《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧195Please respect copyright.PENANAIzNhY7scUf
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍195Please respect copyright.PENANAYCUIettZBq
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)195Please respect copyright.PENANAop16lNPLsK
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單195Please respect copyright.PENANA189TsyGHJL
而是是人在食用時能入口即化195Please respect copyright.PENANAMFWsXDmsfb
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」195Please respect copyright.PENANAJYagv6C3tq
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久195Please respect copyright.PENANAiWfoAaKIK5
使人不會因為時間的洪流195Please respect copyright.PENANAxvnQkp3Fom
失去了炙熱195Please respect copyright.PENANA3cTwFU6J04
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》195Please respect copyright.PENANAas69vHcJUe
但夏季怎麼會有雪195Please respect copyright.PENANAnU8fuAPZJ3
令人加以反思195Please respect copyright.PENANAau7GGj1ceO
雪季不該有的畫面195Please respect copyright.PENANAaA19dJT45M
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏195Please respect copyright.PENANAlh3Srz8TJs
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或許195Please respect copyright.PENANABqEpnpLOsq
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣195Please respect copyright.PENANAvVTz8ZlEXB
即便是來年195Please respect copyright.PENANAP6LmE1fsg5
之後的每一年都依然如此