作品:《魚魚創挑第三期》
類型:短文、新詩
作者:PENANA各路人馬 ▶ ▶ ▶ 連結
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▌篇141 喜歡的人24Please respect copyright.PENANArGEJY7qrqV
▌類型 短文24Please respect copyright.PENANA77VsCJWNVd
▌作者 夏初
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暗戀的心情在瑣碎平凡的日子裡,簡單的舉止卻又令人明瞭。24Please respect copyright.PENANAesPfjM9xCL
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許拾光嚴格來說,在求學階段,抽菸與在車上寫字等行為應該算是個屁孩的行為(意義不明?)而買了杯奶茶、等待了她就是另外一回事了。24Please respect copyright.PENANAUt1yGySAB6
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藉由輕輕撕開了糖果的包裝,伴隨著唾液流入了喉嚨之間,我卻見到了江緣片點的細膩之處,猶如於那遲來的公車,兩人難等的明示暗戀。24Please respect copyright.PENANAVnuM0jd7Kk
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下一站,逐漸通往戀人的階梯。
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▌篇142 灰色的一天24Please respect copyright.PENANAisOExnZnfd
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▌作者 一碗周
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元宋源隻身離家來到了雪華學院就讀,也體會到了自己以外的天外世界。24Please respect copyright.PENANAFnLP2ZT83M
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正如,人,如果沒有走出舒適圈,就沒法知道外面是如此競爭,現實就是這麼殘酷。24Please respect copyright.PENANATI19g2WNZb
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同時期望,他能在下一個學期,在濃厚文化底蘊、與多元社會、豐富人文之下的英國,能劃下自己的一道新足跡。24Please respect copyright.PENANANqh58FBIcd
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同時,與室友的永恆羈絆。
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▌篇143 〈逃出香港番外I穿花蝴蝶〉中篇24Please respect copyright.PENANARoyeFm7NW4
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▌作者 逆流而上
▌第2篇
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歌曲聲再次響起。24Please respect copyright.PENANAK9axBYQXfE
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原來黑夏克,竟是隻惡靈(?),看到這地方轉折處還有那名夾藏著刀的渣男,意外地似乎有點熱血。24Please respect copyright.PENANAWTCZ1CdqLa
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故事後,寫道了穿花蝴蝶的伏筆,為故事延伸下一篇的精彩開端。
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▌篇144 皇天道 番外戰記24Please respect copyright.PENANAc4MNSy2KH1
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▌作者 大道無所為 ▌第3篇
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科幻情景下的槍法極強的王籽與刀千轉換戲法萬千的蘿莉,在這異獸遍地的世界,卻也及時享受著兩人的殺敵美好時光。24Please respect copyright.PENANAGoJ6XAXMRa
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深情之下,將周遭的三頭變異犬全數滅殺,是否也有片點的一絲絲浪漫?24Please respect copyright.PENANAYUk9LKjiIr
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灰濛雪地卻有著同樣冬季裡的愛戀,雖用科幻手法,卻在眾多的作品中有著不同的類別,是校園愛情裡面所沒有的元素。24Please respect copyright.PENANABmbtlX7e1r
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很是新奇。24Please respect copyright.PENANAuO6whdo7OZ
也獨特。
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▌篇145 冬日的暗戀(上)24Please respect copyright.PENANADPoEEVV4Ql
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▌作者 平平
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大殿與米井原為一對彼此相熟的知己,當然要從好朋友昇華成為戀人,除了要有面對失去這個好友的風險外。24Please respect copyright.PENANAL8v3fC0iin
另一方面,當然是勇氣居多。當然米井在被叫上了頂樓,或許,早已猜測到了某些事情準備發生,但直到發生了卻也沒料想到怎麼應對。24Please respect copyright.PENANAEvxhD5YfiZ
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男孩鼓起了勇氣,不敢告白的心情,以生日來為自己舖了條後路,確實挺明智的。24Please respect copyright.PENANAgtUO9yFWHq
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當然,勝負結果一瞬間將以打破這個不可說出口的暗戀了。
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▌篇146 冬日的暗戀(下)24Please respect copyright.PENANA2KzkVqSGUv
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▌作者 平平
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米井犯了花癡這件事情,卻也是稀鬆平常的事情,別人她看不上眼,但她看眼的別人亦同沒看上她。24Please respect copyright.PENANALyxSmLYzrG
