寫作菜鳥日記 -12837Please respect copyright.PENANAYKKdONesTt
今天把第14章寫到五千字37Please respect copyright.PENANAJ6CRF1fauP
邊寫邊發現大綱要改,37Please respect copyright.PENANAaBnSbtxpPf
然後好幾次都被自己的設定不夠周全給卡住,37Please respect copyright.PENANAiMdyWPzohC
或是糾結在一些不是很重要的問題,37Please respect copyright.PENANA53ieHQUpjs
舉個例子,比如常見的日本影片,37Please respect copyright.PENANASBSo0YxQQ7
怪都只攻擊東京,37Please respect copyright.PENANAr7HrIqv30O
主角可以直接迎戰。37Please respect copyright.PENANA9xMApyQoSe
就不會攻擊例如名古屋還是秋田37Please respect copyright.PENANAjHLFmGcBIb
(主角坐火車兩個小時後抵達,城市已夷為平地)37Please respect copyright.PENANALTZklpe3CO
其實好像可以不用管這件事,37Please respect copyright.PENANAijj4ug42xg
但我太容易被這種奇怪問題影響,37Please respect copyright.PENANAvGazVUemOJ
一旦陷入焦躁就無法寫下去。37Please respect copyright.PENANAOLpXx4AyXL
最後還是花了點篇幅來解釋這件事,37Please respect copyright.PENANAib0vGjTRjY
並且因此修改了大綱。37Please respect copyright.PENANAFRzeZNCEUj
另外一件事,前面的日常生活化描寫,37Please respect copyright.PENANAdUWAg0iMqH
雖然很有趣,37Please respect copyright.PENANAvbYXU40NUj
但貼近現實角度的喜劇的調性有點走過頭了,37Please respect copyright.PENANAItoBxrfmyP
只好再花一點篇幅拉回一些神話奇幻的調性,37Please respect copyright.PENANA4biKIorrzb
這章剩下的篇幅,37Please respect copyright.PENANAXPvSEFvKjT
應該是要寫那對已分手的情侶的後續,37Please respect copyright.PENANARn24qLwM6F
這可能要想一想,不想寫得太哀傷。37Please respect copyright.PENANAFkNYGXamAD
應該有更好的表現方式才對,37Please respect copyright.PENANAbrLSLmIr1z
把問題帶進夢裡吧,37Please respect copyright.PENANAmp6bsDuyOI
夢會給我答案的。