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在書店拿起書時,我總是感到十分羞恥。8964 copyright protection278PENANApL6KpEfjK0 維尼
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臺灣本地的書跟日本過來的翻譯書,光是簡介就能看出水準的差異。8964 copyright protection278PENANAsXfiCl6YOk 維尼
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我們缺乏良好的閱讀風氣,以及自學的動力和管道,這樣的結果就反映在產業上、乃至於作品當中。8964 copyright protection278PENANAkviIwpm41W 維尼
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在日本,書背的簡介、或者書腰的宣傳詞可能是由該書作者,或者由該作責編撰寫;而臺灣應該也是這樣。8964 copyright protection278PENANAi195jSJUNE 維尼
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光以簡介而言,則可以分成兩邊敘述。8964 copyright protection278PENANAjAONW3iVSH 維尼
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倘若是由編輯所寫,代表我們的編輯不懂得怎麼推書,畢竟在這個產業當中,編輯基本上都過著血汗勞工一般的日子,我認為這確實情有可原。8964 copyright protection278PENANAtdaks7nhsW 維尼
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日本編輯的薪資水準應該比較高,那相對能找到的人也會程度好一點。8964 copyright protection278PENANAmqC3FuTPdT 維尼
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至於臺灣,以現在的薪資狀況而言基本上都是用真愛在做事,薪水也就那個樣子,實在不好意思要求人家,畢竟多做事錢也不會變多。8964 copyright protection278PENANAXKso2og83L 維尼
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當然,這些都是我蒐集各種網站的資訊,不一定完全正確就是了。8964 copyright protection278PENANAoVr1XTK1Jt 維尼
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至於另一邊,倘若是由該書作者所寫,那代表問題就相當嚴重。8964 copyright protection278PENANAVrE1KfLcny 維尼
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而進一步來說,這個可能性還相當大。8964 copyright protection278PENANAtHHS1fiuga 維尼
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畢竟編輯有很多事情要忙,把簡介這種東西交給作者本人操刀也不足為奇。8964 copyright protection278PENANAYnj177gYpp 維尼
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而在這種時候,若是市面上多是那個樣子的簡介,就代表作者也就是那樣。8964 copyright protection278PENANAveFYbX8JTc 維尼
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我時常因為封面插圖而拿起書,看了下背後的簡介就放下書。8964 copyright protection278PENANA3koAgYhZhB 維尼
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光看簡介就覺得可以不用看。8964 copyright protection278PENANAIpF1flnuuH 維尼
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儘管不排除有那種正文寫得好,但不太會寫簡介的作者存在,但基本上能寫出好簡介,正文也寫得好的作者機率出現更高一點。8964 copyright protection278PENANAI8f7k21SMS 維尼
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簡介是廣告,利用那僅有的篇幅向大家說「請把我買回家吧」,這種珍貴的宣傳機會應該要好好把握。8964 copyright protection278PENANA1fRJUnjWhb 維尼
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以下的文章,則是要如何撰寫簡介的分享。像是有哪些值得注意的事情,也會用實際的例子來展示。而這些內容,都是我自己學習整理而來,僅供大家參考。8964 copyright protection278PENANAIX2DQGGta4 維尼
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另外,文章中所用來舉例的簡介,都是由我自行撰寫,當然,有應用到他人作品當作範例的地方,我撰寫的簡介已經徵求到作者同意,得以在此發表。而這邊也感謝 VIA 和伍德·瓦懷特,因為有你們兩位,這個文章才得以成篇。8964 copyright protection278PENANAmK883zyyDo 維尼
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額外補充一點,上述對於產業的各種心得,都是出自我個人的意見,跟兩位作者無關,望知悉。8964 copyright protection278PENANA8df6iiP0CM 維尼
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那麼,接下來我們正式開始吧。8964 copyright protection278PENANAEu4IoGCv9p 維尼
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首先,第一步要搞清楚「簡介」和「大綱」的區別。8964 copyright protection278PENANADG6HsJT6lT 維尼
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這兩者的區別是「受眾」,也就是「寫給誰看的」。8964 copyright protection278PENANAPq7tVyLZlS 維尼
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以簡介而言,簡單來說就是廣告,是寫給「買書的讀者」,以及沒看過這本書,「你想吸引他來讀的人」。8964 copyright protection278PENANA9QkDHLFlav 維尼
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而大綱,則是寫給「編輯」或者「自己」看的,用來整理劇情脈絡、告訴編輯這部作品的設計圖,展現作品的價值。8964 copyright protection278PENANAV0hZT4w3eJ 維尼
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在撰寫簡介和大綱時,呈現的手法會有不同。簡介是透過一些方法吸引人來看,大綱則是作者本人的紀錄,以及用簡單的方式告訴編輯這個故事到底發生什麼事,看出版社要不要用。8964 copyright protection278PENANA7f8X8P71TA 維尼
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因此,簡介必須要吊人胃口,大綱則是愈清楚簡單愈好。在這一部分,就得提到所謂的資訊量。8964 copyright protection278PENANAnf5Lk4HqUS 維尼
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在你的故事當中,什麼東西是能作為吸引,能直接寫在簡介上的,又有什麼是不需要寫出來的,要自己思考分辨。8964 copyright protection278PENANAWj7OyvY7OD 維尼
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如果是直接用文字說明的,應該不太好懂,以下則進入舉例環節。8964 copyright protection278PENANAJvWeuSQX1G 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection278PENANAHA5GWAy6Z8 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection278PENANAVYyoDyCgcG 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANAP0vS5GcFWF 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection278PENANANxdw61JE5m 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection278PENANArMl9HTiReq 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection278PENANAFH4M5YFKxJ 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection278PENANA3wcbtdIMR4 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection278PENANAvfnCW3hTI4 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection278PENANAgEAT6p1Hhz 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection278PENANAPHiYgvdzvR 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection278PENANAmAoeJnnSLN 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection278PENANA0NhEs5JYX0 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection278PENANActH9Ew8h0U 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection278PENANA5Re1So3eJ1 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection278PENANAo3E2eRj4KC 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection278PENANA1GaFqeKsMa 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection278PENANALg3lCZh5mB 維尼
