
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』285Please respect copyright.PENANAoX9a4n2cwH
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:285Please respect copyright.PENANACpR1mqc9J6
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐285Please respect copyright.PENANAiVkbF6rnSI
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆285Please respect copyright.PENANA46ffsOkSlj
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲285Please respect copyright.PENANAKXDlotTY4Q
帶出角色支線285Please respect copyright.PENANAVKwPWb9QlC
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破285Please respect copyright.PENANAcc3opAwWq5
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫285Please respect copyright.PENANAhSpwPJAil4
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴285Please respect copyright.PENANAx6CGLxwTw1
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌285Please respect copyright.PENANAPSRN9ReZVx
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊285Please respect copyright.PENANA1DzXegGCbj
殺人犯vs富婆285Please respect copyright.PENANAPiVUxY8txD
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌285Please respect copyright.PENANAr7pe3WlwZ6
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴285Please respect copyright.PENANA8OVz0joDcB
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕285Please respect copyright.PENANAhynwJATW3O
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。285Please respect copyright.PENANABs2McU4sGP
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。285Please respect copyright.PENANAM7KRvhtnJX
魂之詩285Please respect copyright.PENANAsWeCEgPNIx
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