作者妳好776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9VWP58jNhP
受到妳的邀请776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR59cbg0P0F
稍微看了下这本佩姬776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ01DGllJrHz
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvdSRd8gLVI
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡssL5pFJ1l6
现世一堆东西776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdHf3covCUf
其实就很简单一个道理776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLCufbA3j52
主角想要被爱776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8FY3Sj2g3s
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR3AvI3dRqf
男主卢克爱776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsZP61axBNt
主角就爱回去776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ467z4KPtv2
女主伊莎爱776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnKNOLUKnYl
主角就爱回去776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvouDe42h8p
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsrbEXTv9Fh
想要被爱是佩姬的主题776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTbha3jOWlE
主角性别不是问题776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYWoJcCwNaL
内心冲突不是问题776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwKEzX4I6m9
主角被爱就迎刃而解776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxEkHrYb9gJ
看不懂这点整部书就看不了776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvpi2a5I9Xu
妳的书乏人问津是这道理776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhPoujabaPx
作者妳说主角口是心非776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEjrQaZqfJ8
欸我说这不对776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8yd1lovrGp
这明摆着口非心也非776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡanNfdHFB22
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlrt18jN72N
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi5ltnSEkXV
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG7kegLrmvi
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ54pvZxGrYh
为了被爱776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhE3Mc7Y6bK
连原本的性别都不要了776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnKK2aesCHW
这主角疯的傻的776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv2twebk3ub
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC4yJNRqOxA
女主伊莎776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQrai7gbniO
单纯的色鬼776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDu8y9LwDuO
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡohNxDBrfXB
黑化可能
艾德兰776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6zGWMrxMpk
可怜虫阿776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqwzJWnYA08
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf1ZOXanG4g
妳说解释不够776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4N0WJL1JgL
我到觉得清楚776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaG3yeYBcZe
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF09bNTq8TV
他为啥强776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡenlpFHHEZJ
妳啥都没讲776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXfzDwWUyRb
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqeVbqBm47n
也是除主角外最明白的角色776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsIUMl0A6xh
她就拿来爱主角的776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJtM0kT6w1H
功能性角色
还有其他许多776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2tGkKShTml
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJXG8RvJX9Y
可以瞧见妳的苦心776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzCpgobNJ4N
我觉得这没必要776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdPTU9sPLUc
好的台词提一次够了776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGcasEaZUNp
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnVzSjasvSY
我倒嫌设定囉嗦776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ7UHX0qeFy
空白很重要776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0NKpRIpjcN
没明白有没明白的好处776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN73WWK7JNT
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7HRTnCYW3G
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOFNTqA7FnL
我还会继续看的776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCypneQvHZD
确实好看776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrD4w0h5d4P
希望你这能写完776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSbCKTo939L
能放上起点不776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLsuqGwB5qH
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH9h3Yzy5Rd
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE3sE0ev1cV
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBFaeMuRAC6
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbdX8MbjRAK
感謝你的評文776Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyWfj5V8Ljw
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