《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHdkqF9XZie
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9dlDMyCluP
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoPFaG2ZO4C
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQNGFhdQrYa
而是是人在食用時能入口即化140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8J7BKgCU9g
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy89LsLgTRX
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQA4MmeKXOU
使人不會因為時間的洪流140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG6lDkJfFma
失去了炙熱140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7ABdgtRvtq
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡko3YcjgoqY
但夏季怎麼會有雪140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoo8Uwk9Qlq
令人加以反思140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlv8NN3CHQJ
雪季不該有的畫面140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRLjebvBvnE
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRgGkCgvtMQ
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或許140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDtgXrm9FzI
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbe0N0jhpFr
即便是來年140Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAoZz4TTKOo
之後的每一年都依然如此
