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No Plagiarism!6ytb8dwHl1Sed2HkN81mposted on PENANA 我琴日用咗成晚嚟諗Verse同埋份詞,結果拖到三四點先瞓,不過終於叫做完成咗首歌,雖然好攰,不過呢啲,係咪就係追夢必須付出嘅代價呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection201PENANAado2OD2AyS 維尼
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「我加咗段Pre-Chorus,然後歌詞我都寫好咗,我想喺Chorus-2 同 Chorus-3之間,加段solo,你哋覺得點呀?」我問。8964 copyright protection201PENANA0rbi3xiN0O 維尼
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「我覺得唔好。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection201PENANABvHhp3S4Fm 維尼
「比起激情嘅Solo,中間呢個位應該要靜落嚟。」太一講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAjyUeag96KH 維尼
「可以唔使去到咁爆,因為《懶》同《自動勝利》唔同,唔係嗰種一齊打怪嘅感覺。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection201PENANA933KXoUkZw 維尼
「咁呀⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection201PENANAH63HTbi9AP 維尼
「不如加段橋啦。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAY10WBe26o7 維尼
「加段Bridge?」8964 copyright protection201PENANAYfj1ixVk2k 維尼
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橋,即係Bridge,係一段新嘅段落,通常旋律會同Verse或者Chorus唔一樣,連編曲都會有少少分別。8964 copyright protection201PENANA0LUEwKL5DZ 維尼
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「咁我再諗下啦。」我有少少唔開心,估唔到捱咗成晚夜,佢哋都唔滿意我首歌。8964 copyright protection201PENANAzNBA0Pz1n7 維尼
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Sky拎起我份歌詞。8964 copyright protection201PENANAz1X2Fxl9rV 維尼
「阿錘,你寫詞嘅時候有冇諗住邊個呀?」8964 copyright protection201PENANA9cs3rLGftZ 維尼
「冇呀。」8964 copyright protection201PENANArl86KIDGof 維尼
「因為我睇唔明究竟個『你』係邊個。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAOAoDSm12pU 維尼
「即係點呀?」8964 copyright protection201PENANAwQhQffmbuN 維尼
「我都唔識講添⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection201PENANASEzjeATpHy 維尼
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樂少都拎起份詞睇。8964 copyright protection201PENANAjea9ekKfLv 維尼
「好似一開始係鬧緊人,但係之後又『只想唱個畀你聽』,咁你究竟係咪鬧緊人,定係你想唱畀人聽。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAGrrdXJ6P3y 維尼
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呢一刻,我開始覺得自己嘅作詞能力真係好差,竟然連寫歌嘅對象都冇好好咁諗清楚,連樂少同Sky都發現到嘅問題,我竟然會完全諗過,枉我讀咗成年文學科,真係好唔甘心⋯⋯8964 copyright protection201PENANAKiP2Jek4V8 維尼
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然後太一拎咗份詞睇,佢認真咁思考咗一陣。8964 copyright protection201PENANAxWbe6OynWd 維尼
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「我明喎。有時候我哋都可以懶理一個人,但係佢都可以係一個你好在乎嘅人,你好想證明畀佢睇,但係佢就一直覺得你玩玩吓,覺得你好懶,所以更加想話畀佢聽『我懶到只想夾足一世Band』。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAaHsISFhmp0 維尼
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「好似又合理喎」樂少講。8964 copyright protection201PENANA1s0WRwnUp2 維尼
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「我諗⋯⋯係掛。」因為我真係冇認真諗過歌詞裡面嘅邏輯通唔通,我只係想寫低一啲感覺,反而太一竟然解得通係令我驚訝嘅,不過佢講到好身同感受咁,太一會唔會都有啲面對緊嘅問題呢⋯⋯8964 copyright protection201PENANAYeFz8ua9Xr 維尼
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「其實我真係唔知自己寫咗啲咩,我只係想話畀覺得我懶嘅人聽,冇錯我認我係懶,但係我想夾Band,我想努力咁夾Band!」我補充。8964 copyright protection201PENANA8pEzDBatg9 維尼
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「不過呢,其實啲歌詞都幾好笑吖,有種小學寫週記唔夠字數,然後喺篇文入面話『今天要做功課,但字數不夠,還差三十多個字⋯⋯』呢種。」樂少講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAUIUXkjJWRr 維尼
「吓?!」8964 copyright protection201PENANASYrkud7QMy 維尼
「冇錯,就係呢種感覺,阿錘你真係好懶呀。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAhst9xCFKeD 維尼
雖然畀樂少話似小學雞功課有啲不爽,但係我好似明白究竟我寫咗啲咩出嚟,我突然之間好似畀佢哋刺激到,已經有方法寫段Bridge!我喺份譜上面寫低咗一段歌詞,之後畀佢哋睇。8964 copyright protection201PENANA3tp9mNFHrM 維尼
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「好喎,呢個做法應該幾好笑㗎。」太一講8964 copyright protection201PENANANIF0MZXRkM 維尼
「如果呢段靜晒,然後我哋一齊拍手打Beat好冇呀?」Sky講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAyxMWBNvmqw 維尼
「好似《We will rock you》咁?正喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAdqFnOYqKFr 維尼
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「不如試吓夾一次先!」我興奮咁講。8964 copyright protection201PENANABirbC2Gp9g 維尼
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「~人懶至會更有大志,至會懶得計較~」8964 copyright protection201PENANAgT1TItPGln 維尼
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「~我懶到呢刻唱歌lalala~」8964 copyright protection201PENANAK54Pe5yLHZ 維尼
