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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWlPAtFc2oI
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO3lhI1Qwv5
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuP7UFlqkc1
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgOFLFQgc0Z
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqku5QenHt
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsC7868XfCj
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8hZovxHP15
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS2pbPci4pe
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSbm32cm4Rf
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡku1SrKsL9p
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFwtws1uLsf
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdODIsudrm1
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaJFiVkyrRA
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzCn10BWZDR
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLpNqrmG52B
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvB84TiDfbt
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDHAzHL1fCi
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqGnE62Pi8R
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp9JNjBzU4C
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZVNbftkokW
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO8qY1JGveQ
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyOkqeh9DRz
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf1Eb57el0m
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUlEdSpx5aH
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlEjBSYQeMd
545Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmxxGyvBBdk
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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