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而人們往往瞧不見,原來,在自己的身旁的那個人才是最好的,最了解自己的。24Please respect copyright.PENANAgSbTSPGbMN
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驀然回首,那人卻在燈火闌珊處。24Please respect copyright.PENANAuEqPTC4tL6
芽弰敲醒了她關鍵之處,或許,真如她所言,失去這一次,未來將再也尋覓不著也說不定。24Please respect copyright.PENANAidEnPLD0S7
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「大殿,我......我們交往吧。」這個冬天,手心之間多出了一個自己不熟悉的溫度。竟,意外地不在寒冷了。
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▌篇147 合掌24Please respect copyright.PENANAyT3eZZLVm7
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▌作者 濁酒屋
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心不動,萬物皆不動;心不變,萬物皆不變。24Please respect copyright.PENANAqagXQK5LD9
狼神之所以為狼神,卻因其有著想幫助人們的內心,卻又不願承認罷了。24Please respect copyright.PENANAhXn7rbfGCn
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女孩的孝親方式,有違背常理藉以殺害自己母親來解脫其病患,而反遭上天降臨反殺的命運,萬物皆有其善惡倫理。
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我們無法選擇家庭,人生亦同。身為人子女,雖為出自於好意,讓母親可去黃泉路上與父親相伴,這番虔誠最終仍是打響了狼神內心的那絲絲情感,或許,一雙合掌,屹立不搖的毅力,給予牠動力也說不定。24Please respect copyright.PENANANh4gJ1yR3E
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當然,不知道死後的世界,是否能與親人相聚。24Please respect copyright.PENANAiuSssK8Zyk
但,女孩與母親皆能解脫,也說不定這算是個還不錯的結局了。
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▌篇148 階梯24Please respect copyright.PENANAICF0lPrrVu
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▌作者 Chaos
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以突如其來地求婚,女生卻驚嚇地以傻笑清撇過,轉以那賣藝的情歌來掩飾自己內心的幾絲雀躍。24Please respect copyright.PENANACg5ufueb90
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忙碌之間的約會。24Please respect copyright.PENANAqq6FC8mRJ4
或許,女孩只是想一個放鬆心情的平凡約會,卻反倒被男孩給嚇住了。24Please respect copyright.PENANA7lBYrAkiKM
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這,確實會令人不知所措。
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▌篇149 寒假24Please respect copyright.PENANAlmfDALAF9b
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▌作者 Chaos
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以另外一對男生、女生的不同情境來營造出男女朋友之間,尚無法再邁前一步的心聲。24Please respect copyright.PENANAUBR844F0s9
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同樣的公園中,猶如身旁隨處可見的情侶檔。24Please respect copyright.PENANAKSefEjgRsY
只是,轉換了角度。24Please respect copyright.PENANApGZOUz18M6
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「我喜歡妳。」一句等待已久的話,另兩個人終於把情感再次昇華提升。24Please respect copyright.PENANAP7dbqDnBdh
這個寒假不在冷却,而是溫和。
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▌篇150 禮物24Please respect copyright.PENANAMY4cr1ulfm
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▌作者 墨云
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未能表明的曖昧時期,卻是男女之間最美的片段時光。24Please respect copyright.PENANA7SYMflPe1e
女孩總是滿心期待,卻又不願真實透露的心情,是那般矛盾,但卻可愛。24Please respect copyright.PENANA5NZNfLdswD
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毛毛蟲口味的汽水,未免太好笑了吧XDDD24Please respect copyright.PENANAIix3yxg3dW
不知道喝起來像是甚麼飲料的口感,如果可以幫我喫一杯吧,我才不要什麼正常的紅茶(???24Please respect copyright.PENANAZmkMObN9HC
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當男孩取下了那份巧克力,同時,也繼續畫下那緣分,期望兩人可終究走進心房,喜結連理,在天化作比翼鳥。
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▌篇151 賣藝24Please respect copyright.PENANAhHZKzm2Hh3
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▌作者 Chaos
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天啊!!!是牙彈吉他的G.M.C,根本回憶殺。24Please respect copyright.PENANABIldEVvy3s
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(......不小心顯露出年齡了><)24Please respect copyright.PENANAu6NKUVpiBr
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第三對情侶,卻預料不到竟是三部曲中的公園演奏者,而有別於驚喜、膽怯,這裡更多了點暗戀與曖昧的心思,卻未料想女孩會在歌唱一刻,如來閃光乍現,閃耀著如男孩眼中最明亮的那顆星星。24Please respect copyright.PENANAgQ37PQhef3
