這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成)，因為我節奏還不會抓，所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏＆旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結：
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止，我已經寫了上百首新詩，也聽過不少 rap，本以為 rap 不難寫，沒想到一寫才發現：rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多！而且要配上節奏來唸，不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏？華爾滋的 3/4 拍？探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)？還是其他？
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員，也玩過MIDI)，但節奏感不夠強，所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏＆旋律，不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力，使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏＋作曲，配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到，rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在，之後再放上節奏和旋律；所以等我寫熟一點，應該會直接寫歌詞，之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞，也算是另類新詩，還滿有趣；因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大，也比較直白，所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識，未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思！！
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(註)：【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店：《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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