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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuUNRDpYcF9
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPKEMZBxn7c
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9qnTTjv2oB
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEOw9aeriIl
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVQaeNo6xCp
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCMz7N6y2cC
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa7ASW4EQDl
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw1Hg4NiUnl
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnzE0JWdc6r
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrUr3Cr8Qye
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkmml2cKvxj
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaCua2JWgyJ
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI47nRZENTs
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUHVRHwfBYu
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyAn0PAzD8h
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyfgIMI9YVT
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe5wZgr7RRJ
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgIxO9SoBST
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmaL6gByGQH
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhzSFOOAYVm
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhTH9mg4Gqw
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMPlhcB14jc
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ20wqzS3NqW
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0hZH5WRP6w
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxURfWmCQq
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNSEQUuRPFu
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKdgteSlhU
467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqjArSLZnED
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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