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同樣,也令平行時空中,男孩許下了一輩子的婚姻承諾、及神仙羨煞的愛戀告白。24Please respect copyright.PENANAL1Q3aTf3Ea
預祝,他們都可攜手共同度人生過數十個的暖冬。
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▌篇152 憂鬱的櫥窗模特兒24Please respect copyright.PENANAgkACcO3pQh
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▌作者 蕗舟Lunoe
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擬物為人,卻不料真的是人,可把我驚呆了。24Please respect copyright.PENANAmuJUXiDm3K
文末的轉變,十分有勁,卻有一種鶴立雞群的創新感。24Please respect copyright.PENANA4Z9WkjpYlg
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冬季,自古便是憂鬱的季節,即便在世界某一處的角落,我們也沒法躲避那世間的萬有定律。24Please respect copyright.PENANAsJltZiHgJf
而蕗舟大藉由假人模特兒的引頸期盼,來襯托出等待著一整個冬季未到時的良人皈依。24Please respect copyright.PENANAvZhEkuMPFr
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終究,那個男人還是回來了。24Please respect copyright.PENANASiK2fvnA2H
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銀色喜悅,銀色象徵著高貴、永恆,卻如同我們每個人心中,不可取代的純潔,想展現出的特質。24Please respect copyright.PENANAU62aJqnd0z
然而,眾多人群來來往往,卻無一人可識破真人的所扮演,而如同世俗,人們往往只看表面,卻無法深入思索真實的涵義。24Please respect copyright.PENANAIyJ6HkFHaL
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但願,此刻的我,也能尋覓到內心真正的期望。
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▌篇153 聖誕節的某日24Please respect copyright.PENANAioAIasRgsh
▌類型 短文24Please respect copyright.PENANAj3qiYVd5yi
▌作者 死神 黑崎一森
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從文中可以感受到那股單純的戀愛感官,而稚嫩卻又可以表達出內心的情感。24Please respect copyright.PENANAzJByGHNSqO
如是對話中,可以加點情緒,可以加以描繪情景會有意想不到的效果唷。24Please respect copyright.PENANAEIOua9UbzT
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PS 另外關於文筆是可以藉由多寫、多看,自然而然便會有層次上的提升。
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▌篇154 笑面24Please respect copyright.PENANAP5gLd6aS7F
▌類型 *新詩*24Please respect copyright.PENANAxOr81FxImY
▌作者 虛冲
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馬特峰的巍峨確實壯闊的令人為之讚嘆,猶如一高冷難近的美艷女子,即便座落於狹長的阿爾卑斯山一隅,世人也能輕易的尋覓中「她」來,正是獨特的皚皚白華飄著雪的盈盈地笑靨。24Please respect copyright.PENANAoJpsLg5qSH
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在那寒風刺骨的日子裏,深嘆口氣。24Please respect copyright.PENANAytJardp2BQ
豈料腦中揮之不去的都仍是妳的畫面。24Please respect copyright.PENANA3HV1KLVH6m
只是日日夜夜,歲月過去,走盡千萬里。24Please respect copyright.PENANA71QBWElsN9
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百忙之中,即便偶然一瞥妳過往相印片,才知道我倆已與過去的純真走的漸行漸遠。24Please respect copyright.PENANAhawIvCJywC
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再次回頭品嘗著沖虛的詩,此刻,我迷醉於這完美排列的字句組合與尾聲奇妙安排,竟可如此這般美的堪比句中那笑顏。24Please respect copyright.PENANAE2FbGe5KOm
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「青春,總是留下著那明媚的憂傷。」
1 星期前
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▌篇157 冬、愛、文字(上)24Please respect copyright.PENANA8aUalqviwe
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▌作者 氦氣
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起因於本作品,有區分成上、中、下三部曲的緣故,我反覆地看過了好幾遍,才決定了如何下評語,首先,我想先針對第一部曲的分布進行賞析:24Please respect copyright.PENANA7V6vSjbhjg
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冬戀湖,以冬季落雪而湖在一絲泛起漣漪下使人容易感受眷戀。24Please respect copyright.PENANAyykFu7vVn4
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年少輕狂的青澀兩人是各自懷著心思卻不易說出口的簡單心思,在雪景的點綴下,以「冬」字使得兩人產生了故事通篇的羈絆,男孩仍只在意著內心的理想卻沒有更多的心思。24Please respect copyright.PENANApwyjOnTZ4w
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在第一篇裡,魚魚覺得在景色的形容上如果可以把關於景色的形容,能夠佈置更多在男孩、女孩之間的互動,會讓首篇給讀者更多的吸引,轉折部分稍偏弱些,但卻也不錯的給與了伏筆。
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▌篇158 冬、愛、文字(中)24Please respect copyright.PENANABpcpGcnGPC
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▌作者 氦氣
