可惜文中太多「我」了,如果可以換寫法會更好。最後一句的處理比較好,不然就只是普通的夢境。對於怪物沒有比較深入描繪,所以感覺不恐怖。繼續加油吧,希望潛水中~生活順利。142Please respect copyright.PENANAIsncUqmxpc
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以怪物為主題:142Please respect copyright.PENANAVWDyHAHBMu
創挑還沒有結果啊!142Please respect copyright.PENANAqOxwihQCNE
有了嗎?142Please respect copyright.PENANAdGFn15xpWQ
還沒啊……142Please respect copyright.PENANAatPhu5IeeU
怎麼還沒呢?142Please respect copyright.PENANAcyQjfcka89
怎麼呢……142Please respect copyright.PENANAMigEBFL5D4
拖延就是一只看不見卻處處有的怪獸,142Please respect copyright.PENANAbLRfao71dQ
我們的生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。142Please respect copyright.PENANAdWKPEndFvA
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我想在其他平台發,我嘗試不要用創挑。142Please respect copyright.PENANAQbtwAhFqKG
今天會把報告交上來吧?142Please respect copyright.PENANAfO7buUQgm0
我聽說下個星期才是截止日期~142Please respect copyright.PENANAxczBpv0llw
啊!有怪獸!142Please respect copyright.PENANAeoGegmN0xD
哪裡?那裡?142Please respect copyright.PENANALxTsYrr6pI
這裡有,這裡有,那裡也有~142Please respect copyright.PENANA9iZ37DJGpf
就在你你我的時間裡!142Please respect copyright.PENANA19cg0fmZ3L
生命,越拖越短,越拖越乏。142Please respect copyright.PENANAJiedBw6OTC
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〈被怪物襲擊〉潛水中~142Please respect copyright.PENANAyGt0nSwHUZ
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