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連著兩天,發布了超級暗黑風的新詩〈心火〉和〈安全感〉,我自己都有點受不了,今天上架一首十分王道、正氣凜然的新詩〈斗室〉。8964 copyright protection143PENANAbGFDn1IhaK 維尼
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〈斗室〉寫成的時間比〈心火〉和〈安全感〉早,可以看出形式上的差異——前者的詩句很多都是煞尾句 (詩句是完整一句作結),後兩者的詩句有不少迴行 (詩句跨到下一行),給讀者的感覺大不相同:煞尾剛硬乾脆,直截了當,加上〈斗室〉幾乎都押「ㄤ (-ang)」韻,是音調響亮的韻腳,讀起來鏗鏘有力;而迴行纏繞迂曲,於綿長描述有利,又帶有陰柔風,和〈心火〉這類暗黑故事詩的調性相符。8964 copyright protection143PENANATZ5oqhhnyp 維尼
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