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在上述的簡介文字中,有很多是我沒有交代的。8964 copyright protection278PENANAU1yrzU3V8Z 維尼
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包括男主角賀輔的能力,以及故事碰上怎樣的麻煩,前者是因為這是故事比較核心的設定之一,後者則是受限於篇幅,因此就簡單提一下,引起讀者的好奇。8964 copyright protection278PENANAZVthXbAuH9 維尼
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而我有交代的資訊,包含:介紹男女主角大致的性格、兩人相處的方式、稍微介紹他們擁有怎樣的背景,有偵探要素,因此選擇提到偵探事務所,至於房租部分,則是表示他們行動的動機與目的,代表他們是為了賺錢而展開活動。8964 copyright protection278PENANAntOAUiBEVc 維尼
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這邊先提一個重點,依照簡介所擁有的篇幅多寡,來決定文字的重點和想要透漏的資訊量。8964 copyright protection278PENANAXnYTvMaeNK 維尼
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以這一篇而言,因為我不打算寫太長,當初我鎖定的重點,就放在如何呈現本作具有魅力的「輕鬆的氛圍」上,而透過角色的對話互動,就是個最直接的表達方式,這麼做還能直接套用原作中出現的句子,也不太會離題。8964 copyright protection278PENANA2Is4ISmezp 維尼
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下面再舉個例子。8964 copyright protection278PENANAQulR3TTcPt 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection278PENANAQZ4A4Rw1c5 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection278PENANAXHZgkXhMB1 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANA9rfSIR0uZN 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection278PENANAfhLWh6W2Be 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection278PENANAUSl71vXVjs 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection278PENANA3tFSMmSU1R 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection278PENANAzYZDoEsHpi 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection278PENANAkfQKPFeXz2 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection278PENANAeqWbT4Z9KR 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection278PENANAw47O1HIpIm 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection278PENANAjBAnVJVraM 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection278PENANAILTwbEnL56 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection278PENANAg1x6T0isZl 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection278PENANA3GcuGaKEvs 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection278PENANAI2Z8M3D4fe 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection278PENANAz4c1Tp3Bxo 維尼
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本作屬於近未來的運動作品,在這個簡介當中,我有交代的資訊包括:提一下本作核心的運動項目、介紹男主角是個學生、他所面對的第一個衝突,也就是有女生寄情書給他、介紹女主角、並且帶出本作的主線,亦即在比賽中奪下優勝這個目標。8964 copyright protection278PENANAb47EfNRbAE 維尼
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至於我沒交代的資訊包含:有哪些重要事件、對手角色、訓練內容等等。8964 copyright protection278PENANAUcWZJTeluM 維尼
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這也是受限於篇幅的關係。而這個簡介所採取的策略是,將第一個最讓人感到期待的衝突點拋出來,並且順勢用對話句刻劃角色。畢竟拿起這本書的人,肯定知道男女主會參加比賽,只是「因為什麼契機」參賽,用這樣的場景來吸引讀者翻閱正文。8964 copyright protection278PENANATtzLrbRV3G 維尼
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這些是關於策略與資訊量的說明。8964 copyright protection278PENANAGZlmzFxocL 維尼
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下面我們更進一步來談細節。8964 copyright protection278PENANAJddXw8PNnG 維尼
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我會用簡介中筆記的方式,來告訴大家一些重點。8964 copyright protection278PENANAgBckm73fIV 維尼
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這邊直接把第一篇複製來用。8964 copyright protection278PENANAn3V6BPuxmv 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection278PENANApfDbNryyJD 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection278PENANAFnecGE0hdQ 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAHkzS3XNxh1
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簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANA9RHZf2eWCM 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAw3Ed7gBKz4
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection278PENANAPO1BFtV3Ll 維尼
(描述故事的背景,發生在什麼地方。用偵探事務所這個實際的建築物,能讓讀者產生畫面。提到積欠房租是這是置入引人好奇的點,也順便帶入角色。)8964 copyright protection278PENANA8QVnxzf8F8 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA8thJ9Q5mnl
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection278PENANA94gNh2KIUL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA3GGkeGv2Ol
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(用對話句塑造角色。選用這句話是為了順便帶入男主角賀輔的名字。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAaQREuWA1aU 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA7SRpDUVQqj
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection278PENANACKX1yBirLn 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA8A8sbvqJL8
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(塑造男主角的人物性格。同時這也是原作中優秀的點,關於人物設計很優秀,相當貼近人心。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAE6D20u3tHF 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAMPmSaOeMak
