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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMq7mTIb2Vs
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡALv9fN8OvZ
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiEOrm0PT2p
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7mAT2114FQ
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNJB1WLcYzJ
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyLRynY5huA
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoHZ2zKBXUq
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjGVTt6sqUx
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHF9bzH7mtR
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkDG5MJD4og
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhCeXZ8x0e7
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5IlFVbVu1U
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡve5Y2cAq4K
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡetoHywy9pr
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEy1qcSJsCd
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ77uLOl0aqu
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyTOAZqBrth
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuHUDe64nIN
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuOYsoBsch8
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcfi6iLg6mx
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1lIq5xylFd
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Vnz48dXe3
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJqgDY6JL0q
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvwb7UahkCB
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjjIn0voyoF
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbQp3BCHAs5
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb6xGdgC2CM
489Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJzcuGxGqLA
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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