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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzBQhflzAvU
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhVBjF2bDXX
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqZ1OmEz7bD
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcijByrQuCy
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtEk4Hg0GxC
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjQeCVYQ05l
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7gSJFQBdPP
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5AvXXDBSn1
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFohZMz25aG
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA84GtF2Bgo
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmf7vLpeRCt
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNqzOpUIwtN
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGwAG25143U
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKYpIwfkCzd
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But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKW0JDjQKCX
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA2gn0PnYC2
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiZRvC5YlPu
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5JEHjgbMik
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAQd4fVLwol
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Eog5PuddN
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxoUNqD7mC
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIuOc3t4ngi
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXlBXVvqu5k
541Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtecxEp0Ff
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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