寫作菜鳥日記 -12813Please respect copyright.PENANA1htoelblI1
今天把第14章寫到五千字13Please respect copyright.PENANAczSotxBZcp
邊寫邊發現大綱要改,13Please respect copyright.PENANA1k01HXT6s1
然後好幾次都被自己的設定不夠周全給卡住,13Please respect copyright.PENANAiPlTPXlIYC
或是糾結在一些不是很重要的問題,13Please respect copyright.PENANAAJuqxPaREt
舉個例子,比如常見的日本影片,13Please respect copyright.PENANAFr07Ab7MpO
怪都只攻擊東京,13Please respect copyright.PENANAoHmykUK6JE
主角可以直接迎戰。13Please respect copyright.PENANA2NcUbz2OoA
就不會攻擊例如名古屋還是秋田13Please respect copyright.PENANAfvnCl2wEgn
(主角坐火車兩個小時後抵達,城市已夷為平地)13Please respect copyright.PENANAx9XyuEgvjZ
其實好像可以不用管這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAaQoAmYbg1j
但我太容易被這種奇怪問題影響,13Please respect copyright.PENANAF7ui0T9Chd
一旦陷入焦躁就無法寫下去。13Please respect copyright.PENANAIvNHObY1l0
最後還是花了點篇幅來解釋這件事,13Please respect copyright.PENANAUsW3hDH528
並且因此修改了大綱。13Please respect copyright.PENANAKKFVSgGLoM
另外一件事,前面的日常生活化描寫,13Please respect copyright.PENANAcsDYoZ4IHO
雖然很有趣,13Please respect copyright.PENANArYKINIu3Is
但貼近現實角度的喜劇的調性有點走過頭了,13Please respect copyright.PENANAgPafU3am6b
只好再花一點篇幅拉回一些神話奇幻的調性,13Please respect copyright.PENANAiZPsD8J0vp
這章剩下的篇幅,13Please respect copyright.PENANAJoOu5QvrjY
應該是要寫那對已分手的情侶的後續,13Please respect copyright.PENANAr3Q7mpLbuc
這可能要想一想,不想寫得太哀傷。13Please respect copyright.PENANAlFOivGtbfV
應該有更好的表現方式才對,13Please respect copyright.PENANAAiEPNq5ADu
把問題帶進夢裡吧,13Please respect copyright.PENANALIHvpfBrQR
夢會給我答案的。