《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧165Please respect copyright.PENANADJv8sUvAZU
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍165Please respect copyright.PENANA5j55i2EFZR
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)165Please respect copyright.PENANAzmqh1bxwYx
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單165Please respect copyright.PENANAKBBJt5BhwN
而是是人在食用時能入口即化165Please respect copyright.PENANAWFFpsbxB5F
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」165Please respect copyright.PENANAwPkB2RtzJo
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久165Please respect copyright.PENANAjN2DdpTFsN
使人不會因為時間的洪流165Please respect copyright.PENANATIhq9zvUwJ
失去了炙熱165Please respect copyright.PENANAmcW9qfw0us
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》165Please respect copyright.PENANA2r6PLoyheh
但夏季怎麼會有雪165Please respect copyright.PENANAJZ1LQjctl9
令人加以反思165Please respect copyright.PENANA36IZ2gPjBE
雪季不該有的畫面165Please respect copyright.PENANAt0syaqoYgL
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏165Please respect copyright.PENANAiRY1BCrTun
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或許165Please respect copyright.PENANAnlHQ4EPekA
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣165Please respect copyright.PENANAncXMTHUOry
即便是來年165Please respect copyright.PENANApf5DBXrSA4
之後的每一年都依然如此