寫作菜鳥日記 -4246Please respect copyright.PENANAWeZEC813Re
今天沒往後面的章節寫,停在昨天的第十四回,46Please respect copyright.PENANAqc2JT2EVqx
反覆看反覆修改。46Please respect copyright.PENANAZ2XFk9f0dl
畢竟一萬多字有很多要改,改完又多了一千多字,46Please respect copyright.PENANAbFsgRuEthJ
但其實我也有刪掉很多東西。46Please respect copyright.PENANAyKmLqHj5Ug
現在總字數 80,26246Please respect copyright.PENANArV0oko56Ra
第十四回目前修改到差不多可以看的程度,46Please respect copyright.PENANA4lCQrYmLit
這一回我蠻喜歡的,不只是昨天說的挑戰不同敍事方式。46Please respect copyright.PENANAGrDNdY0gt8
這一回也是把一些原本模糊的概念清楚建立起來46Please respect copyright.PENANA0Iv2EMEcYx
不只是這作男主角的情感轉折,46Please respect copyright.PENANAaOruyHf663
還有前作男主角的情感轉折。46Please respect copyright.PENANAwBuyQjDqBl
因為這是他們第一次的交鋒,46Please respect copyright.PENANA2K4eJ0o3b1
雖然有很多我不熟悉的領域,只能靠想像力寫,46Please respect copyright.PENANAyTELslDfwf
比如軍事演習,諜報情節,還有與王室的對談。46Please respect copyright.PENANA29cw07mpOK
雖然不完美,但這次是我寫作以來第一次覺得,46Please respect copyright.PENANABmw1i9feB1
章節裡有自己覺得能稱得上是46Please respect copyright.PENANAgXxE1rzB83
「寫得好」的句子46Please respect copyright.PENANAYMLNSz8K4K
(雖然比不上別人,只是跟跟自己比)46Please respect copyright.PENANA2EIvETAUAH
跟之前一樣,我寫完會朗讀一遍,確定有沒有還沒改好的,46Please respect copyright.PENANAlQx83CCuAL
這次比較難,46Please respect copyright.PENANAHDDch8xPWB
除了字數很多要唸很久以外,46Please respect copyright.PENANAJjbBe40bG0
唸到某些部份會太嗨,每次一定會太開心笑出來。46Please respect copyright.PENANA7avhoqpWP2
我真的很喜歡那種病態的感情。46Please respect copyright.PENANA8Chh9ne75F
現在另一個問題是,我擔心之後沒辦法寫出同樣喜歡的篇章。
一覺醒來,對下一章的故事有靈感了,也許可以寫了。(呃⋯⋯昨天說好的要戒成癮症狀的?喂?)46Please respect copyright.PENANAmZSm6uiyNE
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