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結果皆相似 生來必變衰123Please respect copyright.PENANA56jiylnfIO
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[1] 押廣東話 /eoi/ 韻。123Please respect copyright.PENANAlbFWLK5FUD
[2] 習習籠中鳥:引自左思《詠史八首.其八》:「習習籠中鳥,舉翮觸四隅。」123Please respect copyright.PENANAy588uIAIdE
[3] 第廿五次德尼思化創作會嘅主題係「衰果」。123Please respect copyright.PENANAnr81rwhAL9