感謝各位的投稿!397Please respect copyright.PENANAsHFUja0HIt
看了八篇不同風格的故事!真讓人開心!397Please respect copyright.PENANAXT7PNUQoTL
先恭喜得獎的故事,夢墨為得獎篇章此附上短短的心得~397Please respect copyright.PENANAnMNbaO0oeW
心得就只是夢墨個人的感受及想法397Please respect copyright.PENANAuij9rYPenC
並沒有說寫得不好或是特優,純粹夢墨喜不喜歡而已
另外人氣獎以「喜歡數量」多的故事獲得!397Please respect copyright.PENANAVRQIq5Pmj0
就那麼剛好的,第一名也同為人氣獎得主!397Please respect copyright.PENANA6mFkpXUMwa
再次恭喜《Cứu, cứu cháu với》
第一名:《Cứu, cứu cháu với》397Please respect copyright.PENANAjzCCV1UxWV
(兼人氣獎得主)397Please respect copyright.PENANAR0KpNOD3aR
以日常作為開頭偷玩電腦、尋找訊號XD397Please respect copyright.PENANAglnQ7HRkns
這讓也偷玩過電腦的我非常有共鳴W397Please respect copyright.PENANAHDF28jOvra
除了開頭很逗之外,還有就是突然出現的神祕亂碼+恐怖畫面!397Please respect copyright.PENANAvKq98DQYyr
其實到這裡我還沒什麼感覺,只認為「唉唷!有點看頭!」397Please respect copyright.PENANABZOGl2JlkC
結果後續結尾意外二連發!397Please respect copyright.PENANAqOlFgI2fr7
不管事移工慘劇還是Cứu, cứu cháu với的原意397Please respect copyright.PENANAEqOsYPbzzN
這在整天看完之後,都讓我有種心有餘悸的感覺397Please respect copyright.PENANAg3ism6dwkO
用字簡單明白,劇情樸實無華,卻令人覺得真有其事397Please respect copyright.PENANAumzqFbh0IR
恭喜我說你聽撰寫《Cứu, cứu cháu với》獲得第一名及人氣獎
第二名:《廊道》397Please respect copyright.PENANATpsqsf0d4f
雖然看到第二段就猜到大概結尾XD397Please respect copyright.PENANAolHHthzi0S
不過這種「小丑竟是我自己」的業力引爆故事很不錯397Please respect copyright.PENANATvPirAotwd
敘述上也很像在看短片美劇那樣397Please respect copyright.PENANAhMOM53nFFS
獵奇程度我還挺喜歡的,特別是肚子裡的蟲蟲XD397Please respect copyright.PENANAwv7itaJfDC
劇情上有懸疑但都被我猜到後續發展所以有點ODO唉呀~397Please respect copyright.PENANAM8PST8ufyt
就是沒有被驚艷到,但又喜歡傑森的夢與屍體(?397Please respect copyright.PENANAFgIEbVOlNw
整題來說是很不錯的驚悚短文397Please respect copyright.PENANAIPI0VWNE3A
恭喜不轉的《廊道》獲得第二名
第三名:397Please respect copyright.PENANA4wQOgxZYVY
這個名次是最難抉擇的397Please respect copyright.PENANAZkLBzxwRD9
因為我第三喜歡的文章,都是「好可惜」的狀態397Please respect copyright.PENANAFCVmC7FY8O
既然是曾經競爭的三篇,就也來說一下三篇較勁的短評吧397Please respect copyright.PENANA9OmYpxrjfn
以發佈順序點評:397Please respect copyright.PENANAiqdZPMKIOZ
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》397Please respect copyright.PENANAk9QKQ4tSUw
超值爽直快,一筆暢通到底397Please respect copyright.PENANADs2UeYfdxS
渣男現身設計嚇人、渣男劈腿真相大白、鬼來了殺渣男>END397Please respect copyright.PENANAUYLh1aJdDE
沒有任何曲折離奇,鬼說來就來,說殺就殺397Please respect copyright.PENANABd66BdfPgD
WOW!明明有點陰謀詭計卻不需要動腦直接獲得答案397Please respect copyright.PENANAga7kGhsBzx
這也是很微妙的一篇故事w397Please respect copyright.PENANAeqP05CoJFB
但好可惜的部分,就是我沒有沒感覺到恐怖397Please respect copyright.PENANAWQOMsTHxIF
