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No Plagiarism!DXEzn6ThOGBamyNbj4KMposted on PENANA 我琴日用咗成晚嚟諗Verse同埋份詞,結果拖到三四點先瞓,不過終於叫做完成咗首歌,雖然好攰,不過呢啲,係咪就係追夢必須付出嘅代價呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection138PENANAFF0Nex90CR 維尼
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「我加咗段Pre-Chorus,然後歌詞我都寫好咗,我想喺Chorus-2 同 Chorus-3之間,加段solo,你哋覺得點呀?」我問。8964 copyright protection138PENANAkFqhnXieEQ 維尼
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「我覺得唔好。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAqL2paRUoxg 維尼
「比起激情嘅Solo,中間呢個位應該要靜落嚟。」太一講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAN3Vrd7UsNc 維尼
「可以唔使去到咁爆,因為《懶》同《自動勝利》唔同,唔係嗰種一齊打怪嘅感覺。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAxx7TDfqWcK 維尼
「咁呀⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection138PENANAX5AduYqZHO 維尼
「不如加段橋啦。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAgO1ksKL6S5 維尼
「加段Bridge?」8964 copyright protection138PENANAneOiO7e4bV 維尼
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橋,即係Bridge,係一段新嘅段落,通常旋律會同Verse或者Chorus唔一樣,連編曲都會有少少分別。8964 copyright protection138PENANAoBJsTDlT9L 維尼
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「咁我再諗下啦。」我有少少唔開心,估唔到捱咗成晚夜,佢哋都唔滿意我首歌。8964 copyright protection138PENANAudB1j4oI6A 維尼
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Sky拎起我份歌詞。8964 copyright protection138PENANAQkI989a682 維尼
「阿錘,你寫詞嘅時候有冇諗住邊個呀?」8964 copyright protection138PENANAkhvWqfR1tN 維尼
「冇呀。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAvMv1jzxOd5 維尼
「因為我睇唔明究竟個『你』係邊個。」8964 copyright protection138PENANA1gXHsjw2qs 維尼
「即係點呀?」8964 copyright protection138PENANAcU2iHicmno 維尼
「我都唔識講添⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection138PENANAIH0tI0larK 維尼
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樂少都拎起份詞睇。8964 copyright protection138PENANA3l6OhDikvD 維尼
「好似一開始係鬧緊人,但係之後又『只想唱個畀你聽』,咁你究竟係咪鬧緊人,定係你想唱畀人聽。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAgel7CQPcca 維尼
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呢一刻,我開始覺得自己嘅作詞能力真係好差,竟然連寫歌嘅對象都冇好好咁諗清楚,連樂少同Sky都發現到嘅問題,我竟然會完全諗過,枉我讀咗成年文學科,真係好唔甘心⋯⋯8964 copyright protection138PENANAxH2WnwLKwP 維尼
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然後太一拎咗份詞睇,佢認真咁思考咗一陣。8964 copyright protection138PENANAFA69OuQUkX 維尼
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「我明喎。有時候我哋都可以懶理一個人,但係佢都可以係一個你好在乎嘅人,你好想證明畀佢睇,但係佢就一直覺得你玩玩吓,覺得你好懶,所以更加想話畀佢聽『我懶到只想夾足一世Band』。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAHdEKdIRxSM 維尼
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「好似又合理喎」樂少講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAWVx8sa7rto 維尼
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「我諗⋯⋯係掛。」因為我真係冇認真諗過歌詞裡面嘅邏輯通唔通,我只係想寫低一啲感覺,反而太一竟然解得通係令我驚訝嘅,不過佢講到好身同感受咁,太一會唔會都有啲面對緊嘅問題呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection138PENANANkj4DCj1n0 維尼
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「其實我真係唔知自己寫咗啲咩,我只係想話畀覺得我懶嘅人聽,冇錯我認我係懶,但係我想夾Band,我想努力咁夾Band!」我補充。8964 copyright protection138PENANA9dYBeFWeaO 維尼
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「不過呢,其實啲歌詞都幾好笑吖,有種小學寫週記唔夠字數,然後喺篇文入面話『今天要做功課,但字數不夠,還差三十多個字⋯⋯』呢種。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAMlP4PxkZwQ 維尼
「吓?!」8964 copyright protection138PENANAXsNSFTAdca 維尼
「冇錯,就係呢種感覺,阿錘你真係好懶呀。」8964 copyright protection138PENANACnRSe9lUvE 維尼
雖然畀樂少話似小學雞功課有啲不爽,但係我好似明白究竟我寫咗啲咩出嚟,我突然之間好似畀佢哋刺激到,已經有方法寫段Bridge!我喺份譜上面寫低咗一段歌詞,之後畀佢哋睇。8964 copyright protection138PENANAAfXbe4Vytl 維尼
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「好喎,呢個做法應該幾好笑㗎。」太一講8964 copyright protection138PENANAE96YDZO7wc 維尼
「如果呢段靜哂,然後我哋一齊拍手打Beat好冇呀?」Sky講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAEfT5s0dLG3 維尼
「好似《We will rock you》咁?正喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection138PENANACcFhM8YbNE 維尼
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「不如試吓夾一次先!」我興奮咁講。8964 copyright protection138PENANA3E6vvMuBLZ 維尼
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「~人懶至會更有大志,至會懶得計較~」8964 copyright protection138PENANAJHw7KyXF8p 維尼
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「~我懶到呢刻唱歌lalala~」8964 copyright protection138PENANAlBf6ZgMl05 維尼
