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Still?, You don't breathe, Still

bunnybear

Oct 18, 2022

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When I close my eyes,

I still see you.

I cover my ears but still hear your lies,

I still hear you.

I flinch from your touch,

But you aren't there, so why do I still feel you?

Why do I still love you?

Your touch is cold.

My breath smokes in the winter air,

but you don't breathe.

My fingertips go numb,

but you don't notice.

My eyes are hurt by the bright light,

but you don't blink.

I wrap myself in layer after layer,

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Why should I love you still,

when you lie still,

in the still air of your coffin?

Why do I find myself longing for you,

needing you,

loving you,

still - after all these years?

wrote these in about five minutes so definitely gonna reread and think it's rubbish later

i'm making use of the fancy line now that i figured out how to use it!

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Table of Contents

#6 My heart beats + Absence

#7 What if the day never needed to be saved?

#8 This is my ocean.

#9 Heart of Stone, Heart of Gold

#10 dusk

#11 Peace, Bad Things, White Flag

#12 Red Thread

#13 Dreamy Beach, Red Snow

#14 Pink Pyjamas

#15 Anger To Ash, Our Love

#16 Unravelled

#17 Moment, Rain, In The Rain With Me

#18 A girl that I once knew

#19 Still?, You don't breathe, Still

#20 closing my eyes

#21 Stopping ain't an option

#22 I want to be a poet

#23 Locked Door

#24 Halloween - The Day After

#31 You reek of perfection

#32 promises

#33 it's in the air

#34 a thunderous empty, once

#35 Reality

#36 nobody thinks like i do

#37 Cry

#38 shadow

#39 wait for me

#40 the bridge in my town

#41 pyramid poetry - part 2

#42 secrets

#43 backpack

#44 childhood

#45 Bone Trophy, Second Place

#46 Valentine i guess

#51 Don’t be silly, that’s not right! Don’t you know anything?

#52 building a home with you

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