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第二篇描述著男孩即將遠去的複雜心思,提起勇氣宣告著內心獨白,與不確定的心思,就深怕冬戀女孩將在自己的世界,此後,餘生不見。24Please respect copyright.PENANAbNlM1Cp0xt
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卻也未料想,女孩早已在幾年前就已暗自定下了心意,撥開那絢麗奪目的棕色髮絲下,那雙明媚墨黑靈眸子早已將眼前的他深刻烙印在瞳孔之中。24Please respect copyright.PENANAq0HPk8ksnT
即便,再遙遠只要心是在一起的,路,依然會在終點平行交會。24Please respect copyright.PENANAZXkTAKz5nM
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雖說,在男孩的行為上,實屬私心佔有,但一方面卻有活現出男生的主權宣示:「妳就是我的。」那種給女孩的信任感。24Please respect copyright.PENANANGkGlGlpIX
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至於,此去會多久歲月並未點題,卻早已沒留下了兩人的遺憾,更多的我覺得反倒是女孩的寂寞。
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▌篇159 冬、愛、文字(下)24Please respect copyright.PENANAMQ2VsnoEYn
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▌作者 氦氣
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末篇,以年邁的疾病纏身刻畫出女孩的不離不棄,更是難得可貴看出,通篇都是女孩無謂犧牲的偉大辛勞。24Please respect copyright.PENANALxl14UhpwZ
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冬戀湖的廟神,將兩人緣分再次相繫相聯,雖牽起了忘記了自己的那名男人的手,卻仍堅定自己的內心的想法。以冬,再次畫下落幕。24Please respect copyright.PENANAK9TYQOAJMs
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點評至此處,實在不忍想碎嘴一番。那男孩,丟下一句拋棄人家,然後一場大病要女孩照顧終生,這更多的是惡劣龍傲天男主嗎🤧24Please respect copyright.PENANAZhOsAHi1W1
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另外就是有幾點建議:24Please respect copyright.PENANAAAMBqFecUk
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1.三篇區分,上、中、下,建議別分成第三人稱、第一人稱混用寫文,容易造成讀者混亂。24Please respect copyright.PENANAfj8LfKCu8l
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(對!!那個讀者正是我!!)24Please respect copyright.PENANAW7tGFIzsCd
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2.形容某個特定的景物時候,冗字稍多,仍有改進空間,有時候這部分是需要一些適當的點綴即可的,因為你故事的主角不是它們。24Please respect copyright.PENANAVajY4igIiU
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3.女主角的思維可以再更細膩些,如多上一些自己的小脾氣等等,畢竟,上中下篇以三篇為起承轉合,應當可以更好發揮。24Please respect copyright.PENANA6B56nG8LSN
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以上。
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▌篇160 〈逃出香港外番I穿花蝴蝶〉下篇24Please respect copyright.PENANAwPPAO9Q7r5
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▌作者 逆流而上
▌第3篇
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竟還有技能的設定嗎?24Please respect copyright.PENANA9vA1EodFkD
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其實透過片段,我能明顯感受到這部作品用詞非常優美,故事敘述也到位,雖然節錄中段的地方,我仍舊銜接不太起來,而我卻可在女孩飛去香港的同時,剎那明白了逃出香港的意思。24Please respect copyright.PENANAFbyGSh3I8h
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感謝逆流大的參賽,也分享了外傳。
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▌篇161 冬……嚴冬24Please respect copyright.PENANAit5KR1326R
▌類型 *新詩*24Please respect copyright.PENANA3JbnRiq49E
▌作者 楚聞歌
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楚聞歌大的詩中,雖無法直接判明男孩是否為過往的交往對象,抑或只是暗戀的男孩。24Please respect copyright.PENANAYA83jZU6c9
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然而三段台北,三種情境。24Please respect copyright.PENANAX2dnaTSXWt
第一段,訴說著渴望在車水馬龍的大台北,望見女孩的心思。24Please respect copyright.PENANA1JuQtgOSWS
第二段,期待予以實現,在陰鬱蒼蒼的大台北,僅只期盼著妳的轉身驀然回首處與妳相見、相繫。24Please respect copyright.PENANAlJbPngpLUs
第三段,大男孩之間的互相碰撞,夢破碎了,思念斷了線,在這一刻,冷漠離去。24Please respect copyright.PENANAeSrVG1bzxr
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增溫,高溫,冷卻。三種心情,多種轉折,只為再次見到妳。24Please respect copyright.PENANAk5ACbeWHRe
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如此心情,誰又可知?今晚就讓他在寒冬中獨自買醉吧。
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▌篇162 北極光24Please respect copyright.PENANALP2dRVzuAm
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▌作者 白無常
