感謝各位的投稿!469Please respect copyright.PENANAxBopczkTeE
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!469Please respect copyright.PENANAuaWTaFSWks
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~469Please respect copyright.PENANAu7X10SKkq1
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法469Please respect copyright.PENANADMFnX7JoRW
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!469Please respect copyright.PENANAHmPPnjfO4z
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!469Please respect copyright.PENANAqqGUuSdAKi
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》469Please respect copyright.PENANAGVjvUvQmg6
(兼人氣獎得主)469Please respect copyright.PENANAFcrcDCZpok
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD469Please respect copyright.PENANAFMUGERsFQF
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W469Please respect copyright.PENANAUBAhjnun22
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!469Please respect copyright.PENANA9ufPGfVETr
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」469Please respect copyright.PENANA3LzQZgSD7z
結果後續結尾意外二連發!469Please respect copyright.PENANAmUZcSr4meu
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意469Please respect copyright.PENANAcBZrsLHp1T
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺469Please respect copyright.PENANABWMU9g3qWW
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事469Please respect copyright.PENANARl5BPivzIj
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》469Please respect copyright.PENANA7ALG5baL1j
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD469Please respect copyright.PENANAkgjVbPvk79
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯469Please respect copyright.PENANADEwULI6GhA
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣469Please respect copyright.PENANAMexWLcdWQj
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD469Please respect copyright.PENANACjlccEopVZ
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~469Please respect copyright.PENANAd0zPiHc3dy
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?469Please respect copyright.PENANAo5miPc4N9P
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文469Please respect copyright.PENANAmOUsoqZyRL
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:469Please respect copyright.PENANA8CjeB4haX6
這個名次是最難抉擇的469Please respect copyright.PENANAB17LTNKGLo
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態469Please respect copyright.PENANAskkH3t2eRr
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧469Please respect copyright.PENANALWBvD3mEmy
以發佈順序點評:469Please respect copyright.PENANAUuoPHJsYNs
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》469Please respect copyright.PENANAGcwLSRtxi5
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底469Please respect copyright.PENANAsSHbdC8zY2
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END469Please respect copyright.PENANAZWa5O5NiUz
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺469Please respect copyright.PENANAXHBKcFVTYQ
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案469Please respect copyright.PENANANEfPjWr1Fy
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w469Please respect copyright.PENANAInvaEcC08t
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖469Please respect copyright.PENANARCyqSA8hmb
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到469Please respect copyright.PENANAk9sZB32f0N
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》469Please respect copyright.PENANAKrmWcnDPGe
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!469Please respect copyright.PENANAeCdgxcQhC2
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點469Please respect copyright.PENANAj3AfiFnmp1
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD469Please respect copyright.PENANAxEl8h0US6O
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)469Please respect copyright.PENANAGOoTKEGoVN
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒469Please respect copyright.PENANA8xiJCNV73q
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚469Please respect copyright.PENANAUSu791TWQg
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失469Please respect copyright.PENANAP6pz4Jemp0
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了469Please respect copyright.PENANAUMyzgtrDrj
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性469Please respect copyright.PENANAEuZOQpHqpq
例如:469Please respect copyright.PENANAigv3bUCRTe
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢469Please respect copyright.PENANAojQfA0jsUy
>放學忘記去放乖乖469Please respect copyright.PENANAfvbJzua7oj
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂469Please respect copyright.PENANA9pBqhsfkTM
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些469Please respect copyright.PENANAUq7vmXZEEj
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性469Please respect copyright.PENANAijd6xKhpLv
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》469Please respect copyright.PENANAaoXRGZbKCj
宛如聊齋的古風故事469Please respect copyright.PENANAGnuPDfMwF9
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?469Please respect copyright.PENANAZkMAFP7ZNz
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋469Please respect copyright.PENANABwVPEizZJH
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)469Please respect copyright.PENANAunP4ukjDax
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?469Please respect copyright.PENANAWWSMEKa8Ew
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度469Please respect copyright.PENANAgxH9wDMPk3
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD469Please respect copyright.PENANAMJeCz81NPT
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌469Please respect copyright.PENANABooIENLYaA
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了469Please respect copyright.PENANAXCVPhDDSqc
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞469Please respect copyright.PENANAXpBX7hBS9w
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間469Please respect copyright.PENANAPAPaQ3T3Z2
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠469Please respect copyright.PENANAktux3jk8Nt
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖469Please respect copyright.PENANAh9NehJUji5
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒469Please respect copyright.PENANA2g1z1FZ3UM
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說469Please respect copyright.PENANA9XRHPecbv5
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》469Please respect copyright.PENANADclaHLQItS
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞469Please respect copyright.PENANAlWvWmQi2OB
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!