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唱到Bridge嘅時候,我哋就停晒手上嘅樂器,只係拍手,加上簡單嘅Bass Drum。8964 copyright protection201PENANAybWnwZ5s8g 維尼
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「~懶人也有自我的修養,訓教亦會去冚被。係呀,我認我係懶,下句嘅內容?唱唱下就副歌啦~」8964 copyright protection201PENANAALKrE6c5ta 維尼
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結果又真係幾好Feel。果然靜一靜落嚟,比較適合我嘅懶人之道。8964 copyright protection201PENANABC3hYsceLK 維尼
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「~我懶到只想夾足一世Band~」8964 copyright protection201PENANAQ6CoeAfOo6 維尼
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「阿錘,入Pre-Chorus嗰度使唔使畀多一拍你呀?好似有啲急喎。」太一問我。8964 copyright protection201PENANA8WmqFvhMZ5 維尼
「即係變5拍4?可以咩?」8964 copyright protection201PENANATKmddWp28v 維尼
「我諗冇所謂嘅,拍子係死㗎嘛。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAugAoqtP6wJ 維尼
「既然你作為鼓手都咁講,我都想有一拍抖一抖可以換氣。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAQhWyxeoVni 維尼
「副歌完之後,好冇加多幾個Bar唱啦啦啦呀?」樂少問。8964 copyright protection201PENANAmqyGmjCslF 維尼
「我贊成呀。」太一同Sky都贊成。8964 copyright protection201PENANAK40wn6HeGT 維尼
「因為太Chur係咪?」我問佢哋。8964 copyright protection201PENANAg6zXy8TklQ 維尼
「係呀。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAUA3oYzUqzK 維尼
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果然Full Band試一次之後先知問題,因為玩Pop Punk嘅關係,我喺寫歌嘅時候揀咗一個好快嘅Tempo,而且樂句之間好緊湊,首歌就變到好急同好Chur,的確要一啲時間去令首歌「慢落嚟」。8964 copyright protection201PENANA9Hdi0ZJKHk 維尼
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「好呀。」我答返佢哋。205Please respect copyright.PENANAblxQhkpqIR
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經過咗幾日嘅練習,《懶》已經準備好,而聽日就係聯校教師晚宴,要幫老師練嘅又搞掂咗,我哋自己首歌亦都好完美,真係非常順利,不過咁順利係咪好事呢,我有種不祥嘅預感。8964 copyright protection201PENANADp5sb4Dftn 維尼
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因為今日係放聖誕假前嘅一日,我哋嘅班會主席朱傑就話想開個聖誕Party,所以成班就好即興咁Lunch Time出去買嘢食同飲品,我同樂少就被安排咗放學去拎Pizza,Sky就好似跟咗班女仔去整Decoration⋯⋯係因為佢讀VA定純粹係靚仔嘅關係呢?8964 copyright protection201PENANAyg1zVWx3x7 維尼
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「喂間Pizza鋪喺邊㗎?」我問樂少。8964 copyright protection201PENANAHnCzDksQcL 維尼
「前面之嘛。」樂少答。8964 copyright protection201PENANAXET7PWSrmy 維尼
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我哋去到Pizza鋪,竟然見到Emma拎住盒外賣。8964 copyright protection201PENANAPUCh718plr 維尼
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「Emma?你又喺度嘅?」我問Emma。8964 copyright protection201PENANAUrbUijJarf 維尼
「係你哋呀,我哋班搞聖誕Party呀,所以我就嚟拎外賣囉。」Emma答我。8964 copyright protection201PENANAxLCYYinf4X 維尼
「得你自己咋?搞錯呀,點可以叫你一個女仔拎Pizza㗎。」樂少好緊張咁講。8964 copyright protection201PENANArjOEHW4lnl 維尼
「唔緊要啦,唔係Pizza嚟㗎,係外賣仔送漏咗啲雞翼咋,同埋佢哋好多人都要補課呀。」Emma微微笑咁答。8964 copyright protection201PENANAURBq0StueI 維尼
「我幫你拎吖。」樂少搶咗Emma盒雞翼。8964 copyright protection201PENANAJi0XlHwEJN 維尼
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Emma有啲推搪,但係都係畀樂少拎咗盒外賣。8964 copyright protection201PENANAsOspV8m03s 維尼
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「阿錘,我哋返去先嗱,你拎完Pizza自己返嚟啦。」樂少同我講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAZBkxEIz2py 維尼
「我哋5盒Pizza喎!」我講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAOqHvoJVmSj 維尼
「我相信你得嘅。」樂少打晒眼色,用求緊我嘅眼神同我講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAQu8AfYihCn 維尼
「好⋯⋯」我死魚眼咁講,係人都知樂少想同Emma獨處,咁做兄弟嘅,捱下義氣囉。8964 copyright protection201PENANAZxTRLTqeTE 維尼
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於是我就自己喺到等拎Pizza。8964 copyright protection201PENANAUttULVtiAu 維尼
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Emma同樂少兩個一齊行返學校。8964 copyright protection201PENANA1FU24Af4qE 維尼
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「阿錘得唔得㗎?不如你返去幫佢啦。」8964 copyright protection201PENANABjk2pVZD77 維尼
「唔使啦,阿錘好大力㗎。」8964 copyright protection201PENANAHfzQzrI7Ra 維尼
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兩個人好似冇咩話題,路上伴隨佢哋嘅係尷尬同安靜嘅空氣。8964 copyright protection201PENANAFp8rWAXKev 維尼
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「係呢⋯⋯」佢哋兩個同時開口。8964 copyright protection201PENANAqmj7rahRZZ 維尼
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「你講先吖⋯⋯」樂少講。8964 copyright protection201PENANAaeFIlgE29m 維尼
「你係咪為咗我先去夾Band㗎?」Emma問樂少。8964 copyright protection201PENANAL80TXI3iub 維尼
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