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No Plagiarism!upxjuHxcK3cVIgbxZa1uposted on PENANA 自此之後,我和星澄常常聚在一起修改劇本,她問了我很多意見,我嘗試把自己代入成主角,思考主角那一刻會在想甚麼,然後為她提供意見。最終我們為劇本添了很多主角的心底話,其實有很多都是我真實的想法。8964 copyright protection595PENANAC0xFDmd3wh 維尼
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加入了這個重要部分後,劇本的完成度大增,唯獨是結局,她說一直想不到。8964 copyright protection595PENANAHXyontD3sN 維尼
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「你想happy end 定sad end ?」有一次在快餐店坐著時,我這樣問她。8964 copyright protection595PENANAtSY5OtZH7n 維尼
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「我唔知呀,兩樣我都諗過……但唔知邊個好啲。」她用原子筆敲著校簿,忽然把臉轉向我,「你覺得呢?」8964 copyright protection595PENANAOvrRBXJqr5 維尼
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我花了點時間思考,然後娓娓道出:「我覺得個結局sad 唔sad係睇你點睇,可能你覺得主角最後唔可以對人講出心聲,選擇收埋自己係bad end,但企喺主角角度,呢個或者係佢諗得好清楚,唔想傷害到任何人而做嘅決定;你覺得主角最後識到朋友係happy end ,但係可能佢啲朋友最後都係接受唔到佢唔講野而疏遠佢,咁對主角嚟講先係真正嘅bad end 。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAsxqfdQZpDP 維尼
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回想起來,我也沒搞清楚為甚麼自己能如此自然就說出一大段話,湊巧那天起床額頭有點燙,於是我把這當作原因——九成九是我燒壞腦了。8964 copyright protection595PENANASSNl7E8xGA 維尼
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「你講啲野好玄……」8964 copyright protection595PENANAGLKq2eR5Mh 維尼
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我連忙說:「我都係求其噏架咋。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAEnC3mtk2n0 維尼
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「不如咁吖,我地一人寫一個結局,然後我問吓雷sir 佢覺得邊個結局好啲?」8964 copyright protection595PENANARzsBHYI6Wy 維尼
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「吓?你又話諗唔到?」8964 copyright protection595PENANAQt3bMYdNs8 維尼
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「聽完你頭先講啲嘢,我好似有少少靈感……」8964 copyright protection595PENANABw0n70uaX9 維尼
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「咁我試吓啦……唔一定諗到架。」我抓著頭髮說。8964 copyright protection595PENANAjJm59toTaq 維尼
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「嗯!」看著她閃閃發光的眼神,我完全感受她對這事的投入程度,或許中學生涯還餘下兩個學期,她想好好珍惜最後一次在台上演出的機會吧。8964 copyright protection595PENANA1y0xnI0Fav 維尼
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除了無緣無故說了一段意味不明的話外,那天我還幹了一件很大膽的事——8964 copyright protection595PENANAVmrz7HzQL7 維尼
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「你幾時要正式演出?」我隨口問了一句,前額維持著一點點滾燙的感覺,說話都變得易講出口了,我奢望自己能每一天都發燒……8964 copyright protection595PENANAM5JEaEg1M6 維尼
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「十二月,聖誕假之前。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAGUhm2isbuy 維尼
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狹窄的餐桌上放著兩杯汽水,我趁她專注在劇本上時,偷偷拿起她的汽水喝了一口。8964 copyright protection595PENANAEgxlk1pIPi 維尼
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「……咁咪淨返唔係好多時間?」我胡亂應著,只在意有沒有被她發現。8964 copyright protection595PENANAIKVVzmqzbg 維尼
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「係呀,仲有個令月。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAe2noBPyIIZ 維尼
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似乎沒有……我暗暗鬆了口氣,貪玩地再次偷喝她的汽水,把紙杯放回原處時,她定眼望著我。8964 copyright protection595PENANAJ3Bhe6Elvo 維尼
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我大概真的燒壞腦才會有膽做出這樣的行為。8964 copyright protection595PENANAUwCHNMXWJi 維尼
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「呢杯我架。」8964 copyright protection595PENANACK1AsUUIcx 維尼
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「……哦,sorry 。」我裝作被她一言驚醒,「我買過杯畀你。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAXyJjILvQBA 維尼
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「咁又唔使……」她別過臉去,把頭垂得低低的,繼續專注於劇本上。8964 copyright protection595PENANAsH2Rg9NCe3 維尼
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我以為她會拿另一支飲管,她卻遲遲沒有。8964 copyright protection595PENANA5VLLycuYDp 維尼
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「你塊臉做乜咁紅?」8964 copyright protection595PENANA5s0zOp5yBl 維尼
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「冇,呢度有啲焗……」她簡單地回答。8964 copyright protection595PENANAzYTKhEUvhm 維尼
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「哦。」8964 copyright protection595PENANAQvkRaztaju 維尼
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踏入秋天,快餐店應該把冷氣調高了,難怪會把她悶成這樣子。8964 copyright protection595PENANAgWAHKH28MV 維尼
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