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昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜，好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部：『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdMWRYqTuFx
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場，將眾人打散重組成小團體，達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間，這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花，結果是點子很散，沒有流暢的起承轉合，以下是想到的橋段：320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRyHl1Zr38y
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW6tF784i3M
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyefJkLjQXo
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM86tZIW67K
帶出角色支線320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2EuGEkX3et
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡch0P0MaABn
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡivT7KoTCRY
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQobCR3uSOr
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ76Q1w23GUZ
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLRZDEp0ASL
殺人犯vs富婆320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI84FPtxS88
一輪深思後，將以上點子整合成四個章節：
1 祐嘉質問昌320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUkPclQxHB7
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8crSBUoYMB
3 智賀玩遊戲，友梨亞里割腕320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQcRvOrox57
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫，初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹，實際内容是邊寫邊想的。320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZsYlRUMwJS
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYchVPlT5GG
魂之詩320Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0cNf1XPkXI
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