作者妳好797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAmuq1BfQ2w
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稍微看了下这本佩姬797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSjkXKd6kTL
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡemtQ67u8jz
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWqd94W7b6N
现世一堆东西797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaos16DDtKq
其实就很简单一个道理797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfdv7U28j8Q
主角想要被爱797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeJ1rTdwuF8
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ52Cnu0sMjZ
男主卢克爱797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKoq4J6Bj0
主角就爱回去797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXBGxNOzghr
女主伊莎爱797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9QmSSdpfda
主角就爱回去797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGcyQRbHh7p
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYgEhSXVeCP
想要被爱是佩姬的主题797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ1ZBbWCzck
主角性别不是问题797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6GqfaPT7S
内心冲突不是问题797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzsdQsSUd2I
主角被爱就迎刃而解797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT6pHDCdt8g
看不懂这点整部书就看不了797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6lPSTCyCuz
妳的书乏人问津是这道理797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTOMGSfFzbi
作者妳说主角口是心非797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡizBIiuRkBf
欸我说这不对797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡztJaDFlBHR
这明摆着口非心也非797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHlHE4gnXa2
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUAxUiRaIar
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6OpmdCEzVR
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ1W0v6S4Ap
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV6HSpdjGwK
为了被爱797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO0uF7MTBV5
连原本的性别都不要了797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqMbwTu5pXS
这主角疯的傻的797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfdFUY1nQXI
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsN4l4xNHgp
女主伊莎797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrB28DzDyI7
单纯的色鬼797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA2kZCbtri4
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡStGxKQQc6W
黑化可能
艾德兰797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXJfIgtHVYq
可怜虫阿797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRj2q1uJwTJ
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgemKcYyA5i
妳说解释不够797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡltW5kb4Ii0
我到觉得清楚797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8nNPUvam61
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡELjqjHXVaa
他为啥强797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIHe0bVuRHq
妳啥都没讲797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6au2NwdeEn
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhDna8zbfwl
也是除主角外最明白的角色797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWz9RpPSGFQ
她就拿来爱主角的797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqqkV02WE7W
功能性角色
还有其他许多797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCyQ8AvpdC7
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVPIrXynWRK
可以瞧见妳的苦心797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4us9wd2hr1
我觉得这没必要797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUaanLTKwUZ
好的台词提一次够了797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlKv8JkzMAR
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtlFmOa59xh
我倒嫌设定囉嗦797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnXtR4RKBvI
空白很重要797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHdfMn3OiS5
没明白有没明白的好处797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡprF6CwGhC6
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxilTkUQqUS
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSseACCl775
我还会继续看的797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCy7NZy3ztF
确实好看797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRXHpAJ122o
希望你这能写完797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4VSlYLUWjM
能放上起点不797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9SMLkBttrq
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8pKooBtnHP
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFl3w6rf2KR
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9jzC3Xr1sL
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0HcXbCjflo
感謝你的評文797Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgM2HHV1xWA
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