作者妳好758Please respect copyright.PENANAn9Y5qh5E0V
受到妳的邀请758Please respect copyright.PENANAvgllQUV7uf
稍微看了下这本佩姬758Please respect copyright.PENANAxdp0Nc2RVj
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法758Please respect copyright.PENANAwc8H7WP48U
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西758Please respect copyright.PENANAbl86RUeehn
现世一堆东西758Please respect copyright.PENANAx6IoF4XD96
其实就很简单一个道理758Please respect copyright.PENANASODBiv1aY7
主角想要被爱758Please respect copyright.PENANAtIJBKann1a
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱758Please respect copyright.PENANAI7T6qTXnIP
男主卢克爱758Please respect copyright.PENANAbRICJz6DS7
主角就爱回去758Please respect copyright.PENANAwcc4iI9kgJ
女主伊莎爱758Please respect copyright.PENANAlmEmNgdnX9
主角就爱回去758Please respect copyright.PENANAZ95qNcGgKV
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理758Please respect copyright.PENANAIN5cMMmKV0
想要被爱是佩姬的主题758Please respect copyright.PENANAMsD4MC4FxK
主角性别不是问题758Please respect copyright.PENANAgdZtQqGFVB
内心冲突不是问题758Please respect copyright.PENANAbDZavrLhvP
主角被爱就迎刃而解758Please respect copyright.PENANA5dYrzO8W76
看不懂这点整部书就看不了758Please respect copyright.PENANAZmfVA4BIj6
妳的书乏人问津是这道理758Please respect copyright.PENANAc0CmZn1myI
作者妳说主角口是心非758Please respect copyright.PENANAsfXMR3gTt6
欸我说这不对758Please respect copyright.PENANAgTKK6m0lt6
这明摆着口非心也非758Please respect copyright.PENANAnx1qkZbNs8
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰758Please respect copyright.PENANAPCnRwgZzs1
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵758Please respect copyright.PENANAPRC8uBrrsD
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜758Please respect copyright.PENANAQNhUmmvfO8
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的758Please respect copyright.PENANADTEo5GXz2G
为了被爱758Please respect copyright.PENANA0cSQHeraeZ
连原本的性别都不要了758Please respect copyright.PENANAFKYobZbO6d
这主角疯的傻的758Please respect copyright.PENANA6tMVMocgDR
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色758Please respect copyright.PENANAoQQucTujKZ
女主伊莎758Please respect copyright.PENANAJ4h63BoPZK
单纯的色鬼758Please respect copyright.PENANAHW96PHpeUf
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性758Please respect copyright.PENANAYovPV2ZAc2
黑化可能
艾德兰758Please respect copyright.PENANAbZuzDuqii9
可怜虫阿758Please respect copyright.PENANA3QxcgW1fQP
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了758Please respect copyright.PENANAEj8CfrcBpO
妳说解释不够758Please respect copyright.PENANA3IiBfqxehP
我到觉得清楚758Please respect copyright.PENANAVd3gCMD3NE
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够758Please respect copyright.PENANAmp1hPcgFq4
他为啥强758Please respect copyright.PENANA4O0ZhgZgNh
妳啥都没讲758Please respect copyright.PENANA615mmbq0hw
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白758Please respect copyright.PENANAKjnnSwraGJ
也是除主角外最明白的角色758Please respect copyright.PENANA3YikEKne06
她就拿来爱主角的758Please respect copyright.PENANAShOgyPRfHp
功能性角色
还有其他许多758Please respect copyright.PENANAY9TTGxOYF1
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多758Please respect copyright.PENANAN7VNgHnPHg
可以瞧见妳的苦心758Please respect copyright.PENANAAbOC4Pk8ce
我觉得这没必要758Please respect copyright.PENANAKxGD0vxQbz
好的台词提一次够了758Please respect copyright.PENANA7e92Lh6BTv
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨758Please respect copyright.PENANAMOEc4BZECf
我倒嫌设定囉嗦758Please respect copyright.PENANACxEERJpAze
空白很重要758Please respect copyright.PENANAwT1l1yhecL
没明白有没明白的好处758Please respect copyright.PENANAKKy7rF0ED0
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说758Please respect copyright.PENANAJ62gk0y4B0
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书758Please respect copyright.PENANAS8Ykox0AfX
我还会继续看的758Please respect copyright.PENANA5Ploi6XNeo
确实好看758Please respect copyright.PENANAI3DQXqhknR
希望你这能写完758Please respect copyright.PENANAjkceylSV9E
能放上起点不758Please respect copyright.PENANAmIKyftvuDg
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
758Please respect copyright.PENANACSDbgN30mm
作者回應:758Please respect copyright.PENANASp8zoV671g
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,758Please respect copyright.PENANAYosaG1YgVX
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,758Please respect copyright.PENANA6ofZV0xPgB
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞758Please respect copyright.PENANAaiaF9MuoYp
感謝你的評文758Please respect copyright.PENANAo4cTm0ZrwO
我會盡量把文章搬上對岸起點的