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No Plagiarism!1JxDetMHuk9iJYlitBfrposted on PENANA [裡面提到的新詩]〈發現 Penana〉8964 copyright protection194PENANAPHhFv9Hmmt 維尼
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我02/14/2023西洋情人節這天,註冊成為Penana的一份子。8964 copyright protection194PENANAqleOfuCky5 維尼
剛開始是以《W. H. 新詩集》做先頭部隊,因為從去年12月中旬直至目前(02/21/2023),我都還處於對新詩迷戀的狀態,也寫了不少,恰好可以放在這本新詩集裡。8964 copyright protection194PENANAmA3N48fxm8 維尼
之前我小說、童話、新詩、漫畫、塗鴉、隨筆等,均上架於鏡文學網站——當然,以後仍是——註冊Penana,是想多一處可以擺放我作品的地方。沒想到一來就發現,這裡太好玩了,特別是「創作挑戰」,讓我玩得不亦樂乎!加上大家的互動熱絡又有趣,我都捨不得離開,如果打開最近我電腦Chrome的歷史記錄,肯定是一片黃澄澄的P字。8964 copyright protection194PENANAd7NnujLJvG 維尼
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我在02/18寫了〈發現 Penana〉,收錄在《W. H. 新詩集》—— 這首詩,是我對這個心/新遊樂場的小小感想。以下是〈發現 Penana〉全文:8964 copyright protection194PENANAwnbn3SadA5 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉8964 copyright protection194PENANA1kQc1ljFZ6 維尼
西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection194PENANAvC2Iledegj 維尼
沒人給我金莎8964 copyright protection194PENANADu8fsYO0yj 維尼
也沒人給我花8964 copyright protection194PENANAE3OquuMVx1 維尼
待在電腦螢幕前的我8964 copyright protection194PENANA837MO1cmCa 維尼
握著滑鼠8964 copyright protection194PENANA77QDM6dvfX 維尼
在網上衝浪8964 copyright protection194PENANACMNvTbfIRh 維尼
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落水、8964 copyright protection194PENANASon67Mpkvl 維尼
爬上、8964 copyright protection194PENANAcHTzDHnAI7 維尼
越浪!8964 copyright protection194PENANA0f80A7tbeF 維尼
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快要相撞⋯8964 copyright protection194PENANAgNi71e6rgM 維尼
快要相撞!8964 copyright protection194PENANAy2TAJEyz18 維尼
我做了一個烏龜翻8964 copyright protection194PENANAV0mwlYa69c 維尼
來到奇妙的地方:8964 copyright protection194PENANAuRCF6p1D0W 維尼
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活潑的創意8964 copyright protection194PENANAnYlGzgamSt 維尼
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我騎著衝浪板8964 copyright protection194PENANApLmeQBI2sq 維尼
在這片大海徜徉8964 copyright protection194PENANAKFPa7NcXVE 維尼
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玩著玩著8964 copyright protection194PENANAqac8uItw9L 維尼
我都不想回家啦8964 copyright protection194PENANA5d0Ez4Lsr3 維尼
欸,不是8964 copyright protection194PENANAdMQ9hgeTAq 維尼
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我放下衝浪板,啊,8964 copyright protection194PENANAB1gaVq2Eo8 維尼
是滑鼠8964 copyright protection194PENANAPnrQAih75Y 維尼
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「情人節快樂!」8964 copyright protection194PENANAxUAHNZ1uLO 維尼
情人拿了一串8964 copyright protection194PENANAWJmjH2DFPH 維尼
黃澄澄的香蕉進來8964 copyright protection194PENANALP1ozycZhv 維尼
「我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection194PENANAk3DBMPu9PY 維尼
這是妳的最愛~」8964 copyright protection194PENANAAXKcJGKn3s 維尼
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我接過香蕉,凝視它們8964 copyright protection194PENANA3OD1cTPSWe 維尼
