這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律324Please respect copyright.PENANAvGPXbh2HWo
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移324Please respect copyright.PENANAuFw6NADiiR
說到平衡 我找不到好用的磅秤324Please respect copyright.PENANAwWvGC62KlM
Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡324Please respect copyright.PENANARaGQnzSi6N
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逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說324Please respect copyright.PENANAs5FH85YRqR
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它324Please respect copyright.PENANALn1MAkzUnO
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析324Please respect copyright.PENANAqfIBxciHXm
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理324Please respect copyright.PENANAXDLTO90lbc
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能324Please respect copyright.PENANALeKdIzyBSN
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人324Please respect copyright.PENANAeKktuf46aH
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我324Please respect copyright.PENANA2PNgS8iG6b
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭324Please respect copyright.PENANAq31CqFtV1I
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞324Please respect copyright.PENANAaE9Ca6q6RK
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得324Please respect copyright.PENANA5HrowLJtlM
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本324Please respect copyright.PENANApm22cFexBK
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭324Please respect copyright.PENANA5RrsdbB06a
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲324Please respect copyright.PENANAzeYb3bNI5y
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己324Please respect copyright.PENANAYG092btMnw
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去324Please respect copyright.PENANAiGwUiKUyvJ
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?324Please respect copyright.PENANAIR1eJpCvss
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說324Please respect copyright.PENANAEa7ihvg88y
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它324Please respect copyright.PENANAwJGUV3AE7o
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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如果一張嘴能將正義伸張324Please respect copyright.PENANAL18vMLJyCr
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待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管324Please respect copyright.PENANAUd8jmWmCDo
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命324Please respect copyright.PENANAeG0HvTZLlg
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?324Please respect copyright.PENANABrP98Hd4GX
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說324Please respect copyright.PENANAoXLjuybnez
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它324Please respect copyright.PENANAuWvAmc9DYC
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?324Please respect copyright.PENANAbI7x1Tea2B
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說324Please respect copyright.PENANA3F04LuuFLi
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它324Please respect copyright.PENANAEGtoXvd2IH
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude ! ( x 3)
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806324Please respect copyright.PENANAP4tEgKufuw