寫作菜鳥日記-10735Please respect copyright.PENANA7x5IJdBrRG
今天重寫了第五章的開頭,然後寫了3000字。35Please respect copyright.PENANAxXX55uPPcP
昨天說的問題解決了,35Please respect copyright.PENANAnbaVh1448d
主要是我覺得要有一個有點衝擊感的開頭,35Please respect copyright.PENANA7WFNaqm3iP
不然太平淡了很無聊。35Please respect copyright.PENANAztLB8vWbSL
原本我寫女生對男生惡作劇,35Please respect copyright.PENANAlrehafmCpT
但實在太白目了,改成一個小意外,35Please respect copyright.PENANAUjm9tfvSdk
看起來就變得好多了,雖然幾乎是一樣的情節。35Please respect copyright.PENANAS16B8kPzTp
之前的經驗告訴我,主角做出討人厭的行為,是會影響整部作品的。35Please respect copyright.PENANAcsiH9kMtOz
這一章以一段二人世界的劇情展開。35Please respect copyright.PENANA61pQt7JHBa
雖然這一部原本的設定是沒有18禁內容的,35Please respect copyright.PENANAsPGDUKA3Ac
但還是順勢描寫了一場情慾。35Please respect copyright.PENANA6FhEl0DZYl
我覺得在這一章是有必要性的,35Please respect copyright.PENANAEqapL5p7DO
雖然本來可以直接就天亮了帶過去,35Please respect copyright.PENANAFaVvyqehoT
最終還是忍不住想寫。35Please respect copyright.PENANAD1XtJ4K9Dw
但我寫得很克制,35Please respect copyright.PENANAUszbsbbosq
至少不像外傳的時候會把人體器官的名稱寫上去。35Please respect copyright.PENANAcLf9hbFmTL
對劇情的後續發展愈來愈期待了。35Please respect copyright.PENANADZtIl8dZ5Z
封面圖依然只有草稿+部份描線。