可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。118Please respect copyright.PENANABQVDikUEcx
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以怪物為主題:118Please respect copyright.PENANAucCDPY5Hd6
創挑還沒有結果啊!118Please respect copyright.PENANAo4ojMYlbPH
有了嗎?118Please respect copyright.PENANAh2WC7jzKaQ
還沒啊……118Please respect copyright.PENANAPqI4bFGCNn
怎麼還沒呢?118Please respect copyright.PENANATkWysWiG2E
怎麼呢……118Please respect copyright.PENANAZniOKyeVHN
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,118Please respect copyright.PENANAxTRbfObdGV
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。118Please respect copyright.PENANAPLb4VyiIZu
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。118Please respect copyright.PENANA4TTozmqQwn
今天會把報告交上來吧?118Please respect copyright.PENANA4iudWs5yXX
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~118Please respect copyright.PENANApjrdbNNABR
啊!有怪獸!118Please respect copyright.PENANAIZv3kJlGYL
哪裡?那裡?118Please respect copyright.PENANA9LkKjecrOP
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~118Please respect copyright.PENANAoLANJkkoXK
就在你你我的時間裡!118Please respect copyright.PENANAZb7gksFY2J
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。118Please respect copyright.PENANAO5pGuTFz7D
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~118Please respect copyright.PENANAC6RFAJDqo6
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