【我的第二首 rap 歌詞〈小丑〉】
https://www.penana.com/article/1194990
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【〈夏之熱力學〉令人噁心的發想來源】
https://www.penana.com/article/1175654
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這是我第一次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成)，因為我節奏還不會抓，所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏＆旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉by W.H.
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結：
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
寫了上百首新詩，也聽過不少 rap 的我，本以為 rap 不難寫，沒想到一開寫才發現：rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多！這麼多字要怎麼生？他人事件絕對不足以支撐，只有親身經歷的真實，才有辦法用細節和強烈情緒 (e.g., 噁心) 來描寫。
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不到一個晚上寫出這首 rap 歌詞，證明我的想法正確。
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rap 要配上節奏來唸，雖然我的音感還不錯 (以前是合唱團團員，也玩過MIDI)，但節奏感不夠強，所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏＆旋律，不過歌詞完全是原創。
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之後會慢慢發展自己的節奏能力，使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 來做節奏＋作曲，配上我的原創歌詞。
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韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到，rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在，之後再放上節奏和旋律；所以等我寫熟一點，應該會直接寫歌詞，之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
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寫 rap 歌詞，也算是另類新詩，還滿有趣；因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大，也比較直白，所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識，未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
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最緊要有意思！！
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【博客來書店：《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806
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