作者妳好822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB4FrNNKMST
受到妳的邀请822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7hVXqWwod8
稍微看了下这本佩姬822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC6rMISIccO
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMjoRsqwZN9
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ5TINC5yqJ
现世一堆东西822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoL4UiYJmVe
其实就很简单一个道理822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqnE8eRxzFy
主角想要被爱822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJjcV7ikg9K
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlCeTvb715Q
男主卢克爱822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuuetw4aUWY
主角就爱回去822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5BXYMfPLcl
女主伊莎爱822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkwni1io9Ji
主角就爱回去822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡszBXbwtSrh
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ77PtsZZPYI
想要被爱是佩姬的主题822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4SOouAAB8s
主角性别不是问题822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZESgcASRSh
内心冲突不是问题822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFA8mZm5PkW
主角被爱就迎刃而解822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa4g3UDlhe8
看不懂这点整部书就看不了822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7AHZCdjScd
妳的书乏人问津是这道理822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡioV0E9DEfx
作者妳说主角口是心非822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSuFW8v8e0q
欸我说这不对822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzfFNTSHP1v
这明摆着口非心也非822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGpOfsVsP9x
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnfU8EqlpNn
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3Rm9CjDdgb
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaJKQWa61Ld
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVcS6tSa4OQ
为了被爱822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEzFfFrVD3v
连原本的性别都不要了822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ68QqBVhQ2m
这主角疯的傻的822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ02lfGVJi5p
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3TuLHizSL6
女主伊莎822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0BWk33XfDR
单纯的色鬼822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv2lcZnlgmu
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3GLzVm1g1y
黑化可能
艾德兰822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCE3Mj6KHT8
可怜虫阿822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ4NNYncoe9
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡop62MEIS6V
妳说解释不够822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6nOBJn5zST
我到觉得清楚822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8fhWvlOVmq
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡobhCySCbTE
他为啥强822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnj9p5d9gtt
妳啥都没讲822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfa6s5VEUvd
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNFQdHAhGkt
也是除主角外最明白的角色822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG69uvGpi3y
她就拿来爱主角的822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpMaVSThugT
功能性角色
还有其他许多822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ21qRPNETTT
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡummNkxnHpe
可以瞧见妳的苦心822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn7Q03yNbXd
我觉得这没必要822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEEwUiaNt4g
好的台词提一次够了822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡholDpcRwZM
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrVfSJZ5R8j
我倒嫌设定囉嗦822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBhPvpc6e7a
空白很重要822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡroDO8lAkTU
没明白有没明白的好处822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ23WDev1Fhg
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡISnAZ7aaS0
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUzRxOY2AX
我还会继续看的822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTLJ2FNgaNC
确实好看822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxg3MUP1YD8
希望你这能写完822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEAFp8P5aSY
能放上起点不822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6PKT12qi1i
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYgL4V9DVDm
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2trjUswiEm
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP8I0Ax21ad
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6jijpRJ4HY
感謝你的評文822Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKtus2o9Ard
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