《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEtzuz5mNXL
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlBpCEQWWsV
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkzjAI10l0l
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzI6fttLgk1
而是是人在食用時能入口即化204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIqw1iASDiJ
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb7FVf8De71
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdJDvnUy0h6
使人不會因為時間的洪流204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ83PE1bODdH
失去了炙熱204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVfcRpjdOle
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQaRn14kh79
但夏季怎麼會有雪204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuSuFZPZHN5
令人加以反思204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkHfCJIMG6U
雪季不該有的畫面204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZb42K6PSwo
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxqiJhrdBDo
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或許204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ38jc0d9BHF
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXzMc1TM7gn
即便是來年204Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8ZDF5vzV2d
之後的每一年都依然如此
