可惜文中太多「我」了，如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好，不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪，所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧，希望潛水中～生活順利。142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIsncUqmxpc
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以怪物為主題：142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVWDyHAHBMu
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拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸，142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbLRfao71dQ
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我想在其他平台發，我嘗試不要用創挑。142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQbtwAhFqKG
今天會把報告交上來吧？142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfO7buUQgm0
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啊！有怪獸！142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeoGegmN0xD
哪裡？那裡？142Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLxTsYrr6pI
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