x
No Plagiarism!KxtjmjbFDSsqwjxeqDP9posted on PENANA 我琴日用咗成晚嚟諗Verse同埋份詞,結果拖到三四點先瞓,不過終於叫做完成咗首歌,雖然好攰,不過呢啲,係咪就係追夢必須付出嘅代價呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection92PENANA1gBd6dAeNZ 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANASxuqFYTmZF
8964 copyright protection92PENANAgPRaJc6GBw 維尼
「我加咗段Pre-Chorus,然後歌詞我都寫好咗,我想喺Chorus-2 同 Chorus-3之間,加段solo,你哋覺得點呀?」我問。8964 copyright protection92PENANAOFudCbqVSb 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAAj1GJoRhtw
8964 copyright protection92PENANA5MGtzs6hQJ 維尼
「我覺得唔好。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAFwURGTjrcK 維尼
「比起激情嘅Solo,中間呢個位應該要靜落嚟。」太一講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAoXjWXDZ3eG 維尼
「可以唔使去到咁爆,因為《懶》同《自動勝利》唔同,唔係嗰種一齊打怪嘅感覺。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAcnlYraknxX 維尼
「咁呀⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection92PENANALZpJGUUuJI 維尼
「不如加段橋啦。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAxu8j7iFHR8 維尼
「加段Bridge?」8964 copyright protection92PENANAFL4MgvY1Mw 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANADzbK5mj7xK
8964 copyright protection92PENANAl1NehDa7oD 維尼
橋,即係Bridge,係一段新嘅段落,通常旋律會同Verse或者Chorus唔一樣,連編曲都會有少少分別。8964 copyright protection92PENANAoWO1WDKb4C 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAmoeR2f2KmL
8964 copyright protection92PENANAH8z4PNAwCh 維尼
「咁我再諗下啦。」我有少少唔開心,估唔到捱咗成晚夜,佢哋都唔滿意我首歌。8964 copyright protection92PENANAs6BK5sg4I4 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAvHUjECFlDh
8964 copyright protection92PENANA7WfPIC3zVj 維尼
Sky拎起我份歌詞。8964 copyright protection92PENANAtXuTrXrS2Q 維尼
「阿錘,你寫詞嘅時候有冇諗住邊個呀?」8964 copyright protection92PENANAuh3tzo5mOS 維尼
「冇呀。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAH8GV3hXOsG 維尼
「因為我睇唔明究竟個『你』係邊個。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAJvBSIXD1qt 維尼
「即係點呀?」8964 copyright protection92PENANAvktp9jhxhW 維尼
「我都唔識講添⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection92PENANAgRRWUnnheI 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAtfgleBIsUA
8964 copyright protection92PENANAR8BYeVseVx 維尼
樂少都拎起份詞睇。8964 copyright protection92PENANAncBG81h3pH 維尼
「好似一開始係鬧緊人,但係之後又『只想唱個畀你聽』,咁你究竟係咪鬧緊人,定係你想唱畀人聽。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAAUGOAMtSlM 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANA0gt5hybtPs
8964 copyright protection92PENANAwKDd3DNcmP 維尼
呢一刻,我開始覺得自己嘅作詞能力真係好差,竟然連寫歌嘅對象都冇好好咁諗清楚,連樂少同Sky都發現到嘅問題,我竟然會完全諗過,枉我讀咗成年文學科,真係好唔甘心⋯⋯8964 copyright protection92PENANA6CBQ8htFiS 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANA9mJpbvvNmE
8964 copyright protection92PENANAastOaKVTWv 維尼
然後太一拎咗份詞睇,佢認真咁思考咗一陣。8964 copyright protection92PENANA0DPQyFDLIH 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAFpSVFbJQ57