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唱到Bridge嘅時候,我哋就停哂手上嘅樂器,只係拍手,加上簡單嘅Bass Drum。8964 copyright protection138PENANANfm4ob0S9g 維尼
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「~懶人也有自我的修養,訓教亦會去冚被。係呀,我認我係懶,下句嘅內容?唱唱下就副歌啦~」8964 copyright protection138PENANAeiQURC5onH 維尼
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結果又真係幾好Feel。果然靜一靜落嚟,比較適合我嘅懶人之道。8964 copyright protection138PENANA8IQJCAMO9f 維尼
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「~我懶到只想夾足一世Band~」8964 copyright protection138PENANA0waT8X6aLk 維尼
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「阿錘,入Pre-Chorus嗰度使唔使畀多一拍你呀?好似有啲急喎。」太一問我。8964 copyright protection138PENANASuEQw0D5gJ 維尼
「即係變5拍4?可以咩?」8964 copyright protection138PENANAVZfUD1K63v 維尼
「我諗冇所謂嘅,拍子係死㗎嘛。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAr1MiSr2y1F 維尼
「既然你作為鼓手都咁講,我都想有一拍抖一抖可以換氣。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAXUb62NkVYk 維尼
「副歌完之後,好冇加多幾個Bar唱啦啦啦呀?」樂少問。8964 copyright protection138PENANAY6bAv4rPXk 維尼
「我贊成呀。」太一同Sky都贊成。8964 copyright protection138PENANAzluvZ4dkPM 維尼
「因為太Chur係咪?」我問佢哋。8964 copyright protection138PENANA5J1BDSTOLv 維尼
「係呀。」8964 copyright protection138PENANA4R7zbzv7fd 維尼
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果然Full Band試一次之後先知問題,因為玩Pop Punk嘅關係,我喺寫歌嘅時候揀咗一個好快嘅Tempo,而且樂句之間好緊湊,首歌就變到好急同好Chur,的確要一啲時間去令首歌「慢落嚟」。8964 copyright protection138PENANAXdbicEUNJB 維尼
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「好呀。」我答返佢哋。8964 copyright protection138PENANAb9yIVZxuv0 維尼
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經過咗幾日嘅練習,《懶》已經準備好,而聽日就係聯校教師晚宴,要幫老師練嘅又搞掂咗,我哋自己首歌亦都好完美,真係非常順利,不過咁順利係咪好事呢,我有種不祥嘅預感。8964 copyright protection138PENANAOPT5Tkd7me 維尼
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因為今日係放聖誕假前嘅一日,我哋嘅班會主席朱傑就話想開個聖誕Party,所以成班就好即興咁Lunch Time出去買嘢食同飲品,我同樂少就被安排咗放學去拎Pizza,Sky就好似跟咗班女仔去整Decoration⋯⋯係因為佢讀VA定純粹係靚仔嘅關係呢?8964 copyright protection138PENANA5Q4HxSDfyU 維尼
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「喂間Pizza鋪喺邊㗎?」我問樂少。8964 copyright protection138PENANAqAMzk9C490 維尼
「前面之嘛。」樂少答。8964 copyright protection138PENANA6svMC1f9A7 維尼
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我哋去到Pizza鋪,竟然見到Emma拎住盒外賣。8964 copyright protection138PENANAbOhywE6ENt 維尼
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「Emma?你又喺度嘅?」我問Emma。8964 copyright protection138PENANAJRPRU5v9G3 維尼
「係你哋呀,我哋班搞聖誕Party呀,所以我就嚟拎外賣囉。」Emma答我。8964 copyright protection138PENANAs88RuT2jU4 維尼
「得你自己咋?搞錯呀,點可以叫你一個女仔拎Pizza㗎。」樂少好緊張咁講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAeoEIdwsFt3 維尼
「唔緊要啦,唔係Pizza嚟㗎,係外賣仔送漏咗啲雞翼咋,同埋佢哋好多人都要補課呀。」Emma微微笑咁答。8964 copyright protection138PENANAxbRXLhQwIe 維尼
「我幫你拎吖。」樂少搶咗Emma盒雞翼。8964 copyright protection138PENANAefsDCY6fPH 維尼
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Emma有啲推搪,但係都係畀樂少拎咗盒外賣。8964 copyright protection138PENANApAUS0ICILS 維尼
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「阿錘,我哋返去先嗱,你拎完Pizza自己返嚟啦。」樂少同我講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAvKbHBsxVQF 維尼
「我哋5盒Pizza喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection138PENANADPlEGFYhGx 維尼
「我相信你得嘅。」樂少打哂眼色,用求緊我嘅眼神同我講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAcIxcOVkGCj 維尼
「好⋯⋯」我死魚眼咁講,係人都知樂少想同Emma獨處,咁做兄弟嘅,捱下義氣囉。8964 copyright protection138PENANA5ThqwubwF2 維尼
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於是我就自己喺到等拎Pizza。8964 copyright protection138PENANAMBbR4v0ZnW 維尼
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Emma同樂少兩個一齊行返學校。8964 copyright protection138PENANAt6Vp9y0Qj1 維尼
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「阿錘得唔得㗎?不如你返去幫佢啦。」8964 copyright protection138PENANA2llqX52zNX 維尼
「唔使啦,阿錘好大力㗎。」8964 copyright protection138PENANAk4ncJwcdYg 維尼
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兩個人好似冇咩話題,路上伴隨佢哋嘅係尷尬同安靜嘅空氣。8964 copyright protection138PENANA8bSxrUJOZt 維尼
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「係呢⋯⋯」佢哋兩個同時開口。8964 copyright protection138PENANAo7gOfl4Opa 維尼
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「你講先吖⋯⋯」樂少講。8964 copyright protection138PENANAU5iIYk7bzn 維尼
「你係咪為咗我先去夾Band㗎?」Emma問樂少。8964 copyright protection138PENANA3zdzaIMsx4 維尼
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