作者妳好776Please respect copyright.PENANA9VWP58jNhP
受到妳的邀请776Please respect copyright.PENANAR59cbg0P0F
稍微看了下这本佩姬776Please respect copyright.PENANA01DGllJrHz
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法776Please respect copyright.PENANAvdSRd8gLVI
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西776Please respect copyright.PENANAssL5pFJ1l6
现世一堆东西776Please respect copyright.PENANAdHf3covCUf
其实就很简单一个道理776Please respect copyright.PENANALCufbA3j52
主角想要被爱776Please respect copyright.PENANA8FY3Sj2g3s
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱776Please respect copyright.PENANAR3AvI3dRqf
男主卢克爱776Please respect copyright.PENANAsZP61axBNt
主角就爱回去776Please respect copyright.PENANA467z4KPtv2
女主伊莎爱776Please respect copyright.PENANAnKNOLUKnYl
主角就爱回去776Please respect copyright.PENANAvouDe42h8p
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理776Please respect copyright.PENANAsrbEXTv9Fh
想要被爱是佩姬的主题776Please respect copyright.PENANATbha3jOWlE
主角性别不是问题776Please respect copyright.PENANAYWoJcCwNaL
内心冲突不是问题776Please respect copyright.PENANAwKEzX4I6m9
主角被爱就迎刃而解776Please respect copyright.PENANAxEkHrYb9gJ
看不懂这点整部书就看不了776Please respect copyright.PENANAvpi2a5I9Xu
妳的书乏人问津是这道理776Please respect copyright.PENANAhPoujabaPx
作者妳说主角口是心非776Please respect copyright.PENANAEjrQaZqfJ8
欸我说这不对776Please respect copyright.PENANA8yd1lovrGp
这明摆着口非心也非776Please respect copyright.PENANAanNfdHFB22
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰776Please respect copyright.PENANAlrt18jN72N
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵776Please respect copyright.PENANAi5ltnSEkXV
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜776Please respect copyright.PENANAG7kegLrmvi
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的776Please respect copyright.PENANA54pvZxGrYh
为了被爱776Please respect copyright.PENANAhE3Mc7Y6bK
连原本的性别都不要了776Please respect copyright.PENANAnKK2aesCHW
这主角疯的傻的776Please respect copyright.PENANAv2twebk3ub
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色776Please respect copyright.PENANAC4yJNRqOxA
女主伊莎776Please respect copyright.PENANAQrai7gbniO
单纯的色鬼776Please respect copyright.PENANADu8y9LwDuO
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性776Please respect copyright.PENANAohNxDBrfXB
黑化可能
艾德兰776Please respect copyright.PENANA6zGWMrxMpk
可怜虫阿776Please respect copyright.PENANAqwzJWnYA08
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了776Please respect copyright.PENANAf1ZOXanG4g
妳说解释不够776Please respect copyright.PENANA4N0WJL1JgL
我到觉得清楚776Please respect copyright.PENANAaG3yeYBcZe
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够776Please respect copyright.PENANAF09bNTq8TV
他为啥强776Please respect copyright.PENANAenlpFHHEZJ
妳啥都没讲776Please respect copyright.PENANAXfzDwWUyRb
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白776Please respect copyright.PENANAqeVbqBm47n
也是除主角外最明白的角色776Please respect copyright.PENANAsIUMl0A6xh
她就拿来爱主角的776Please respect copyright.PENANAJtM0kT6w1H
功能性角色
还有其他许多776Please respect copyright.PENANA2tGkKShTml
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多776Please respect copyright.PENANAJXG8RvJX9Y
可以瞧见妳的苦心776Please respect copyright.PENANAzCpgobNJ4N
我觉得这没必要776Please respect copyright.PENANAdPTU9sPLUc
好的台词提一次够了776Please respect copyright.PENANAGcasEaZUNp
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨776Please respect copyright.PENANAnVzSjasvSY
我倒嫌设定囉嗦776Please respect copyright.PENANAJ7UHX0qeFy
空白很重要776Please respect copyright.PENANA0NKpRIpjcN
没明白有没明白的好处776Please respect copyright.PENANAN73WWK7JNT
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说776Please respect copyright.PENANA7HRTnCYW3G
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书776Please respect copyright.PENANAOFNTqA7FnL
我还会继续看的776Please respect copyright.PENANACypneQvHZD
确实好看776Please respect copyright.PENANArD4w0h5d4P
希望你这能写完776Please respect copyright.PENANASbCKTo939L
能放上起点不776Please respect copyright.PENANALsuqGwB5qH
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
776Please respect copyright.PENANAJVPYneeeUO
作者回應:776Please respect copyright.PENANAH9h3Yzy5Rd
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,776Please respect copyright.PENANAE3sE0ev1cV
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,776Please respect copyright.PENANABFaeMuRAC6
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞776Please respect copyright.PENANAbdX8MbjRAK
感謝你的評文776Please respect copyright.PENANAyWfj5V8Ljw
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