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致熱愛思想,熱愛動漫的──灰無道大大。8964 copyright protection215PENANAiABnkaneCf 維尼
以下是《Stranger》的讀者心得。8964 copyright protection215PENANAc6bPzyDL2x 維尼
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標籤:原創/短篇/懸疑/驚悚/香港作家/情人/8964 copyright protection215PENANArpasmgORas 維尼
需求:知道我是否該把此故事分成幾回?8964 copyright protection215PENANAGdFqNsJ0XU 維尼
已看章節:#0~#18964 copyright protection215PENANAy0OrVbTaz3 維尼
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一篇,共20分鐘。8964 copyright protection215PENANAQ90AVrYbxP 維尼
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這部懸疑感很重,作為短篇看到最後,帶出一個道理,心理承受力低的人不要做家裡蹲(?),我也認識一位朋友是這樣,ps:沒有發生悲劇。8964 copyright protection215PENANAA3LRW2vMew 維尼
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回到正題,我覺得這部不成幾回並沒有任何影響,如果非要分成一回一回,我覺得可以分成四回,如下:8964 copyright protection215PENANAHKNbzYiizb 維尼
第一回可以到:……難道老婦人不是鄰居,而是她的親人?8964 copyright protection215PENANA2HIt4qWi5m 維尼
第二回可以到:……傑克的心情有如晴天霹靂,他拿起一瓶啤酒,仰頭一口氣灌下去。8964 copyright protection215PENANAsnM6jubnOd 維尼
第三回可以到:……轟隆一聲,公寓裡回歸到一片寂靜。鮮紅的血跡開始從書架底下緩緩蕞延開來。8964 copyright protection215PENANA2UnBEpOPk3 維尼
第四回就可以直接到完結~8964 copyright protection215PENANA3Ugbbogbu9 維尼
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就是分成一回一回以後,就需要在每回開頭擴寫來接縫上一回的內容,但第四回就不需要。8964 copyright protection215PENANATB5H1JoWRX 維尼
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最後了,我也來宣傳一下,大概沒人介意吧?8964 copyright protection215PENANA9jNJ6jaySP 維尼
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