《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩109Please respect copyright.PENANARzfdwMZouL
詩意要較為薄弱109Please respect copyright.PENANAvOPFUw3jQz
但仍是一首很棒的古詩109Please respect copyright.PENANAJbXZKEkAjY
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分109Please respect copyright.PENANApD20Ne3R0O
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感109Please respect copyright.PENANARyd8A7XBEc
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。109Please respect copyright.PENANA2rd1g0x6Ox
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。109Please respect copyright.PENANArifGeC0Fav
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。109Please respect copyright.PENANA6m1S7AHRQR
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。109Please respect copyright.PENANAOuRUoh78cx
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。109Please respect copyright.PENANA3ROh8aR7jx
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。109Please respect copyright.PENANANq2invW2kJ
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。109Please respect copyright.PENANAYoY55mGRti
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。109Please respect copyright.PENANAu7OLildlLa
每個人的角度皆為不同。109Please respect copyright.PENANAMilqVzi7im
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有人感受深刻,109Please respect copyright.PENANATfTJAyyaXB
有人無感,109Please respect copyright.PENANAHJ5Lql27wV
各有差異。109Please respect copyright.PENANAozBKNMh0eU
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,109Please respect copyright.PENANADeCeR6iNQx
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。