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昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ86DcQFJYzg
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhF3YvoYdS1
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡakpdlCtrnD
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3TCj7m6yRc
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm2O4CIrln6
帶出角色支線308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEjZPwkC1D6
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG7DwCEOab9
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzGrB7BWZdp
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxHpAyFd4Fr
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGJXcpS8YL0
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjY3aoM7BOf
殺人犯vs富婆308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIEXh0LQOxo
一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：
1 祐嘉質問昌308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPKFwSuDJuI
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3jYQNed6pC
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmltaQPvctJ
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡezJ63nYFH5
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkHWVK8nLoI
魂之詩308Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHvAuvVqv7I
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