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection278PENANAHELEbYlSG3 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAdJOTN2XwcG
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(跟讀者透露兩人的關係,以及交代男主角會做出什麼事,藉此塑造角色。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAQCL5WQuRol 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAA3uK92XQPR
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection278PENANAbSMCOk8Szw 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAmVqo5ZmfJm
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(由於只有對話句會顯得抽象,因此這邊用描述句介紹人物外觀,讓讀者產生畫面。也交代兩人當下的動作。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAxN9nD6TjeD 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAQJmqO4Mjtu
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection278PENANAB6H2FTQoYO 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANALrkAEyHnZz
8964 copyright protection278PENANAXaEp1MDM0P 維尼
「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection278PENANAhpyVnZqF3r 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA4s4IYzLV02
8964 copyright protection278PENANA1Xu4ATgoIt 維尼
(前面是間接透漏兩人的關係,這邊是直接提到。而這邊也更進一步交代本作有趣的地方,鮮活的對話。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAys1A9TkjyT 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAi7E6rNVa6H
8964 copyright protection278PENANAwFjt7prt1Y 維尼
在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection278PENANAuiTgOpZPbL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAyW4pFP3M6C
8964 copyright protection278PENANAgYVsKR8mee 維尼
兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection278PENANABJAhxGDqCM 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAjSUrDe1rFf
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(說明兩人展開行動的動機,下一句則是用具體的動作和地點讓讀者產生畫面。)8964 copyright protection278PENANARvVyDIg1Qg 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAZFejEomdz3
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection278PENANANpcESkv3Nr 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAicnVXRgEvR
8964 copyright protection278PENANAWzA2GTwEbH 維尼
「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection278PENANAuF9orF5dDy 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANASB38SqwSxA
8964 copyright protection278PENANAWKRBNjL2fH 維尼
(這邊的對話原本就很貼近人心,所以我就直接放過來。算是簡介中的主要亮點。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAkaGjIA2UXL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAMmjcFJefgG
8964 copyright protection278PENANAxvmnskkI3n 維尼
在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection278PENANAaU5py6aHoz 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANARQwCJssZzJ
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(帶入事件發生,用婦人點出委託者的身分,並引讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection278PENANArU84hFgYs9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA8fvGaHawWV
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection278PENANALc2mnz58yO 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAOV6y52ag3N
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection278PENANARQPJwrPh47 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAIBMXOK7EbS
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(基於篇幅考量,我並沒有寫太多推理或冒險的要素,只是稍微概括一下他們有麻煩上門,讓讀者產生興趣。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAw3GZt9KQ9o 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAwPX8sE8WlH
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282Please respect copyright.PENANAOztmtNAcbP
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接著則是第二篇的複製。8964 copyright protection278PENANA4kjrG0IsWV 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAWfHajqzy4O
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282Please respect copyright.PENANAyAzEL9VZ63
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection278PENANA0XqsSRfKjh 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAhH7laLGjGb
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection278PENANAPcI3BkKSHO 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAUqyxyFDr2m
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簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANAQX6h5kob2L 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAH3L5RqtLEA
8964 copyright protection278PENANApseYsbe7k7 維尼
機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection278PENANAseJl1YoACi 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAhyFdr5szFq
8964 copyright protection278PENANAEtHNDQVXQc 維尼
運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection278PENANAdaAwM4SDSE 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAlpB4FRlzZU
8964 copyright protection278PENANAIUy5MpMc0o 維尼
(直接介紹本作核心運動項目。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAtUMIFvXyHg 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAekoDGn7ksq
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection278PENANA8eejuRJxvX 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAXgp8rmqcQh
