寫作菜鳥日記 -12614Please respect copyright.PENANAwq6gdWJuX8
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。14Please respect copyright.PENANABO7PnX19em
字數 8,28714Please respect copyright.PENANALdk9ITLYQC
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,14Please respect copyright.PENANAxgkhA8VImY
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。14Please respect copyright.PENANAlPE7QFwnf7
跟流水帳差不多(汗)14Please respect copyright.PENANAL0SMq70Yeq
卻沒有可以修改的方向。14Please respect copyright.PENANAS0t8lTm1k4
問題應該出在節奏的安排,14Please respect copyright.PENANAyd9oOUvpiE
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,14Please respect copyright.PENANArRzWc310hI
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,14Please respect copyright.PENANAJl2YGQF3r9
到章末堆到最高點。14Please respect copyright.PENANAaU6rh5pn0r
但是這一章一直平平的,14Please respect copyright.PENANA6i7ZQEfrPV
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點14Please respect copyright.PENANAMexdsG2Qpw
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。14Please respect copyright.PENANAZ2yCuowS31
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,14Please respect copyright.PENANACelDCNWsby
接著寫下一章。14Please respect copyright.PENANAgQcBZPkjGw
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡14Please respect copyright.PENANAF4hHNclDtW
沒什麼思考能力。14Please respect copyright.PENANALnRDp87gOE
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。14Please respect copyright.PENANAnfFHUO2lSp
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。