8964 copyright protection92PENANASc1ZsPBTDd 維尼
「我明喎。有時候我哋都可以懶理一個人,但係佢都可以係一個你好在乎嘅人,你好想證明畀佢睇,但係佢就一直覺得你玩玩吓,覺得你好懶,所以更加想話畀佢聽『我懶到只想夾足一世Band』。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAlEQ59Y9jy4 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAjQk5ZSW23L
8964 copyright protection92PENANA7r1ld2fUUo 維尼
「好似又合理喎」樂少講。8964 copyright protection92PENANADHxhalfvGi 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANACNTqme86Z5
8964 copyright protection92PENANAycSPG2repb 維尼
「我諗⋯⋯係掛。」因為我真係冇認真諗過歌詞裡面嘅邏輯通唔通,我只係想寫低一啲感覺,反而太一竟然解得通係令我驚訝嘅,不過佢講到好身同感受咁,太一會唔會都有啲面對緊嘅問題呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection92PENANAUMkLIpEJ4I 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANA9xLxY3IcRP
8964 copyright protection92PENANA2oTZ8SGsRk 維尼
「其實我真係唔知自己寫咗啲咩,我只係想話畀覺得我懶嘅人聽,冇錯我認我係懶,但係我想夾Band,我想努力咁夾Band!」我補充。8964 copyright protection92PENANAnndDDstonZ 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAe1dKZ4u10N
8964 copyright protection92PENANAIEYLtrm6v7 維尼
「不過呢,其實啲歌詞都幾好笑吖,有種小學寫週記唔夠字數,然後喺篇文入面話『今天要做功課,但字數不夠,還差三十多個字⋯⋯』呢種。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAKuChRVWto0 維尼
「吓?!」8964 copyright protection92PENANAJKUO8zxmNX 維尼
「冇錯,就係呢種感覺,阿錘你真係好懶呀。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAWmac8orRiQ 維尼
雖然畀樂少話似小學雞功課有啲不爽,但係我好似明白究竟我寫咗啲咩出嚟,我突然之間好似畀佢哋刺激到,已經有方法寫段Bridge!我喺份譜上面寫低咗一段歌詞,之後畀佢哋睇。8964 copyright protection92PENANAtOCOg8sEmH 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANARGCfSFC0Wy
8964 copyright protection92PENANATQeVlRUOlq 維尼
「好喎,呢個做法應該幾好笑㗎。」太一講8964 copyright protection92PENANAmQSCH37Lwh 維尼
「如果呢段靜哂,然後我哋一齊拍手打Beat好冇呀?」Sky講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAAbIJLkhdme 維尼
「好似《We will rock you》咁?正喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAtKwXSrfH2R 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAR0Tcx3c8np
8964 copyright protection92PENANAR0wca5bqzd 維尼
「不如試吓夾一次先!」我興奮咁講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAavlc1F8FUv 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAVdwm0qAhdm
8964 copyright protection92PENANAqq7233IuPc 維尼
「~人懶至會更有大志,至會懶得計較~」8964 copyright protection92PENANAuBq852XaUp 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAFUE0NxGc6L
8964 copyright protection92PENANA2AQeXxnzg0 維尼
「~我懶到呢刻唱歌lalala~」8964 copyright protection92PENANAvFArdNSYus 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAkyG1krg4y9
8964 copyright protection92PENANAdsy3KU4U9D 維尼
唱到Bridge嘅時候,我哋就停哂手上嘅樂器,只係拍手,加上簡單嘅Bass Drum。8964 copyright protection92PENANAWJPIzkkqBc 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAPuxKj9M6kf
8964 copyright protection92PENANAg9CcKWYT0f 維尼
「~懶人也有自我的修養,訓教亦會去冚被。係呀,我認我係懶,下句嘅內容?唱唱下就副歌啦~」8964 copyright protection92PENANAWIZhiDanAT 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAvgwHtW0oOv
