這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它563Please respect copyright.PENANAub8fSpNzs2
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它563Please respect copyright.PENANAu1Gn8NFTzq
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說563Please respect copyright.PENANA9HJ5DI5zgh
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它563Please respect copyright.PENANAoRuE05mRNg
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?563Please respect copyright.PENANAvh1rlVsGBS
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說563Please respect copyright.PENANADAePr73cAa
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它563Please respect copyright.PENANAC72xkP5Vlr
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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