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男孩在她與世別離後的最後一哩路,仍舊不忘那個約定,獨身前往了冰島刻畫下如天塹遙遠般的誓言結尾。24Please respect copyright.PENANA9Umsqimhfo
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令我想起了十前年,還在求學階段時候,一部岡田和人所著【思春期誘惑】,男主角在睡袋與女主角胡桃望著浪花,結束了人生如此短暫的生命盡頭。同樣的感傷,同樣的冬季,不同樣的悲傷。24Please respect copyright.PENANA2XqTcxp0JZ
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三年時光,卻早已萌生了三世情緣,就讓傷痛逝去,同樣帶著重病的糾纏一起走。24Please respect copyright.PENANAaG0qfANM7v
北極光下,那戒指銘記著兩人今生的無緣與續緣。
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▌篇163 塔林的雪夜24Please respect copyright.PENANA52SscwGMAY
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▌作者 flyfish愤怒
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首先感謝飛魚的地理知識給我了新的一課。24Please respect copyright.PENANAE9Pk4e9RlA
這位於愛沙尼亞極北的城鎮,塔林。24Please respect copyright.PENANA6u8HVSNUCH
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上網爬了一下文,看了一下街道城鎮,確實非常美麗且滿富歐洲建築的氣息,一別於亞洲地區出生的我們,即便只有出國過四次的我,也不過在東北亞、東南亞走過。24Please respect copyright.PENANAPqVb9UoInW
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其實,有朝一日,我也期待著一訪這神秘面紗,與曾經獲選歐洲文化之都的盛名。想必此生便可長存於記憶中。
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▌篇164 冬天予你24Please respect copyright.PENANAdaKtcdQUkU
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▌作者 長月生
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炫麗雪花結尾,是如此柔美如歌。24Please respect copyright.PENANAPgOlLYCbHK
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男孩女孩這般青澀的愛情看地令人欣羨,在細雨之下,彼此的擁抱簡單地表述了兩人情感。24Please respect copyright.PENANAPOoDJ2DXo4
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即便倒數三十秒後,迎接不到雪片,卻也仍可持續得到是覆蓋嫩唇的擁吻,正如同長月生筆下那未盡的故事,女孩在冬季裡想予以男孩的魔力光瓣。
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▌篇165 外套24Please respect copyright.PENANASFvV0BSRKI
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▌作者 AnTeD
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跟隨著的故事開頭,都快被故事主角的他,那絲絲片點細膩的舉止,差點沒要做死自己的衝動了。24Please respect copyright.PENANAK8yBTWYXK8
然而,作為首次約會的她更是思慮成熟不已,僅只作為冰凍發寒的手掌都尚可觀察入微,如此相伴,可謂夫復何求?24Please respect copyright.PENANABy19zzaCc3
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男女在戀愛中所在意的角度本就不同,而在AnTeD大的作品中,更可感受到景色間的優美、兩人間美好的細膩互動,皆可輕易波動了正在欣賞這篇文章的我們,是如此暖和,是否這件外套遞給的已非男主,而是我們呢?24Please respect copyright.PENANANegmlgKCTm
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後續,兩人是否走下去不得而知,但可以知道的是,男生的心中此生怕是再難以忘懷這場約會了。
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▌篇166 天橋下的祈禱24Please respect copyright.PENANAGdpJ1GRyqE
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▌作者 墨云
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以來了破題,外加第一段的迴文方式,去襯托寒霜擬人般悄悄佈滿是他的容顏,以雪再次劃破天際。24Please respect copyright.PENANA5dukEua8Ak
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天橋,也許正是內心的一道避風港,而那毯子卻缺少了那名祈禱之人的共暖,致感受不到溫煦的氣息。24Please respect copyright.PENANAue4COqFDhS
藉以祈禱來想妄著內心之人,正如輕輕地走過那康橋底下,只盼望這波寒冷尚未結束之前,見到期盼知人輕輕地對著他再次招手。24Please respect copyright.PENANAa2mFhqyA0o
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不再幻想。
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▌篇167 蝸牛少女24Please respect copyright.PENANAksxtneQKwp
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▌作者 雙杺
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孤寂的寒冬吹響了冰封的少女,或許她再也找不到能過取代掉他餘溫的掌心了。24Please respect copyright.PENANAQVzySS1o60
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耳鳴的原因,早已不再是想聽到任何一句我愛你,此刻,少女需要的是內心的沉靜。24Please respect copyright.PENANA5AM3YNftb7
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期盼她可以冬季過後,春暖花開再次踏出冰封蝸居。
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▌篇168 雪月花時最憶君(惠施X莊周)24Please respect copyright.PENANAZNH70jjxe6