8964 copyright protection278PENANAcfaQ5gGU4H 維尼
(交代主角是誰,有什麼人物背景。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAbRrRx7ynks 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA06S9sfmZqZ
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection278PENANALcFyEr9Nae 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAuKrFtY6N6V
8964 copyright protection278PENANAIRHCizMlg6 維尼
(描述第一個衝突發生。吸引讀者目光。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAI22bJ9cnXp 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAZ172wXo4K9
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection278PENANALgBMZQHx0r 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAA6lZfAL1df
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(點名重要場景的地點,並且帶入女主角。先描述外觀與年紀,讓讀者有初步印象。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAZr6BJqobvY 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAkaE4d9gknf
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection278PENANAyK3wth9SuH 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAZOlNCTslYb
8964 copyright protection278PENANAWrorUU0tBp 維尼
(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAaNIzW1VDIo 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA57EsYeb7iO
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection278PENANAiJCh4S8anC 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA7DeWcwkTUN
8964 copyright protection278PENANAzvaO5UxZ7j 維尼
(描繪女主角當下的表情與動作,用美少女來讓讀者讀下去。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAqfbaQlsjQD 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAStzr4dy0xR
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection278PENANAOEk4AgQqZF 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANATQKwo5v5Fz
8964 copyright protection278PENANA7TWFOT7Qbe 維尼
(利用男主角的內心描述,貼近跟讀者的距離。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAwh6WH4UgCz 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAaIkNVs7QBU
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection278PENANA5oJhFbEDzs 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAQdN24djhxj
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(承上,上面是直接用對話句道出當下瞬間的反應,後面則是男主角意識到自己的反應。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAnGPk6e6aZS 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAkValbXDIIr
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection278PENANAmCmQdNRUwu 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAXcZpYSceju
8964 copyright protection278PENANAUffb7ZQrLs 維尼
(告訴讀者有事情即將發生,將描述重點放到女主角身上。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAoFtcU6XM7L 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA87B46wV7dU
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection278PENANAkTFd1fbugz 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAyOM2Par066
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(原來不是告白啊,像這樣出乎讀者意料,同時也讓讀者感到對後續故事的好奇。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAjBREPaf8Sq 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAMCL25Q6bJ2
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection278PENANAyr39d4Fqtc 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA8xgDJ7ZSoO
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(闡明男主的背景與反差,以及女主角所朝向的目標,關於兩人邂逅所展開的故事。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAG1EZ5GT1qL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAsDVXa2peVq
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection278PENANAztfbpfcjti 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANASFN9UtBSyr
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(最後再次強化本作的主線,要在運動比賽中奪勝這件事。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAhN9tVxo3Y9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAwbzIWtY2Ld
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282Please respect copyright.PENANAfblEv0zA5P
8964 copyright protection278PENANAWa3nAIhlo1 維尼
以上兩段簡介都屬於短的簡介,而倘若有更多文字運用,就能寫長簡介。8964 copyright protection278PENANAelG07kbqM7 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAvDCYNKHmeT
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而這種就能交代更多資訊與衝突,也多半會被運用在參賽文章的簡介,也就是所謂的「大綱式簡介」。8964 copyright protection278PENANAvsZZAPNEim 維尼
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大綱是給評審與編輯看的,需要清楚交代事件轉折,讓評審知道你有將轉折與結構安排在故事當中,同時也能讀出你是否了解本作的賣點,以及能讓他們推廣的方向。8964 copyright protection278PENANAA0QDq4PQN5 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA2ClzY6l2c4
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簡介則是寫給讀者看的,需要交代出衝突,但又不能寫得太多,這樣就不會想實際閱讀故事了。8964 copyright protection278PENANAW4cHpiJFvL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA0NJKTEfiQi
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所以,為了滿足這種兩邊都要的狀況,比賽文章才會多採用「大綱式簡介」8964 copyright protection278PENANAS7oPZ5GJ8Z 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA5Olmziwcca
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下面的故事是由我撰寫,但因為是舊作,在結構上並不是太過穩固,但還是能給大家作為參考。8964 copyright protection278PENANAs2WEo9YlZA 維尼
