
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』348Please respect copyright.PENANAWl8ALCaDEg
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:348Please respect copyright.PENANAbtnpnUF8Xm
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐348Please respect copyright.PENANAxTSwBp5jnW
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆348Please respect copyright.PENANAiiYHE1CQ9d
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲348Please respect copyright.PENANAJAPhq9w0FK
帶出角色支線348Please respect copyright.PENANAp4MxmkvtiX
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破348Please respect copyright.PENANABe9Zd7nJn8
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫348Please respect copyright.PENANAB09ufFn3Z7
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴348Please respect copyright.PENANA6FBilulh3G
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌348Please respect copyright.PENANAZepRptxUIG
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊348Please respect copyright.PENANA3sJMy21Sul
殺人犯vs富婆348Please respect copyright.PENANAmZpNdfrEfo
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌348Please respect copyright.PENANAtrwNjxGmoS
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴348Please respect copyright.PENANA5FOoU0tRvp
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕348Please respect copyright.PENANAti1ZD2P78j
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。348Please respect copyright.PENANAcg8Sen7UCC
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。348Please respect copyright.PENANAtsnlFojGO3
魂之詩348Please respect copyright.PENANAOjLrljZ0om
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