【我的第二首 rap 歌詞〈小丑〉】
https://www.penana.com/article/1194990
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【〈夏之熱力學〉令人噁心的發想來源】
https://www.penana.com/article/1175654
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這是我第一次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉by W.H.
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Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析586Please respect copyright.PENANA6fVTyqPAOx
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能586Please respect copyright.PENANAJj59mubKO4
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用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本
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那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己586Please respect copyright.PENANAqyAO2fvoUU
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?586Please respect copyright.PENANAjEeGExcn86
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無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它586Please respect copyright.PENANA10XlaqAZOi
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管586Please respect copyright.PENANAF6lE7T4Dta
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命586Please respect copyright.PENANA3AXxdKls3w
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?586Please respect copyright.PENANAwjpPG0VWJh
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說586Please respect copyright.PENANAfctL4obeqk
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它586Please respect copyright.PENANAal7HiPv3HF
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?586Please respect copyright.PENANAODrwoXkffo
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說586Please respect copyright.PENANAeaj3ANJm4A
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它586Please respect copyright.PENANA989zS6WSx1
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap 的我,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一開寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!這麼多字要怎麼生?他人事件絕對不足以支撐,只有親身經歷的真實,才有辦法用細節和強烈情緒 (e.g., 噁心) 來描寫。
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不到一個晚上寫出這首 rap 歌詞,證明我的想法正確。
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rap 要配上節奏來唸,雖然我的音感還不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
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之後會慢慢發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 來做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
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韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
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寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
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最緊要有意思!!
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
https://www.books.com.tw/products/0010815806
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