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282Please respect copyright.PENANAc6RKXHfwpg
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection278PENANApc2V5RO1DI 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA9WtTtIM6dr
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282Please respect copyright.PENANAMv5IKjflN7
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection278PENANAOe1u2Ijp1y 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1sNjAMZ3iv
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簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANAyLtnRBGO4P 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAn16MvMzYVJ
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曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection278PENANAQLgVgpWzE6 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAIr8iFpaNzR
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遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection278PENANALdae59XIew 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAPFFDdYr1uW
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升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection278PENANACGoFHatahb 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANACjq41brlv9
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection278PENANA3Yy7fNwS7h 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAFFlIJ5k7mP
8964 copyright protection278PENANAAIROdxD2gz 維尼
她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection278PENANANGQldb5dB9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA3qWJkHsIvn
8964 copyright protection278PENANAvAps04N9vc 維尼
「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAICnfCrSz5w 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAhpRC4Ld2CE
8964 copyright protection278PENANAbJrQqwbIJe 維尼
「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAUjpqqpeBty 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAMse6AGcFmV
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAk56hgSFgB9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAZTJMrAP23x
8964 copyright protection278PENANAPBFymHIVhO 維尼
因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection278PENANAIiCrCk2DLY 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAbSbLbbrMjQ
8964 copyright protection278PENANAFHFuVp7RDN 維尼
然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection278PENANAqobPg3lNxN 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAgiKedzoRdZ
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection278PENANA4pcx70m1JG 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAKzlwecYch4
8964 copyright protection278PENANAhmKxkWiBIj 維尼
不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection278PENANAfhOrGdTHfM 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANANAhoo1a2Sg
8964 copyright protection278PENANATSjceUMopL 維尼
千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection278PENANAj52LR0IEJh 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANANraz4xSncT
8964 copyright protection278PENANAU7pOdRrBH6 維尼
然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection278PENANAs87LWIkJFg 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAlxdxC7U3al
8964 copyright protection278PENANA0CNo1hMltN 維尼
「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection278PENANABXg9za614O 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAXgAXPx141T
8964 copyright protection278PENANAUygflrVmMX 維尼
面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection278PENANA8ba1WRayOk 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA9BkEEj41JD
8964 copyright protection278PENANAF1GMCO4Mo1 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection278PENANAhKUiMyPFds 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAV1V06AgVTP
8964 copyright protection278PENANAt7CXrVUaNB 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection278PENANAFG7ZrLTQO9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAKcr7SCsoX6
8964 copyright protection278PENANAS5ym9CmhRf 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection278PENANAr4DcLwHUxG 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAlJjgMmjkCz
8964 copyright protection278PENANA1QUBu9NYEc 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection278PENANAiaESWqMdSr 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAfkiCtu58gV
8964 copyright protection278PENANATcxhNUeSzU 維尼
「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAT9rDW1JnUY 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAQHHwcOfanI
8964 copyright protection278PENANAZryoBNBqCt 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection278PENANAfK3agVyccW 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAPGVZqOlgAq
8964 copyright protection278PENANAlrovPOkkTp 維尼
漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection278PENANAbXcKLvUQDI 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAuPOgPXiiCI
8964 copyright protection278PENANA3abRUKQSdS 維尼