8964 copyright protection92PENANAX5ag29MmZn 維尼
結果又真係幾好Feel。果然靜一靜落嚟,比較適合我嘅懶人之道。8964 copyright protection92PENANAeEOV15iON7 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAHT2W3mJzCZ
8964 copyright protection92PENANAkSLVdlWqFX 維尼
「~我懶到只想夾足一世Band~」8964 copyright protection92PENANA4u5sCrCVE5 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAz2OT3Ij47m
8964 copyright protection92PENANAQVZ1ZUIAgW 維尼
「阿錘,入Pre-Chorus嗰度使唔使畀多一拍你呀?好似有啲急喎。」太一問我。8964 copyright protection92PENANAfI2QjKI0Ct 維尼
「即係變5拍4?可以咩?」8964 copyright protection92PENANABktnyVLnff 維尼
「我諗冇所謂嘅,拍子係死㗎嘛。」8964 copyright protection92PENANACYK7m0EgFt 維尼
「既然你作為鼓手都咁講,我都想有一拍抖一抖可以換氣。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAlCr7NwntaD 維尼
「副歌完之後,好冇加多幾個Bar唱啦啦啦呀?」樂少問。8964 copyright protection92PENANAwvfiiUcVCd 維尼
「我贊成呀。」太一同Sky都贊成。8964 copyright protection92PENANAVjp5EeDjgz 維尼
「因為太Chur係咪?」我問佢哋。8964 copyright protection92PENANA7F7hXUZQjY 維尼
「係呀。」8964 copyright protection92PENANApS1XhI6J0r 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAWLmlY2DqvW
8964 copyright protection92PENANAwHZKp7RUmA 維尼
果然Full Band試一次之後先知問題,因為玩Pop Punk嘅關係,我喺寫歌嘅時候揀咗一個好快嘅Tempo,而且樂句之間好緊湊,首歌就變到好急同好Chur,的確要一啲時間去令首歌「慢落嚟」。8964 copyright protection92PENANA3tsmy8Flgw 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANA5XP0TL70iJ
8964 copyright protection92PENANA7Q1RqTWuJy 維尼
「好呀。」我答返佢哋。8964 copyright protection92PENANAOtP4lyWLMM 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANALEqzRyE1xw
8964 copyright protection92PENANAZhkHr2sFha 維尼
----------------------------------------------8964 copyright protection92PENANA6EpBIS6prz 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAhnkUmNHb7D
8964 copyright protection92PENANA1aspY6SltK 維尼
2013年12月20日8964 copyright protection92PENANALGl4Kqwolh 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAcBNtEF0wTi
8964 copyright protection92PENANAjzcID8GgUI 維尼
經過咗幾日嘅練習,《懶》已經準備好,而聽日就係聯校教師晚宴,要幫老師練嘅又搞掂咗,我哋自己首歌亦都好完美,真係非常順利,不過咁順利係咪好事呢,我有種不祥嘅預感。8964 copyright protection92PENANAYg8lHQVoq3 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAm9YLUfRpqj
8964 copyright protection92PENANA1utz78eSUx 維尼
因為今日係放聖誕假前嘅一日,我哋嘅班會主席朱傑就話想開個聖誕Party,所以成班就好即興咁Lunch Time出去買嘢食同飲品,我同樂少就被安排咗放學去拎Pizza,Sky就好似跟咗班女仔去整Decoration⋯⋯係因為佢讀VA定純粹係靚仔嘅關係呢?8964 copyright protection92PENANA3zCQqWopt0 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAj1zJ5IN5RU
8964 copyright protection92PENANAxfqqSsztyS 維尼
「喂間Pizza鋪喺邊㗎?」我問樂少。8964 copyright protection92PENANALc2R7VktZU 維尼
「前面之嘛。」樂少答。8964 copyright protection92PENANAAgbygRZLES 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANATRMM4F0LAu
8964 copyright protection92PENANAMbMDEgvAnV 維尼
我哋去到Pizza鋪,竟然見到Emma拎住盒外賣。8964 copyright protection92PENANAWVsgIolvNr 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAc20FVENC4F