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一種甜香8964 copyright protection194PENANADB2TmQqa7f 維尼
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「好,我們來做香蕉船,8964 copyright protection194PENANAcZiVGU94UL 維尼
然後,我要繼續飛翔!」8964 copyright protection194PENANA0GPWPNdtYI 維尼
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「飛翔?」8964 copyright protection194PENANAVA25ZFhBEn 維尼
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「嗯,跟你說,8964 copyright protection194PENANANdMG0AnPBU 維尼
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找到一個好玩的地方⋯⋯」8964 copyright protection194PENANAbrRAYbgTA1 維尼
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情人和我一道8964 copyright protection194PENANAdpAdhQxfP9 維尼
走進廚房8964 copyright protection194PENANAukSH4hKu1O 維尼
在西洋情人節這天8964 copyright protection194PENANAvR3R3JXk7N 維尼
我打算帶他8964 copyright protection194PENANALdQbqwIqIq 維尼
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就在我新發現的8964 copyright protection194PENANAsQwPKbH3L9 維尼
心靈遊樂場。8964 copyright protection194PENANAdIqrei1cTm 維尼
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〈發現 Penana〉的創作背景及方式,我寫在留言區,也跟大家分享:8964 copyright protection194PENANAAVad5xa2tU 維尼
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「這是我第一次寫這麼長的詩(高中寫的不算),這首〈發現 Penana〉是我來Penana玩了近5天的感想:好活潑的地方啊,尤其創作挑戰,讓我玩得好開心!198Please respect copyright.PENANAv5mOyyZSIG
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雖說這首是「自由聯想詩」(自己覺得),不過裡面幾個概念/意象都有跡可循:西洋情人節、網上衝浪、書海/字海/線條海、香蕉、遊樂場。198Please respect copyright.PENANAvp7vskguj1
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我喜歡詩和現實「若即若離」的特性,這些意象也有,譬如衝浪,我用了真實世界的衝浪詞彙:落水、爬上、越浪(我很喜歡這個詞~)、烏龜翻(碰到大浪時,將衝浪長板頂在上面,從浪的下方穿過去,然後再翻/爬回板上)⋯⋯來指涉網路上的衝浪(surfing the net),有一種虛實相生的趣味。198Please respect copyright.PENANAaO7I1f4uvh
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順道一提,我完全不會衝浪——我運動苦手啊——這些概念是從網上衝浪得來的,如果有誤,煩請告知,但請勿噴~謝啦^^8964 copyright protection194PENANAgoB5CEYME3 維尼
香蕉也是。198Please respect copyright.PENANAWcCURwmM28
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我用真實世界的香蕉,來指涉Penana,之後還要做/坐「香蕉『船』」再去遨遊書海/字海/線條海呢!198Please respect copyright.PENANAU78M1WuTWu
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這首詩最讓我發噱的一句是「我接過香蕉,凝視它們」,我光想到「凝視香蕉」這個畫面,嘴角就忍不住失守;而後面寫的香蕉馥郁氣味,就是要帶出「創意➝栽下➝照拂➝培育➝成果➝芬芳」,這是真實世界果實,也是文字/圖畫世界作品的栽種過程。198Please respect copyright.PENANA44AEjiEBcN
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又,《在海裡飛翔》是一部紀錄片,記錄海龜Feebee用25年遊遍整個大西洋的故事。」8964 copyright protection194PENANAbJXhYUzNsa 維尼
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很高興自己找到一個這麼好玩的地方,就算之後蜜月期過去,或是自己的「不定性」又開始發作,至少目前我玩得很愉快,也已經在此寫了一些原生(=不是從其他網站搬過來的作品)的新詩&小說/故事。8964 copyright protection194PENANAfXHg8M6mS2 維尼
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我覺得我的「恐怖故事寫輪眼」快要打開了,不少發想正蠢蠢欲動,希望能將它們化成文字(我沒本事將其圖像化~),一一生出來!8964 copyright protection194PENANA566vxjIdwx 維尼
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