先給大家讀過一遍,下面則是一樣用實際解說:8964 copyright protection278PENANALv1zDfJ3On 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAFvq1xBi4ht
8964 copyright protection278PENANAJlxfcs1HR0 維尼
8964 copyright protection278PENANAbumDT5KLxv 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANABFHAKXP0Wv
8964 copyright protection278PENANAW3v0WVzOco 維尼
《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection278PENANAYJT3tgVk5o 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAd7qVMBy7Sm
8964 copyright protection278PENANAhVb05lKlKs 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAekf8LcPVbS
8964 copyright protection278PENANAA12I3mNJKy 維尼
原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection278PENANA0KIod2Tfgj 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAxKK30k9GNm
8964 copyright protection278PENANAcpvRDO2SAF 維尼
簡介:8964 copyright protection278PENANAyhnytroqNk 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAlZXxnsAqo3
8964 copyright protection278PENANAiDedSyhQao 維尼
曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection278PENANAbq0E8qJ5Jl 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAaDundm337a
8964 copyright protection278PENANAv4v338RGV8 維尼
(點出主角,交代其人物背景。交代事件起因,且用實際場景來描繪畫面。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAvDXMI715hE 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANATyeDUcKT74
8964 copyright protection278PENANAPYoToxUuSs 維尼
遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection278PENANAlF0EU7Phwz 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAP1j25gqcQc
8964 copyright protection278PENANAG9okptbTxN 維尼
(明確地講述其目標。也就是本作的核心。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAGpSJVoiYE3 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA3RYMpIG7Km
8964 copyright protection278PENANABJapDdE926 維尼
升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection278PENANAEb5NioB9Ub 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAjyQZjNLo2C
8964 copyright protection278PENANAd380hC86hl 維尼
(交代人物的身分,以及間接透露年齡。帶出第一個發生的衝突。勾起讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection278PENANA5KMWTia2NV 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAPNRsFcecv4
8964 copyright protection278PENANAkfARXcSRJT 維尼
就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection278PENANAYrXVv0e0XX 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA9XmlAA3WWX
8964 copyright protection278PENANAHVWFj8nWMz 維尼
(讓讀者出乎意料。並且導入女主角。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAIHERMoYElw 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1DQBt363Sx
8964 copyright protection278PENANAJPWMF0pUIx 維尼
她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection278PENANAtXFF1YtUf5 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAX6g70nvh3A
8964 copyright protection278PENANAuNP2Mycl9W 維尼
(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAeSApZW6MU0 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAvZGC7TuIHn
8964 copyright protection278PENANAiOKBU0Y9ai 維尼
「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAAb1xX91VFw 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAEeZhCTM9mb
8964 copyright protection278PENANAaLM3hgxJma 維尼
(塑造人物反差,進一步吸引讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAhtJ8GVZaOK 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAakn7P4jHxM
8964 copyright protection278PENANAr2aQ11qnO4 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAaVgJWAKyL1
8964 copyright protection278PENANAdyycmLVYBF 維尼
「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection278PENANA3BANv2ge82 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAUrk7LToAtI
8964 copyright protection278PENANAaIgY2iH2mO 維尼
「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAIgOy93MVg5 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAZsFjpOXzgL
8964 copyright protection278PENANA9kUl99T0Ih 維尼
(運用對話與行為態度塑造人物形象。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAFMkDdXQW6Y 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAqRSO2X4hHz
8964 copyright protection278PENANAnfzCMakmLr 維尼
因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection278PENANAfCidtsgiSL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAY7Iwg5O4vC
8964 copyright protection278PENANAh0nGjl7BZl 維尼
然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection278PENANAngF6XNl7mi 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1jCbn8C8vH
8964 copyright protection278PENANAprILg2rA3Y 維尼
(切換到男主角視角。反正肯定會度過危機,這邊就直接告訴評審跟讀者結果。)8964 copyright protection278PENANA2b2FfkCUyl 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAs7MZ9m6KYW
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection278PENANAMligBag9PA 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANANIotfDbUHh
8964 copyright protection278PENANAwQAUqxMT4M 維尼
(描述男主角的行動,卻遭到未知人物的阻撓。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAHV8qNUOHOK 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA3nkbd6zjpK
8964 copyright protection278PENANAkMjGARDP7M 維尼
