感謝各位的投稿!430Please respect copyright.PENANAu6Zh11IxHY
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!430Please respect copyright.PENANAlKkgc0o4Qx
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~430Please respect copyright.PENANAuZ8OPTTHmi
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法430Please respect copyright.PENANAwDyBNicp0i
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!430Please respect copyright.PENANAlnY0srIler
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!430Please respect copyright.PENANAeYHP6zyjTS
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》430Please respect copyright.PENANA7PEn54NqfR
(兼人氣獎得主)430Please respect copyright.PENANAhXFf6LQfqU
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD430Please respect copyright.PENANA0E1r7jyAGb
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W430Please respect copyright.PENANAMiEc192V2u
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!430Please respect copyright.PENANAfCAm0qGVzd
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」430Please respect copyright.PENANAtpmeUtSi6q
結果後續結尾意外二連發!430Please respect copyright.PENANANu7aK9JSI1
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意430Please respect copyright.PENANAjzDfOrUJXS
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺430Please respect copyright.PENANA269T9Q2uZ9
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事430Please respect copyright.PENANA93YG5XMyiM
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》430Please respect copyright.PENANAK3b7xxPMIa
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD430Please respect copyright.PENANA4kNzJlvJCl
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯430Please respect copyright.PENANAE8EsoWtLcZ
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣430Please respect copyright.PENANAww116Gp4f0
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD430Please respect copyright.PENANAe3e2fnh7vz
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~430Please respect copyright.PENANAxK5mYsC6gZ
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?430Please respect copyright.PENANA0eqdkpZ1au
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文430Please respect copyright.PENANAhNimF7W1eY
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:430Please respect copyright.PENANAWp2l0TqSbu
這個名次是最難抉擇的430Please respect copyright.PENANAR9oaW4ElAI
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態430Please respect copyright.PENANAyTSVzppsTS
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧430Please respect copyright.PENANAQHOiy6itjd
以發佈順序點評:430Please respect copyright.PENANAlyNw73O0zb
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》430Please respect copyright.PENANAVZe8Qve2HE
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底430Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1NtDYmvd4
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END430Please respect copyright.PENANA9piEVIhgUY
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺430Please respect copyright.PENANArmapKCVigL
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案430Please respect copyright.PENANAZfjgMQDX5H
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w430Please respect copyright.PENANALJgiAz0kuN
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖430Please respect copyright.PENANASQJeeJlmzA
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到430Please respect copyright.PENANARbDIgYbuQe
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》430Please respect copyright.PENANAWtSKYxTVNE
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!430Please respect copyright.PENANAjP2bBmxqoM
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點430Please respect copyright.PENANAE21qxuO3tw
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD430Please respect copyright.PENANA6uDi7hvGxI
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)430Please respect copyright.PENANAp5AboncYby
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒430Please respect copyright.PENANAV7QpGe8inO
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚430Please respect copyright.PENANAG9Ges41hQz
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失430Please respect copyright.PENANABvIuIOpSw3
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了430Please respect copyright.PENANAFKuul1r8M3
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性430Please respect copyright.PENANAhnG8YIhYnp
例如:430Please respect copyright.PENANABVBvHRv0eG
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢430Please respect copyright.PENANAidmSotFIqR
>放學忘記去放乖乖430Please respect copyright.PENANAYayfTxy9ws
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂430Please respect copyright.PENANApjLYB54MEB
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些430Please respect copyright.PENANA6Ge9oy6Btl
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性430Please respect copyright.PENANAa0wXUFkazs
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》430Please respect copyright.PENANAJfujl8DqeJ
宛如聊齋的古風故事430Please respect copyright.PENANA4ouXzjO8S4
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?430Please respect copyright.PENANAhQaw2eed3o
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋430Please respect copyright.PENANA6CcfrEB0Li
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)430Please respect copyright.PENANAfdDwl9YZhI
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?430Please respect copyright.PENANAi8BEg0o2UO
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度430Please respect copyright.PENANAYgveCaadpy
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD430Please respect copyright.PENANAPsaDApCR5z
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌430Please respect copyright.PENANAjvDhsX8wP6
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了430Please respect copyright.PENANAhYot8XYegx
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞430Please respect copyright.PENANAGFv4RanNt0
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間430Please respect copyright.PENANAsRpxELIC51
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠430Please respect copyright.PENANAzUq7iIRx9h
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖430Please respect copyright.PENANAeWdEKdXwlC
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒430Please respect copyright.PENANA64VsdjGqpQ
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說430Please respect copyright.PENANAhHYOLSN5OU
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》430Please respect copyright.PENANAPl5zvZZihD
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞430Please respect copyright.PENANA1z8CTRkX8S
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!