY9TTGxOYF1
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN7VNgHnPHg
可以瞧见妳的苦心758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAbOC4Pk8ce
我觉得这没必要758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKxGD0vxQbz
好的台词提一次够了758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7e92Lh6BTv
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMOEc4BZECf
我倒嫌设定囉嗦758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCxEERJpAze
空白很重要758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwT1l1yhecL
没明白有没明白的好处758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKKy7rF0ED0
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ62gk0y4B0
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS8Ykox0AfX
我还会继续看的758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Ploi6XNeo
确实好看758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI3DQXqhknR
希望你这能写完758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjkceylSV9E
能放上起点不758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmIKyftvuDg
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSp8zoV671g
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYosaG1YgVX
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ofZV0xPgB
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaiaF9MuoYp
感謝你的評文758Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo4cTm0ZrwO
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