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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmUIF1XrCa8
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbPaWk6c6YT
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjeZbXnMsKr
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfi3DVSru97
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCDR3ZNCykz
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzjvP869XAP
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKmPEiv1dM7
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdATofIfLIy
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWPrUtxFgbr
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3Khr2h8ZZ3
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXYDXWgztkx
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ32DSjSDMri
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB8EMH6juf2
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzL5xZWW2va
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3kU2iZqwJF
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS02GUmeoAb
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7swbPmMEpL
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡofclzWiiTu
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnHRUK3LAzx
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkn0NyJ4ZTs
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1wQtEPq6DH
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ25otasZOtZ
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxtdBRnYiuE
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwsvY2jndQI
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjg4sdpu7Kq
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf3IZtXkef2
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMUHjPL5hig
522Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi6mgEhpZBS
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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