寫作菜鳥日記 -12637Please respect copyright.PENANAbzsMRYYuJw
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。37Please respect copyright.PENANAdrtuxQNvzv
字數 8,28737Please respect copyright.PENANAaddbvyx5ap
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,37Please respect copyright.PENANAUbB8XfRXSN
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。37Please respect copyright.PENANAEVCJTj9P4N
跟流水帳差不多(汗)37Please respect copyright.PENANAFGXnn7mDIE
卻沒有可以修改的方向。37Please respect copyright.PENANAZM37hxK1z4
問題應該出在節奏的安排,37Please respect copyright.PENANAvp9uoTwdwu
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,37Please respect copyright.PENANAYQkr08bM2d
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,37Please respect copyright.PENANAt4T3pRPUAw
到章末堆到最高點。37Please respect copyright.PENANAueYhu2jxei
但是這一章一直平平的,37Please respect copyright.PENANAVQJcsSBpYN
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點37Please respect copyright.PENANAqnWjAEyHMu
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。37Please respect copyright.PENANAUHoU51qrvq
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,37Please respect copyright.PENANAEuYF9E1RJs
接著寫下一章。37Please respect copyright.PENANANTBXWTfChN
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡37Please respect copyright.PENANAfkmCQ6h2cz
沒什麼思考能力。37Please respect copyright.PENANAcT10gs9a0z
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。37Please respect copyright.PENANAJsSK0VTbiN
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。