8964 copyright protection92PENANAfqjguOjYhM 維尼
「Emma?你又喺度嘅?」我問Emma。8964 copyright protection92PENANAW8ViS0VUSo 維尼
「係你哋呀,我哋班搞聖誕Party呀,所以我就嚟拎外賣囉。」Emma答我。8964 copyright protection92PENANAPzFHdFIOuT 維尼
「得你自己咋?搞錯呀,點可以叫你一個女仔拎Pizza㗎。」樂少好緊張咁講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAcv2P3RqKBM 維尼
「唔緊要啦,唔係Pizza嚟㗎,係外賣仔送漏咗啲雞翼咋,同埋佢哋好多人都要補課呀。」Emma微微笑咁答。8964 copyright protection92PENANAvTmqm9X3GF 維尼
「我幫你拎吖。」樂少搶咗Emma盒雞翼。8964 copyright protection92PENANA3Vxdx7i4DH 維尼
8964 copyright protection92PENANA8O6vnIcIee 維尼
Emma有啲推搪,但係都係畀樂少拎咗盒外賣。8964 copyright protection92PENANAhePkYBxKgu 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAuQSHpBa0WL
8964 copyright protection92PENANAO5F57CQBaa 維尼
「阿錘,我哋返去先嗱,你拎完Pizza自己返嚟啦。」樂少同我講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAX4oaDvF49K 維尼
「我哋5盒Pizza喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection92PENANA50TBc2X4NR 維尼
「我相信你得嘅。」樂少打哂眼色,用求緊我嘅眼神同我講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAkE8ZYJ2eNb 維尼
「好⋯⋯」我死魚眼咁講,係人都知樂少想同Emma獨處,咁做兄弟嘅,捱下義氣囉。8964 copyright protection92PENANABkwhsU3RV6 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAXJJlr7tXmb
8964 copyright protection92PENANAyjmlUigodU 維尼
於是我就自己喺到等拎Pizza。8964 copyright protection92PENANAfZP7gaBe7w 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAeeVDgefUbp
8964 copyright protection92PENANAwkJyIdMugR 維尼
----------------------------------------------8964 copyright protection92PENANAoBU8m3Bt5A 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAKOcfDUV0Hr
8964 copyright protection92PENANA7aLYVCOjTi 維尼
Emma同樂少兩個一齊行返學校。8964 copyright protection92PENANAM2g6I7IeNt 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAiAwHS24kKe
8964 copyright protection92PENANAB3l0PjZyBm 維尼
「阿錘得唔得㗎?不如你返去幫佢啦。」8964 copyright protection92PENANAcUKC5yE8t4 維尼
「唔使啦,阿錘好大力㗎。」8964 copyright protection92PENANASa209e243F 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAOzWhQtqpw0
8964 copyright protection92PENANAlKwS6HteHM 維尼
兩個人好似冇咩話題,路上伴隨佢哋嘅係尷尬同安靜嘅空氣。8964 copyright protection92PENANAKcBm5zxMcz 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAG6t1YJjRkQ
8964 copyright protection92PENANAt7i3ouPkfs 維尼
「係呢⋯⋯」佢哋兩個同時開口。8964 copyright protection92PENANAFfNMFzuDbF 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAHId4kghCpi
8964 copyright protection92PENANAin7e1bodr6 維尼
「你講先吖⋯⋯」樂少講。8964 copyright protection92PENANAW1glxF40Tf 維尼
「你係咪為咗我先去夾Band㗎?」Emma問樂少。8964 copyright protection92PENANArKOYnhMayv 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAWcdw0GhAsH
8964 copyright protection92PENANA04hXYvClRA 維尼
(Tbc.)8964 copyright protection92PENANAPzEsSoelLt 維尼
96Please respect copyright.PENANAzdydG3r8B9
8964 copyright protection92PENANA4g68AxXLTE 維尼
18.219.47.115
ns18.219.47.115da2