《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPPYVI9W9Xb
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo2ZOaf6lDN
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLWW7Q6mPXE
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhZSDbIFWy3
而是是人在食用時能入口即化215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSPQiMiFan6
215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTa3zrWeT3S
「嘗試把心臟調慢」215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGiYVLB94d4
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ49t1G4iBKc
使人不會因為時間的洪流215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEwPnB8lQIX
失去了炙熱215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKEl6vHVC5o
215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5T3R9PbzOj
詩名為《夏，冬眠》215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1ZwYgQQ9gU
但夏季怎麼會有雪215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYiFlH70Reb
令人加以反思215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ09ze33JHwE
雪季不該有的畫面215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWFiGjrmmuX
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbymnSuTJL9
215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdN5mL95EvK
或許215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMHxmyiUi6v
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGU2uTmN49b
即便是來年215Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyeP0gk4FU5
之後的每一年都依然如此
