寫作菜鳥日記 -1269Please respect copyright.PENANATOJ945ipto
今天初步完成第13章,但還沒進行合併文件前最後的修改。9Please respect copyright.PENANAdX85S3MStq
字數 8,2879Please respect copyright.PENANACVwDlKjwpF
這章在大綱上就概念模糊,9Please respect copyright.PENANA2wnrX5OznW
實際寫的時候也就是⋯⋯平舖直敍。9Please respect copyright.PENANA97aFVxXLNt
跟流水帳差不多(汗)9Please respect copyright.PENANAQJZ13Gzeg6
卻沒有可以修改的方向。9Please respect copyright.PENANAxZ4qxykV1n
問題應該出在節奏的安排,9Please respect copyright.PENANAaBZg0kHslf
之前幾個篇章我會用堆疊的方式,9Please respect copyright.PENANAPtnX5fRw61
把氣氛和情緒一直往上疊,9Please respect copyright.PENANAdhIhbMJS7E
到章末堆到最高點。9Please respect copyright.PENANAc8wzUdrKTZ
但是這一章一直平平的,9Please respect copyright.PENANAb5LEhp6Eyy
然後我也不想在這裡加入什麼爆點9Please respect copyright.PENANAhz0QtiTD9W
畢竟就是個戰鬥後再度進入備戰的準備期。9Please respect copyright.PENANA17tHjDI4YY
只能先說服自己把它當作完成了,9Please respect copyright.PENANAZqmbqm4ZgN
接著寫下一章。9Please respect copyright.PENANAx8hYYzYDEO
然後另外一個問題是今天喝了啤酒就很想睡9Please respect copyright.PENANAtnl90T2efK
沒什麼思考能力。9Please respect copyright.PENANAanWkS6GFuG
這款小麥啤酒很好喝,這湯包和辣椒也很好吃。9Please respect copyright.PENANAop2utrSsNT
然後請忽略背景,加儂多夫絕對沒有正在對薩爾達做出什麼奇怪的事。