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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdTauGi0Mqc
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY3fVhqb3J1
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVfNjWfT353
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoBomcEMWf6
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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgs6Oe0M5J
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlHsQzSxo3d
437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN1uFb28LBj
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIpP9oROGeI
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWuyP9n53PD
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ318uRecLK4
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnZiQHOatFt
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But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTW1mpVqYCW
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡovCZjPQ9Mz
437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFWP43l8amL
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeToRkjNgCf
437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSXF8euZpUT
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk5rqjlLVt2
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，437Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0Dm3VfOrCV
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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