不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection278PENANAkaz2hbXxmy 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1ic115esaw
8964 copyright protection278PENANAsf27ePdwkY 維尼
(具體描繪出場景,講述這個危機實際上是什麼情況。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAIyBREa9ISS 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA0VJ6yMrTo5
8964 copyright protection278PENANAxcbt89iPwf 維尼
千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection278PENANAVqYaBwoaKU 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA9dR3mkiSIh
8964 copyright protection278PENANAvMzT8swAdV 維尼
(講出事情的結果,但不告訴讀者是怎麼解決的,這樣讀者就能自己翻書。而後面一句則是這個事件帶來的結果,則是告訴評審有好好讓該事件落幕。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAaluLJrcJ3v 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANABDST9eDHrE
8964 copyright protection278PENANAztG1LScVgj 維尼
然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection278PENANAhz9YYDhafn 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANACLqQSuNP6D
8964 copyright protection278PENANAPPvhufWyL8 維尼
(描述新的衝突。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAvr9mBXxVxW 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAN1BIicmfyn
8964 copyright protection278PENANAZqQYUM37x0 維尼
「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAADOZXywdTs 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1ZwmRqFq58
8964 copyright protection278PENANA7PcTouUJOC 維尼
(運用對話句貼近讀者,並塑造男主角的形象。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAqj7t7UY7MU 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAHLx6MhFAj8
8964 copyright protection278PENANAqrQTk3r8Mk 維尼
面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection278PENANAWLjVudT4qZ 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAKZ0D28WWgA
8964 copyright protection278PENANADQ5EGSFFWE 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection278PENANA7BNQqQQkIY 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAzDdzLMUIYK
8964 copyright protection278PENANAhVwjhXDF7c 維尼
(描述動機,以及他所面對的挑戰。)8964 copyright protection278PENANABF0QGSDleF 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANACTPV1o4Hlz
8964 copyright protection278PENANAVjzvCZu5cr 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection278PENANAKfuxGkyzfJ 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA98LzfXW7gh
8964 copyright protection278PENANA8VYyY4Q19q 維尼
(帶出男主角因為邂逅了女主角而有所轉變。也告訴評審你知道要讓人物產生變化。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAC0wzmu4f2O 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAPdLD8rea1u
8964 copyright protection278PENANA2L6smemcQK 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection278PENANAEsbxr2aiwg 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAVw2N8hSSjD
8964 copyright protection278PENANA3gs6GXgJ1H 維尼
(點出新的危機。用實際的情境,以及男主的狀況帶出來。)8964 copyright protection278PENANACeAnmW0p8f 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAiAUdMSE7m9
8964 copyright protection278PENANAJbdR0icJI8 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection278PENANAFNnaXXl70u 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAx8FEVaqv79
8964 copyright protection278PENANA8TGwMMHKdW 維尼
(讀者原以為只要助手幫忙就能輕鬆解決,但是──)8964 copyright protection278PENANATe1Kkzxzsc 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAEzxGfHGGwM
8964 copyright protection278PENANA1CLajlIJNF 維尼
「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection278PENANAcAA87AJ1Ko 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAOa3hCnTly9
8964 copyright protection278PENANA2HKAq3bvHb 維尼
(這個方案卻直接遭到否定,勾起讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAWCYWrqvTKi 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAi0tUywnJmK
8964 copyright protection278PENANAhpGElFi7Wb 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection278PENANAQ340ooEWnE 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAuTJ1lFH163
8964 copyright protection278PENANAXyIasb6lLd 維尼
(正面講述實際面對的困難,並帶出女主角行為的動機,接著說明事情還有轉機。而後面會是個怎樣的劇情解法,就要讀者實際翻書。)8964 copyright protection278PENANA6c67McKL7E 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA5mHxwIT4GI
8964 copyright protection278PENANArHdLypfPh0 維尼
漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection278PENANAJRODyCvvDH 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAiYKP7iT0yn
8964 copyright protection278PENANAsYw9fSBVTX 維尼
(稍微寫一下本作的要素,並且用最簡單的方式概述一下人物。)8964 copyright protection278PENANAd5LJZ882TY 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAkUPt1FMqKe
8964 copyright protection278PENANAv0JmSSYwGk 維尼
差不多就是這個感覺。8964 copyright protection278PENANAhpN0Qw2SXh 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAEiGr9DFqIM
8964 copyright protection278PENANADqUfMYuoJE 維尼
下面則是稍微整理一下重點,以及應該注意哪些地方。8964 copyright protection278PENANAUsxZfse8IH 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAVqipLBovrA
8964 copyright protection278PENANAHWh4uYyx7H 維尼
1.要點出這個故事的主線,讓大家知道這是個怎樣的故事。8964 copyright protection278PENANAmwyjo80iRu 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANApP6hgkdhLI
8964 copyright protection278PENANASvShPZ48yx 維尼
