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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTuSW9tP2X1
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvpCi0tLF3W
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgMdOZyMuOY
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrWfXsQwguk
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0R0mdEAzDp
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB0GLxNk3w7
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJToGoYrWzB
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAbgLwq6u7i
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwFcehz05qH
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Ogzof0aK6
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9BNcSNoEKX
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4uwFKmIAwV
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2CnrsJUIcM
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhSxHtoqLEx
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrlajtOT6rJ
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaWBONASmeS
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGQAj8AjKGu
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFfd4zSGUi
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEYzN7bPS9I
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEUMfh7Ytw5
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhvpXh6u4zd
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtYmyvg4111
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtNh5a1oIa
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Tg05rIrjW
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRsJ05oCrOK
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp1059BfLVU
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡytcGOedUx5
490Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrHjMG7cYyn
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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