
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』262Please respect copyright.PENANA1hCFPg7AMd
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:262Please respect copyright.PENANAqm98KiHNjc
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐262Please respect copyright.PENANA6FLyqzpn8U
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆262Please respect copyright.PENANAFj6YapA6pw
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲262Please respect copyright.PENANAx2Rg39x2Zc
帶出角色支線262Please respect copyright.PENANA4vct2Au8gk
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破262Please respect copyright.PENANApD1qeZAnvp
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫262Please respect copyright.PENANAcHVysS13xZ
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴262Please respect copyright.PENANAn02XLQaB7n
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌262Please respect copyright.PENANAhoXK5H3Do7
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊262Please respect copyright.PENANAJ2Bzud5sbX
殺人犯vs富婆262Please respect copyright.PENANAyI1G2Qab4A
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌262Please respect copyright.PENANAb6NgFLxRfr
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴262Please respect copyright.PENANA6QiL92APr2
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕262Please respect copyright.PENANAz5vALCkEl3
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。262Please respect copyright.PENANAiTxo6eqCkA
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。262Please respect copyright.PENANAaRibhZqy8g
魂之詩262Please respect copyright.PENANAmBvLKzaelx
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