2.交代人物的動機,以及想要達成的目標,拉出故事主軸。8964 copyright protection278PENANAHMc5cgUNsS 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAbbW2v4SyJW
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3.利用對話句能塑造人物形象,展示出他的性格。有對白演出會更加生動。8964 copyright protection278PENANA14dD4jOhUW 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAiMfjOFPrj6
8964 copyright protection278PENANAYWSSzimwFm 維尼
4.藉著角色的內心描述能貼近讀者,讓人產生共鳴。8964 copyright protection278PENANAssA1RrBeWH 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA020fybSEuD
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5.描述出劇情轉折。挑重點寫。8964 copyright protection278PENANAtHUJqaG8LL 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAf0T6I8FXzo
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6.講出故事的衝突,拋出問題,但故意不寫劇情解法。8964 copyright protection278PENANAjxPgxE2fio 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAsgyyYR6PHh
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7.盡量用具體的文字呈現,無論是外觀或者環境描述,且不要講廢話。8964 copyright protection278PENANAL8sHvOupWn 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAogzSUSuBlH
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這邊舉例一下什麼是廢話:8964 copyright protection278PENANA818o3pr7Ga 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAtBHmbl5bHf
8964 copyright protection278PENANAP4zZ30Wm3s 維尼
在這種情況下,男主到底該怎麼辦呢?8964 copyright protection278PENANAmCZxLMjcJI 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA4ZMoqL4WAQ
8964 copyright protection278PENANA34iVEQydiw 維尼
──這句對讀者來說一點用也沒有,完全沒有帶來新的資訊,有寫等於沒寫,就是個垃圾句子。一看就可以知道這人不會寫簡介。8964 copyright protection278PENANAlSUXxuXsWy 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA0VuVk8Zk7N
8964 copyright protection278PENANArWxESd3tCv 維尼
簡介就是廣告,寫廢話等於浪費篇幅。能在重要地方浪費篇幅的人,不是不得要領,就是個不懂得自我學習的人,這種人的作品我完全不想看。8964 copyright protection278PENANAVxQci87Y3O 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANATN4WVnGB8w
8964 copyright protection278PENANAguJSsf05dJ 維尼
8.在撰寫簡介的同時,要表現出「想讓拿起這本書的人想讀讀看」的熱情。8964 copyright protection278PENANAyIYk8PO1P9 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAlMPymzzO87
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9.懂得用反差來吸引讀者。8964 copyright protection278PENANA9sIS49wIDw 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAPAUBiNJVVo
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10.讓讀者對於事件鋪陳有第一時間的想法,接著告訴他這種方法行不通。8964 copyright protection278PENANA6nnWj7sQZa 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANARc5KY3p0bX
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11.知道自己作品的賣點,並且帶出讀者應該會獲得的體驗,也就是「預計能從這本書得到什麼樂趣」。8964 copyright protection278PENANAIq0xjhjSIM 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANAdKa4EWNy4v
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舉例:跟女主角的約會事件會吸引讀者,所以寫簡介就最好提一下,你可以寫一句「為了克服害怕跟人互動的症狀,我跟她一起去了遊樂園,意外體驗到了夏日氣氛」,類似這種句子,當然順勢加入劇情衝突會比較完整,像是「然而,正當我們的關係即將更進一步時,過去背叛她的朋友卻出現在我們的面前」,大概是這種感覺。8964 copyright protection278PENANAyj61AGnmXi 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA3WaYJ1Jiyx
8964 copyright protection278PENANAPAFde9e88H 維尼
其他還有很多,想一想這本書會有什麼能讓讀者期待的地方。就寫進簡介裡面。這樣讀者想要感受這個體驗就會想買書。8964 copyright protection278PENANAN9ZrYK6lGp 維尼
282Please respect copyright.PENANA1VRtIysski
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基本上,不同的篇幅,不同的故事,對於簡介都會有一些各自的寫法,但核心概念就是要做為廣告,能吸引人去讀。8964 copyright protection278PENANAftgC9YL3hi 維尼
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12.除了從上述的例子抓一下感覺,其實最好還是找一些自己認為吸引人的簡介來臨摹,學習他人優秀的地方。8964 copyright protection278PENANAXruJcSSb14 維尼
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不同的作品呈現方式都會有所不同。8964 copyright protection278PENANA3l8huUJMgU 維尼
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簡介是一門技術。如果能寫出吸引人觀看故事的簡介,那就代表你具有明白自己作品的賣點、控制要透露多少資訊量,掌控自己文字的能力、當然也包含呈現出作者是否有自我學習的習慣,還有灌注多少熱情在這部作品上,表達究竟有多想要眼前的人讀讀看這部作品的心情。8964 copyright protection278PENANAZ3rGOY5r7P 維尼
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就連沒有天分的我都學到能侃侃而談,相信很多人也是能辦到的。8964 copyright protection278PENANAy8RKSZ3IVo 維尼
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拜託有愛就多動腦。努力提升自己。這樣投入的心血和態度是會反映在作品上的。8964 copyright protection278PENANAzNSB7PvQJK 維尼
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要讓大家看看你究竟多認真。而你自己又是對自己有多認真。8964 copyright protection278PENANAdZVoBqigzj 維尼
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在這塊土地上,這種認真的笨蛋愈多,肯定會為產業帶來一陣嶄新之風。8964 copyright protection278PENANAPtzzsYuk1k 維尼
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我還有很多需要學習的地方。寫這篇文章也是為了能見到更多厲害的對手出現,然後我會成為在這之中的第一。8964 copyright protection278PENANAW3n70PZftD 維尼
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同時,我也在追逐自己心中的第一。8964 copyright protection278PENANAWUteatGQZt 維尼
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那樣的人我想才是真正的創作者吧。8964 copyright protection278PENANAeatQexz5ux 維尼
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祝福大家。8964 copyright protection278PENANApDgqKFV5rb 維尼
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最後放上三部作品的連結,大家有空能稍微看一看。8964 copyright protection278PENANA200aqj2IFl 維尼
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