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▌作者 hikari
▌引用逍遙遊、莊周化蝶、郢人
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抱歉,歷經了好些時日才回覆,實則是對於莊子的典故,僅認識「魚樂之辯」那段,花了時間惡補了,以前求學階段的老莊學識。24Please respect copyright.PENANALyK3b6d1ml
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第一段中,hikari大在莊周與惠施的故事中,加以透過了自己的情境模擬了惠施因張儀的死去,再次回到魏國當相國,而莊子這番看中兩人的情誼,才會不故惠施下令追捕,仍舊要看上故人一面。24Please respect copyright.PENANApUjm4yoTi9
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後面呈人那段,更是顯露出了一種莫逆之交的那樣敬重,可見兩人雖常鬥嘴,卻又早已認定彼此的一生摯友。24Please respect copyright.PENANAbViJYN9y7j
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以上,是我個人的見解。
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▌篇169 流痕24Please respect copyright.PENANAa3OnOw1k5Z
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▌作者 千眾忘雨
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流痕,如同為忘雨大大所謂的流逝傷痕。24Please respect copyright.PENANAQbETEy5eDr
而譬如過去的那個她,在他的內心刻印下了一如天塹的傷痛疤痕。24Please respect copyright.PENANAlCy4KiVgWP
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過去的愛,同如初戀萌萌發芽,鬥嘴、青澀、幼稚,皆以被名為成長的傢伙給覆蓋了,而錯過了就不再回頭,即便有了床邊人,那些過去就是沒有辦法取代的東西。24Please respect copyright.PENANAtFPwDQA5YL
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「夢裡擺花正盛開,夢醒在沒有存在......」那個她如今大夢一場,名字、點點滴滴都將伴隨著他進入墳墓之中了。
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▌篇170 獨處的時候24Please respect copyright.PENANAhsqVC1GSgx
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▌作者 大便大
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Damnit !The annoying boss!24Please respect copyright.PENANA7Wv94e6kNl
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漫長的愛情旅途,走至了六年之久,雖不至於泯滅了愛的火花,卻也難以點燃一絲熱誠,男孩確實仍為了小羽的幸福著想,是如此希望能過上更好的日子。戀愛中的人,確實容易因為一些舉止懷疑對方,信任什麼的是建立在彼此的那把衡量尺上,需靠兩人相互扶持。24Please respect copyright.PENANAI5cPRSD84c
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故事最終男孩仍舊將這道想法挾藏於內心深處,有時往往善意的隱匿是一種對於雙方都是好的,不明說能減少更多的摩擦,但也會因此產生未來步入禮堂時的不安定因素。24Please respect copyright.PENANAzCWtS0eqCu
故事的結尾,是男孩誤會了女孩,或許,更應該請上那頓火鍋,為自己的懷疑獻上歉意XDD
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▌篇171 應該埋藏在雪地裡的珍貴的遺憾24Please respect copyright.PENANAYnHKDHo6S0
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▌作者 吟遊C人
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以奇幻鋪敘來說,C大的伏筆非常順暢,讀起來像泡在溫泉暖和身子,享受冬季反差的那絲溫和感受。24Please respect copyright.PENANABvG15HhTcM
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以極光前後呼應點題,「極光」是故事的羈絆,因其而再續前緣,也在最後一刻畫下句話。24Please respect copyright.PENANAJxAVU1hIZo
法特,是傭兵隊長也同為年少時期的異性好友,此刻,更多的是彼此間相互緬懷的歲月靜好。24Please respect copyright.PENANAwzddAsboXO
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不論是否在劍與魔法的世界,抑或是,現實生活中,再臨自己的初戀那是個想將對方的手給牽繫起來的心思,是如此的妄想。24Please respect copyright.PENANAUas3lVdmFx
法特,或許能憑藉自身異能,把整個小隊都滅了也說不然,如今自追隨拜月女神後,早已身不由己。24Please respect copyright.PENANAFdml8TQwwV
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緣分再次出現,或許,只要他的一句「與我共度下半輩子吧?」說不定,兩人可背負上世界的罵名,卻可擁有法特自己的理想生活。24Please respect copyright.PENANASsufNnFy47
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可當光逐漸畫下了無際的星空,他卻不自覺沒有察覺出,希梅娜的眼角邊也同為畫下一記淺稀的淚痕。
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▌篇172 白色回憶24Please respect copyright.PENANA2E2Ug16K3V
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▌作者 獨孤幻靈
▌(排版問題!!!!!)
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首先是排版有點問題,如果可以能否調整。24Please respect copyright.PENANAKP2f3f6ZEC
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在便利超商突然對著陌生人詢問座位確實有些唐突,而轉折處是突如其來的貨車撞擊,所產生的現場災禍。24Please respect copyright.PENANAEw9rWC6ky4
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一段與陌生人的際遇,卻可留下一段令人忘懷的恐怖經歷,我想應該早已給予了她此生都無法抹滅的冬季回憶了吧!
