感謝各位的投稿!335Please respect copyright.PENANAOy0YQ5yiZ0
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!335Please respect copyright.PENANAiZo2xxTpks
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~335Please respect copyright.PENANAsLCbRMGGmo
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法335Please respect copyright.PENANAiR8EfqtYtL
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!335Please respect copyright.PENANA69OpQddYa9
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!335Please respect copyright.PENANA6zRBvqhzfD
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》335Please respect copyright.PENANANUdb5lYizI
(兼人氣獎得主)335Please respect copyright.PENANAdU0HjuAtlg
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD335Please respect copyright.PENANABY6MCR39NO
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W335Please respect copyright.PENANADd378MUlPm
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!335Please respect copyright.PENANAHE2RfDjFey
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」335Please respect copyright.PENANAIyeGTcIXIv
結果後續結尾意外二連發!335Please respect copyright.PENANAZscspdPGPh
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意335Please respect copyright.PENANAfIRlwOXTPq
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺335Please respect copyright.PENANAPpTuesb6mM
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事335Please respect copyright.PENANAtltODtbj9P
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》335Please respect copyright.PENANA74fu62RUJc
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD335Please respect copyright.PENANAoeCcrQ5R89
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯335Please respect copyright.PENANAmATh1tEhOd
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣335Please respect copyright.PENANAWQ0c4TG55B
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD335Please respect copyright.PENANAmGXmL9z7nJ
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~335Please respect copyright.PENANA08eslhPiK0
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?335Please respect copyright.PENANAmkMJGhkdpL
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文335Please respect copyright.PENANA9Y82FR5qrd
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:335Please respect copyright.PENANAGVnxpMFXzW
這個名次是最難抉擇的335Please respect copyright.PENANAo31xa4gO6Z
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態335Please respect copyright.PENANAEHVwuYY1ux
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧335Please respect copyright.PENANAdpO7mm1MEv
以發佈順序點評:335Please respect copyright.PENANAim57Ep3wpN
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》335Please respect copyright.PENANA1I5X6hnUB9
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底335Please respect copyright.PENANAM4VHDpXslx
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END335Please respect copyright.PENANAYCzcyBMxNb
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺335Please respect copyright.PENANAzs61aUFpeL
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案335Please respect copyright.PENANA6GpWCyhgZ2
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w335Please respect copyright.PENANAuSYPTuA9Kt
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖335Please respect copyright.PENANAnhE0NwlclK
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到335Please respect copyright.PENANAkiUmFtviFI
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》335Please respect copyright.PENANAjVrfihhS55
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!335Please respect copyright.PENANAr79iPxS4hE
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點335Please respect copyright.PENANAFByehTvXBo
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD335Please respect copyright.PENANAT0LJVtX0Fw
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)335Please respect copyright.PENANA3mkAwVJ6Wn
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒335Please respect copyright.PENANApSQ7KzGO67
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚335Please respect copyright.PENANADJWCjDtrU5
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失335Please respect copyright.PENANAMPOLsHTxKe
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了335Please respect copyright.PENANAaj4gpB3fR3
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性335Please respect copyright.PENANAJNxU3ZYezR
例如:335Please respect copyright.PENANAidd2tCM8fq
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢335Please respect copyright.PENANAbtbxcp3Qwn
>放學忘記去放乖乖335Please respect copyright.PENANAwEw23up1B9
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂335Please respect copyright.PENANAKFoSGI0c7W
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些335Please respect copyright.PENANAuADKmr5Azj
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性335Please respect copyright.PENANAfHPdvWrODu
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》335Please respect copyright.PENANAMAfMLtGjqw
宛如聊齋的古風故事335Please respect copyright.PENANAmmHeCt4mQv
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?335Please respect copyright.PENANArv416KFVoi
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋335Please respect copyright.PENANADFMRbRqazk
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)335Please respect copyright.PENANA9tSg6enoLE
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?335Please respect copyright.PENANARci50HHS5I
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度335Please respect copyright.PENANAuyQozho2Sk
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD335Please respect copyright.PENANARVpKT68oFo
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌335Please respect copyright.PENANAUfPgawHqCz
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了335Please respect copyright.PENANAIFPvqm7ILj
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞335Please respect copyright.PENANA7K6Ttj9lwj
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間335Please respect copyright.PENANA6ky67QB4ZO
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠335Please respect copyright.PENANAAEVbUoFR3L
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖335Please respect copyright.PENANAJlSv4YCysj
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒335Please respect copyright.PENANA3O8aKO4oua
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說335Please respect copyright.PENANAGWNz8GcIym
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》335Please respect copyright.PENANAB8twCwLsE4
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞335Please respect copyright.PENANAcKpCNgwFZO
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!