跟第二名同樣,劇情上沒有被驚艷到397Please respect copyright.PENANAFVuSS8IDaz
不過渣男便肉渣也挺舒爽的w
《乖乖文化》397Please respect copyright.PENANAdwyPSanAya
好可惜!這篇真的要大喊好可惜!397Please respect copyright.PENANAPrhrblErD2
首先引用台灣奇怪的乖乖文化我覺得很有看點397Please respect copyright.PENANADyq9MoRsf3
對呀,我也覺得乖乖文化很奇妙XD397Please respect copyright.PENANAVq78SyTy3n
(老實說我原本不知道有這個文化,後來看某部電影才補充到這個冷知識)397Please respect copyright.PENANAPj6SAFJjWc
唉呀,故事裡那個乖乖吊飾笑得我心裡發寒397Please respect copyright.PENANAm0fCI1gc3O
我也想來瓶麥香紅茶壓壓驚397Please respect copyright.PENANASO8RmFiNUf
結尾真的很可惜,因為沒有首尾呼應導致恐怖點直接消失397Please respect copyright.PENANAUetCYkHZQ5
感覺小儀真的就只是做了惡夢,其他都只是想太多了397Please respect copyright.PENANAKV19PDi8om
結尾建議多一點點暗示,增加故事的慣連性397Please respect copyright.PENANA2xXbScxilO
例如:397Please respect copyright.PENANAM6zm68ipvd
小儀醒來鬆了一口氣,原來是在做夢397Please respect copyright.PENANAN2p0pqdWHR
>放學忘記去放乖乖397Please respect copyright.PENANANLIZEfwMHC
>回家打開冷氣時,乖乖吊飾卡在冷氣孔嘿嘿笑著(喂397Please respect copyright.PENANA7xe2Z6z7Bz
好啦、浮誇了,就只是希望結尾完整一些397Please respect copyright.PENANA5NaXuKjWeV
總結來說題材有趣、文章順暢但缺乏慣連性397Please respect copyright.PENANA2eFz5Al0ah
有種將要發寒卻嘎然而止,實為可惜
《玉妃引》397Please respect copyright.PENANAB78UPq9viF
宛如聊齋的古風故事397Please respect copyright.PENANAPRcgoXhgAk
以架空東晉時期桓伊的梅花引撰寫精怪戀情(?397Please respect copyright.PENANAiZnt7udwEa
不恐怖但很有趣,就像我前面說的宛如聊齋397Please respect copyright.PENANAV1UOdMowKA
不過這架空似乎出現了玄幻的設定(好微妙)397Please respect copyright.PENANAJnEtFXN6bn
雖然排版壅擠,但內容可以說是很漂亮?397Please respect copyright.PENANAWuTzurr6uw
對,有氣氛、有畫面,就像在鬧街看見說書人坐在凳子上講民間故事
可、要說恐怖程度397Please respect copyright.PENANAns4lt6wk6h
乖乖笑得你心裡發寒贏了XDDD397Please respect copyright.PENANAQ9Eq7VBYrq
以中段度來說乖乖贏了,但以整體完成度玉妃引更勝一籌397Please respect copyright.PENANAkgTy9ri9Mf
畢竟乖乖文化,會讓我產生期待,然而他卻讓我跌倒了397Please respect copyright.PENANALBKhF989Jt
玉妃引穩紮穩打,也許沒有錯愕驚奇,但他有離奇軼聞397Please respect copyright.PENANAWbj07XG9Fh
新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件介於兩者之間397Please respect copyright.PENANAXUzbYedrzn
這篇有屬於自己的狗血風格,彷彿看到了某色水玲瓏
歷經幾小時的掙扎(對,都凌晨了我還在思考難以入眠397Please respect copyright.PENANATA4zCL3GHs
我還是決定把第三名頒給乖乖397Please respect copyright.PENANAGfI1LBuseb
畢竟能用短短五百字以內就引起我的期待,一秒過後讓我跌倒397Please respect copyright.PENANAu9t3TiOczH
這也算有點厲害的鬼故事啊(初次閱讀衝擊性來說397Please respect copyright.PENANA15fh2UqVb4
恭喜夏夜的風《乖乖文化》獲得第三名
《新娘潭鬼新娘殺人事件》和《玉妃引》397Please respect copyright.PENANAZ2vyiF5A2P
個別獲得夢墨特別獎50金幣打賞
其餘未獲獎的文章也能獲得10金幣打賞397Please respect copyright.PENANAzZa8TJg1GK
再次感謝各位的參與!下次有機會開創挑的話!歡迎再來玩!