No Plagiarism!dX62H4VoTAnUkKPUeLLsposted on PENANA 回歸日常課堂,楓楓早前構思了畢業詩作的「起」(與蟹初邂逅日)、「承」(與蟹初次合照),那「轉」應寫甚麼情節呢?8964 copyright protection339PENANA7iEukjE1tl 維尼
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峰峰二話不說,就帶楓楓到海邊觀浪,問:「楓,看到海浪,你有甚麼感覺?」8964 copyright protection339PENANAyCGTwXYOlz 維尼
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楓楓摸摸鼻子,有點猶豫地說:「像一個跳遠選手,先退後數步,再一鼓作氣衝前跳,有起有伏,令人觀看時心情不禁激昂起來!」8964 copyright protection339PENANA3QbMOKyaiq 維尼
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峰峰豎起拇指👍,欣慰地說:「楓,你已說出詩作『轉』的重點了!轉筆是以活潑而不板滯的筆觸帶出突起的轉折情節,令整體詩作有起有伏,同時與前後部分內容相呼。如同海浪一樣,承接前浪的餘韻,同時帶出下一浪的高潮!」8964 copyright protection339PENANA2cfjZgxH0H 維尼
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楓楓呆了呆,怎麼他連自己答了正確答案也不知道😹他似懂非懂地說:「那具體而言應怎應用在詩的創作上?」8964 copyright protection339PENANAnPiMF4wEPk 維尼
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峰峰舉出王維《相思子》為例:8964 copyright protection339PENANAcoZWpWK8mz 維尼
紅豆生南國,(起)春來發幾枝。(承)8964 copyright protection339PENANAHyZr9fwP0F 維尼
願君多採擷,(轉)此物最相思。(合)8964 copyright protection339PENANA9XSxPN0f7X 維尼
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首先詩人講述紅豆誕生地,繼而仔細描述它生長盛況。在紅豆長得亭亭玉立時,詩人一反開首愛護的心態,竟呼籲人快「辣手摧豆」地採擷,為什麼呢?原來是他想借豆盡表心中思念之情💕簡而言之,上佳的「轉」應為情理之內,意料之外。8964 copyright protection339PENANAr53nNChKHt 維尼
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楓楓閉眼聽著溫柔的海浪拍打聲,誠心等待靈感君的探訪!慢慢,他聽著聽著……就睡著了😆。8964 copyright protection339PENANAum8mZlbsnM 維尼
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