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No Plagiarism!GiGD87Q59nlnIhjwhmVdposted on PENANA 經過一晚嘅通宵,我同樂少已經寫好咗份歌詞,以前無論溫書定打機,都冇試過一齊通頂,不過通頂寫歌詞又冇想像中咁攰。8964 copyright protection111PENANATQaAJE622C 維尼
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因為樂少本身對「啱音」呢件事唔在行,我用咗唔少時間教佢,例如點解《主能夠》點解唔可以填「主能夠」係因為音調唔同,再填就會變咗「~住撚究~」咁樣。有一啲歌詞可以接受「拗音」,例如「靈魂」唱做「『令』雲」、「流離」唱做「『漏』離」都可以接受,但係「鵝滿是快烙滴好耳痛」就唔可以。樂少都算學得快,唔使幾耐就明白,好快就冇咗「拗極都唔啱音」嘅問題,一齊傾好點寫之後,佢就填個大概內容,我就負責修飾,同埋改押韻,因為始終係比賽,押韻應該會加分。8964 copyright protection111PENANAfQKWj4grZY 維尼
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第二日,我哋又去到咗The Echo。呢排冇返學,用唔到音樂室嘅情況之下,我哋唯有去The Echo。8964 copyright protection111PENANAytsTgcPdVG 維尼
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太一同Sky對份詞都好滿意,睇嚟樂少嘅努力得到認同喇。8964 copyright protection111PENANAyHm1jb0q7m 維尼
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「樂少又寫得幾好喎,開頭嘅幾個反問都好有意思。」太一講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAPqLeYgH8eD 維尼
「係呢。阿錘都有幫吓手嘅。」樂少得戚咁講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAeFOlQXzRtB 維尼
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明明呢個用問句開場嘅方式係我諗嘅,不過冇所謂啦,只要首詞好嘅話,呢啲又算咩吖。8964 copyright protection111PENANAMagNfJPQWZ 維尼
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「雖然同我本身諗嘅畫面有啲唔同,不過都幾好,咁樣仲貼題咗。」Sky微微笑住咁講,「仲有阿錘你段Chorus都改得幾好,比之前個版本順咗。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAj3dGGcCewg 維尼
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因為之前我作嘅副歌,諗極都諗唔到啱音嘅詞,無奈之下就將曲跟住份詞嚟改,呢個就係自己作曲自己填詞嘅好處,可以隨便改旋律或者歌詞都得,但係Sky作嘅部分我就冇改過,因為一定要尊重作曲人嘅意願,除非有共識,唔係都唔應該改人哋嘅創作。如果其他人隨便改我嘅嘢,我都應該會唔開心,所以我就避免呢件事。8964 copyright protection111PENANAsMMYxa4ick 維尼
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今次首歌嘅編曲上面,太一做多咗好多細位,例如16分音符上面多咗好多編排,以前太一好習慣用3-Piece玩足首歌嘅7-8成,3-Piece即係大Bass Drum,Snare,Hi-Hat。但係今次做用多咗好多Tom,令鼓嘅編排更加立體。Sky就用咗有少少「飛機聲」嘅Flanger Effect彈,本身聽到Demo嘅時候,我腦海都覺得會用Flanger,今次同Sky嘅諗法同步咗。8964 copyright protection111PENANAiw29ossANx 維尼
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「咁我哋幾時拍埋條片呀?」太一問。8964 copyright protection111PENANAJvF6D0cNKH 維尼
「仲有時間,夾多幾次,然後返學校音樂室錄囉,反正都差唔多要補課。」我講。8964 copyright protection111PENANA8EFNWFuNZX 維尼
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隨住七月嘅完結,我哋都慢慢夾好咗首歌,同時補課嘅惡夢亦都好快要開始。8964 copyright protection111PENANAJVm6F0TRSh 維尼
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「占卜星相靈異與魔法學會」佢哋今日都有返到學校,原來甜豉油決定要參選學生會,佢算到學校下年會有麻煩事,所以佢一定要當選,唔係嘅話所有學生都會過好慘嘅一年。佢哋一早就返咗嚟學校準備,甜豉油會出任會長,而Simmy就會做內務副會長,另外仲有幾個同屆嘅同學參與,不過毛子蘭因為要做Head Prefect,而學校規定唔可以再做其他重要職務,所以就冇辦法做學生會。如果最後成功當選,「占卜星相靈異與魔法學會」就會由Simmy做新會長,毛子蘭做副會長。8964 copyright protection111PENANATtSQoApXH5 維尼
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「會長,你其實算到咩呀?」Simmy問甜豉油。8964 copyright protection111PENANAcno9xqSxDn 維尼
「我依家都唔知,不過選唔到就一定會有麻煩。」甜豉油講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAxrDD9FFYnS 維尼
「我都想選學生會呀⋯⋯」毛子蘭講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAUhJRGe6dOg 維尼
「冇辦法啦,小蘭你要做Head Prefect吖嘛。」Simmy講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAvUbvk8TUnB 維尼
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「但係我都會幫手㗎。」毛子蘭講,「係喎,知唔知仲有咩人會選學生會呀?」8964 copyright protection111PENANAvkBiuEElbb 維尼
「好似C班會有個內閣。」Simmy講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAIynPs2KcnL 維尼
「我信你哋會贏嘅,我哋上年做咗咁多活動。」毛子蘭好有信心講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAcRdq0bTv0Z 維尼
「未必⋯⋯今年,所有嘢都唔容易⋯⋯」甜豉油好嚴肅咁講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAf7RZnuZsdT 維尼
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VA室入面嘅同學都為中六嘅SBA趕工,因為要交兩份作品,而且時間好趕,所以要趁暑假做多啲。呢個時候,Sky就喺VA室開始畫漫畫。8964 copyright protection111PENANAQ5Rcg5CTHk 維尼