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▌篇173 冬雪(上)24Please respect copyright.PENANA48fDGgWWIC
▌類型 短文24Please respect copyright.PENANAyydTZHNtqw
▌作者 糖解
▌第1篇
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WOW!!!!竟是喪屍主題,好興奮又好期待(?)。24Please respect copyright.PENANAE2DkURr2wD
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營區成了躲避喪屍的絕佳地點是個很好的想法。一開始還想著米小鬼戴上墨鏡是何用處,直到下篇章,才知道這是個伏筆,寥寥數句幾筆卻能埋下暗梗,確實不易。老男人彼此間的簡短互動,雖說我看不太明白話語間的意思,卻仍看出他倆平日裡的默契,與相識已久的熟識。24Please respect copyright.PENANAemydulEUpJ
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咦?24Please respect copyright.PENANAKDilPm3KGO
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對了,這篇並沒有要打喪屍嗎XDDD
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▌篇174 冬雪(下) 24Please respect copyright.PENANAVXTF1u9qju
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▌作者 糖解
▌第2篇
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下半章竟能加上了異能元素。
再搭配上與末世給予的惆悵感,確實非常神展開。
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雖然彼此間互動性非常好與同為童年愉快的感覺,卻免不了多出了更多的悲傷感。冬天,雪仍舊飄下,幾個孩子這般童年的純真看得確實令人觸動人心。
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▌篇175 我愛上那位喜歡冬季的女孩24Please respect copyright.PENANACH9gKuTcJ9
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▌作者 喘氣的蠟燭
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女孩因重大的事件變故,轉而失去了對於冬的眷戀。正如文前開頭所點題的愛情來臨時,走得很快,只需一道感覺,那走的時候同為如此,也正是失去那種感覺。24Please respect copyright.PENANAuBNmheHAHZ
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「一眼萬年,閉眼也是萬年。」 24Please respect copyright.PENANAdvX5E5sFOI
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只是世人往往只看的到前頭,卻思不了後頭的同理。 24Please respect copyright.PENANA0uNhtlW06k
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也許,失去了感覺再拖延,多的都是對彼此的一種傷害,何不認真放手,走出那道高聳圍牆。望這男孩度過了這場冬季,內心將終成長,再下一場雪飄下時,遇見了真正陪同自己走上萬年的女孩。
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▌篇176 微微微故事: 媽媽的暖暖頸巾24Please respect copyright.PENANAsEzqGiFiNS
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▌作者 東加豆
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意外的想把這條暖巾送給心儀的女孩,卻反倒把父母親的冷戰給處理了,就整體而言,結果是好的。24Please respect copyright.PENANAlkBfqNTNc9
魚毛是學生,多的是時間可以與女孩打持久戰,即便這一次計畫失敗了,下一回合,鹿死誰手猶未可知。24Please respect copyright.PENANAXeb8m7vmuT
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圖很美、字很簡潔,均是暖冬的一陣暖意。24Please respect copyright.PENANAFQ9qU2dhFt
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相信魚毛,即便是往後的三十多年,都能再續與她的緣分。
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▌篇177 (輕百合)寒冷的心,被妳的溫柔治癒24Please respect copyright.PENANAhHg8wi6hK0
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▌作者 AcesDeny
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詩奈、凌雫從兩人的同好,再到信任終至互相的喜歡,是三段不同的情感關卡,尤以最後當兩人面對告白之時的情緒表達,深怕對方會婉拒的心情,片片地展露出了那一絲風吹草動就能切斷這些日子以來的關係。24Please respect copyright.PENANA38CArHpWqC
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然而,最終百合終究結為連理枝(?),幸福就是這般簡單,走得長遠與短都已然不成重要的事情,能在短暫擁有過的那才是真實的。24Please respect copyright.PENANA6zB3x0F5Z9
至少這個寒冬,冰冷的手不在獨自搓暖,而是有雙暖熱的不熟識手掌正緊緊握著自己。
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▌篇178 紅顏棄軒冕,白首臥松雲。24Please respect copyright.PENANAFdHqNaXyQL
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▌作者 Endlessly
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「紅顏棄軒冕,白首臥松雲」24Please respect copyright.PENANAfL8cwuC0vy
按其原意,是大詩仙李白內心所仰慕的棄名利而追隱世生活,同如那邊閒雲野鶴,清高自德猶如高山這般為人所景仰。24Please respect copyright.PENANAGu0N2FIdjS
由於文中未能點提出,確切可人兒逝去的緣由。魚魚猜測或許正如官場險惡,那深水洶湧的官場同如戰場,不僅鬥心機,更是鬥的是長氣。人兒的死已成必然,而嚮往著隱世生活的他,下一步的選擇為何,就不得而知,但如今冰涼的屍體,正一步步朝著他內心所望的方向而去。24Please respect copyright.PENANATdogmuTPzq
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話說...你的寒冬跑去哪裡了????
