
相信自己的直覺,有時靈光一閃的念頭,比深思熟慮的結果更令人拍案驚奇。因為心血來潮的靈感放棄一個月的進度也是常有的事。當時亦然,直覺認為劇本尚有不足,我就相信直覺而停筆,重新審視故事。
首先是第十八章的部份,重頭戲是昌因為大小姐毀容而自責,覺得自己能力不足而拖累大小姐,崩潰痛哭,顯示昌柔弱的一面。然而大小姐沒有責備昌,突顯二人的牽絆堅如磐石。357Please respect copyright.PENANAvUo6Yb5TvR
舊作『在樹林裡的她』寫過類似的劇情,理應很容易掌握才對,是甚麼在妨礙我呢?357Please respect copyright.PENANAVIxLeOpbAS
昌:「是我。」357Please respect copyright.PENANATcDlVeWUKC
甚麼!?357Please respect copyright.PENANAla0eRinYAi
昌:「是小看我嗎?你這隻軟體生物。我才不會為了此等小事就崩潰。說,我的靈感原型是誰。」
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(羅貝爾特+法夫尼爾)x沃爾特÷2,比起女僕,執事的成份比較高。357Please respect copyright.PENANADnNTZzQMxY
昌:「這算大小姐變成了他媽哥池,依然面不改容鞠躬盡瘁才是真正的女僕吧。」357Please respect copyright.PENANADJ9YIlGI3Z
你的執念也太重!不過,這的確符合你的設定啦。357Please respect copyright.PENANA2nyzkTmtpy
昌:「知道就馬上把故事重寫,你這隻章魚。」357Please respect copyright.PENANA9dnxTfakho
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可惡的高腳七,一針見血打出大暴擊,令人無法反駁。那麼,將劇本這樣改一改——改到就有鬼啦!完全沒有靈感啊!357Please respect copyright.PENANAUY7nq8R99E
我不寫了!JoJo!357Please respect copyright.PENANAbWPGrwjUqg
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昌:「你不是還有CP要推嗎?」357Please respect copyright.PENANAV8fuw5NQNl
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那就,暫時休筆!357Please respect copyright.PENANAMuF2R9fHsV
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