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「Sky你畫漫畫呀?」Emma問。8964 copyright protection111PENANAUCxXESPysH 維尼
「係呀。我一直都想試吓畫漫畫,我問咗潘sir都話冇問題。」8964 copyright protection111PENANA32gTudinpz 維尼
「你諗住畫成本呀?」8964 copyright protection111PENANAkXKbTWGfqj 維尼
「緊係唔係啦,我想畫幾頁咋。」Sky笑笑口咁講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAoe2Z0a0fXf 維尼
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Sky諗住可以用四格創作一個故事,而故事就用後設嘅方法,吐嘈自己嘅VA堂。8964 copyright protection111PENANAy4DEYectH0 維尼
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「Emma你啲陶瓷好似好咗好多喎。」Sky講。8964 copyright protection111PENANA2XFSLszMu7 維尼
「因為我一放假就跟咗個老師學,然後練咗好耐。」Emma講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAUuVB6En44Z 維尼
「我都想有份SBA做手工嘢呀。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAZ1UtDokjEk 維尼
「你都整陶瓷囉。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAnahLblsiEB 維尼
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「我唔啱整陶瓷呀,我又冇Emma你咁好耐性。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAhm3JiPUHM0 維尼
「係咩?」8964 copyright protection111PENANAY7gfcf6J1G 維尼
「吖。夠鐘啦,我要同『黑色西炒飯』佢哋拍比賽嘅錄影呀。」Sky之後就行咗去音樂室。8964 copyright protection111PENANAGOLgWpUKa6 維尼
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下晝嘅時候,我哋都嚟到咗音樂室,我同樂少補完地理之後就即刻嚟咗,而家等緊Sky,同補中史嘅太一。自從我開Turbo溫完地理嘅補考之後,我對地理嘅認識好似多咗好多,而家甚至有啲興趣聽書添。8964 copyright protection111PENANAf9ytpMcg6l 維尼
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冇幾耐之後,Sky同太一都到咗。為咗今日,樂少特登問人借咗部單反相機拍,會唔會太誇張呀,我本身諗住用電話拍就算。8964 copyright protection111PENANAz2Ujk4BZlm 維尼
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「我特登借嚟㗎,睇吓點set先⋯⋯」樂少似乎唔係好識用。8964 copyright protection111PENANALHzxlvVK8S 維尼
「拍成點唔緊要啦,但係錄音先最緊要,相機收音好唔好㗎?」我問。8964 copyright protection111PENANArXY20AW4Y7 維尼
「應該OK掛,啲人演唱會都收得到。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAOz1syqakQ4 維尼
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對拍攝一竅不通嘅我,唯有信樂少啦。8964 copyright protection111PENANADM7XMbwMu0 維尼
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「好,阿錘企前啲。」樂少仲搵咗枝電筒幫我塊面打燈。8964 copyright protection111PENANAkD7HthqlVK 維尼
「咁得唔得呀?」8964 copyright protection111PENANAs9J1tqJ1CH 維尼
「OK。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAHlQpv4uPO3 維尼
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其實拍成點我就冇咩所謂,只係驚影響咗首歌啫,我對首歌都幾有信心㗎嘛。我哋一次過錄咗幾Take,樂少負責檢責畫面,我哋三個就聽邊個Take最好。8964 copyright protection111PENANAD0Ys3YBNXX 維尼
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「第2個Take最好,我打得好有Feel。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAE4uX0YtIQ7 維尼
「但係我有個位甩咗呀。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAU8p65Tc5EP 維尼
「我就鍾意第3 Take,大家都最放鬆。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAr8zBqy1kzy 維尼
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然後因為冇共識,我哋又再拍咗幾個Take,終於都揀咗一個大家都滿意嘅版本,應該係第12 Take,我唱到聲都沙晒。8964 copyright protection111PENANAh4YMGgFUCC 維尼
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「樂少交畀你剪片,同埋交去報名啦,條Link我send咗畀你。」我講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAxHMyGj8ym5 維尼
「點解唔叫太一剪呀?佢讀ICT喎。」8964 copyright protection111PENANAd362gkr7xt 維尼
「ICT又唔係讀電影,唔好有電腦就關ICT事啦。」太一講。8964 copyright protection111PENANAUyiSvaydQs 維尼
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冇辦法啦,因為我又唔識搞呢啲嘢,Sky都應該唔會搞,至於太一我就驚佢會報錯名,所以只可以靠樂少。8964 copyright protection111PENANAu7kdX0Ku37 維尼
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就係咁,我哋就成功喺8月15號之前交咗首《選擇⋯⋯多一次》。8964 copyright protection111PENANAt11iK8Ya4w 維尼
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