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▌篇179 千層酥皮24Please respect copyright.PENANA8FiMJWadno
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▌作者 少女
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「前任就像一所學校,你總要畢業的,就像小時候總希望快點長大,長大後才發現---24Please respect copyright.PENANAtsVCL4Lixg
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原來長大是有代價的,而代價就是那些無條件愛你的人們將會一個接著一個老死去。」24Please respect copyright.PENANAZcKcugZ9pR
W是個渣男,而這又能怪誰,真要點評,女生本身卻也沒有在相處中認清了對方,並且自己的性格問題。24Please respect copyright.PENANAfMGLuIcNSV
我們不能完全認定L先生就是完美的人,但能肯定的會比起前任的他是個更好的選擇。24Please respect copyright.PENANAvhrmf8DAfI
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即便繞了好大一圈,卻也在世界的某個角落,遇見了他。24Please respect copyright.PENANA2NnPl2fHaU
起點慢,動作不快,但每一步伐卻都能細心呈現,好比如酵母經過時間的累積,終才成為一塊美好的素材。24Please respect copyright.PENANA2qE0AAL5cT
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而,那千層才如此入口即化。
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▌篇180 這樣的方式回憶24Please respect copyright.PENANAWuOxh7GQfz
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▌作者 裕賢先生
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這樣的方式回憶24Please respect copyright.PENANA6aF6FBsg88
同為貓派,我可以感同身受喵喵離你遠去的思念之意。牠如同冬季的使者,來時,冬來報到,而今下一個冬季來,牠離開了。
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或許,生命就是這般的奇妙,周圍的人與生物,歷經輪迴了幾世,終究和你相逢,可那緣分不夠,只好下輩子再續前緣,在和你見上一面。喵喵或許牠僅只想告訴你,我終於見到了你了,即便在最後要走的前幾天,牠早已告訴過了你「勿再掛懷,只是冬季,希望你能憶起我與你的那個短暫回憶」罷了。
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▌篇181 鬧脾氣24Please respect copyright.PENANAPJkj5elX4T
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▌作者 析梓燕
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新年快樂我覺得主體上需要的是一種情緒上面的表達,不過前面舖陳的雪景與冬意仍是令人感覺有冬季的味道。24Please respect copyright.PENANAIEivodq8lW
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析梓燕大其實可以多往為何鬧脾氣?24Please respect copyright.PENANAzAag9UTPIR
及為何和好後等等如何發展,延伸敘寫,說不定會有更好的想法。
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▌篇182 那一晚,你走了,我也將隨你離去。24Please respect copyright.PENANAVYrJvuOdaG
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▌作者 木木凡
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看著宥芯悲懷的望著心跳示波顯影器上滴滴滴的聲響,遠隔螢幕上的讀者都可感受到絲絲同情悲憫的心意。24Please respect copyright.PENANArYu2L0vAsR
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話說,如果住過院的話,頭上就會有一個名字的看板,不過考慮到有些人會想保持隱私性的情況下,也有可能會不知道的情況。24Please respect copyright.PENANAu3kmGGvg8j
少年我們並不知道他是何故原因會產生了休克,甚至沒有親人的往來,想必生活必然辛苦無比,然而有著宥芯的鼓舞,今年身處於病床上的寒冬,比與往常要溫暖了許多,後續期待兩人經歷與發展。24Please respect copyright.PENANAgWOrGK3esx
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話說你那同學很壞,他有寫嗎,還是先說,那同學就是你自己(?)
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▌篇183 世人笑我太瘋癲24Please respect copyright.PENANAqdJ0ltQnTW
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▌作者 清溪
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隱忍了三年之後的,女子絕不會想到命運產生了反轉,言少風返回原本屬於自己的歸所,卻未料想女子竟會跳下了城上,躍下自縊。24Please respect copyright.PENANAVDSvXxPFhe
然而真正要說瘋的人,又會不會是言少風,而他卻不知;尤以見其隱忍數年,城府極其之深不可見。24Please respect copyright.PENANANNHbMKxSpS
雪仍飄落,但殞落的卻是這三年來的復仇目標,那該是多麼令人惆悵的存在。24Please respect copyright.PENANAX0RwyWjNPl
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只知,曾經的冷冰女子,在其內心是多麼地狂熱,如此的執著。24Please respect copyright.PENANAgQSvUdvXD7
就讓今晚的寒風伴隨著過去一道悄悄地的流逝而去吧。