x
No Plagiarism!bxR1208BxPe5RVEvrDAMposted on PENANA 373Please respect copyright.PENANAlQtn3Rz1sb
8964 copyright protection369PENANAma9dK3s2a2 維尼
大前輩詩人余光中教授,有一首詩,名曰〈蓮的聯想〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection369PENANAliBc4mXsqw 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANApLu2SCaueP
8964 copyright protection369PENANAH848nIthBA 維尼
〈蓮的聯想〉by 余光中 8964 copyright protection369PENANADTjrmcas98 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAsw0LYr2Alh
8964 copyright protection369PENANAx8PAiqqd4B 維尼
已經進入中年,還如此迷信8964 copyright protection369PENANAPTVGqZ8xAi 維尼
迷信著美8964 copyright protection369PENANAYLcMDxDbfd 維尼
對此蓮池,我欲下跪8964 copyright protection369PENANAaVLJgFUKtK 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANATYTzC3JVVK
8964 copyright protection369PENANArgriCOr3Wb 維尼
想起愛情已死了很久8964 copyright protection369PENANAF6FOAnBph3 維尼
想起愛情8964 copyright protection369PENANAABB9IfESL9 維尼
最初的煩惱,最後的玩具8964 copyright protection369PENANAsL0Go77Atn 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAX4s3pQi7uq
8964 copyright protection369PENANAexAABc0fbY 維尼
想起西方,水仙也渴斃了8964 copyright protection369PENANAWlxr0oDMIi 維尼
拜倫的墳上8964 copyright protection369PENANAOUystc9yDF 維尼
為一隻死蟬,鴉在爭吵8964 copyright protection369PENANABKwQoPyRPo 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAoZb9zd1ghZ
8964 copyright protection369PENANA35yUowhBhq 維尼
戰爭不因海明威不在而停止8964 copyright protection369PENANA6iapMlSAGV 維尼
仍有人喜歡8964 copyright protection369PENANAgXXevOp8Sb 維尼
在這種火光中來寫日記8964 copyright protection369PENANAdREvbtQMOu 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAClCbaqwmTY
8964 copyright protection369PENANAz7WI1MSTtp 維尼
虛無成為流行的癌症8964 copyright protection369PENANAPXAS49NWFr 維尼
當黃昏來襲8964 copyright protection369PENANA4KLyn0jnm2 維尼
許多靈魂便告別肉體8964 copyright protection369PENANAHd1OosbU1f 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAnNAg1gGWX7
8964 copyright protection369PENANAdSP5mISzYZ 維尼
我的卻拒絕遠行,我願在此8964 copyright protection369PENANAEEECte4M2K 維尼
伴每一朵蓮8964 copyright protection369PENANAdz3AQkNXQl 維尼
守小千世界,守住神秘8964 copyright protection369PENANAraVnZEXZl3 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAqhgHmLn2Dn
8964 copyright protection369PENANAzwYrcpnKlE 維尼
是以東方甚遠,東方甚近8964 copyright protection369PENANAs07zUG4EPi 維尼
心中有神8964 copyright protection369PENANAVqu3Ptasxt 維尼
則蓮合為座,蓮疊如台8964 copyright protection369PENANAkzdDGzwcFp 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAl3VT2zOgKd
8964 copyright protection369PENANAasuKdHBPfR 維尼
諾,葉何田田,蓮何翩翩8964 copyright protection369PENANAd5nLz6OZFk 維尼
你可能想像8964 copyright protection369PENANAlszsiUKaWc 維尼
美在其中,神在其上8964 copyright protection369PENANAjBT78m3X9l 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA6K6SQAxSTX
8964 copyright protection369PENANAyisKTOPmSO 維尼
我在其側,我在其間,我是蜻蜓8964 copyright protection369PENANAI47D9tY2uY 維尼
風中有塵8964 copyright protection369PENANAYDFxdZE4kR 維尼
有火藥味。需要拭淚,我的眼睛8964 copyright protection369PENANAODQ4I1dqte 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA7wP2MKBzVm
8964 copyright protection369PENANAWknzWDBzPT 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAY581JqWYdB
8964 copyright protection369PENANAagUqLgFRvs 維尼
同樣是大前輩詩人蓉子女士,亦寫過一首詩,名曰〈一朵青蓮〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection369PENANAQpfMVS56JO 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANABf9BXFPl4D
8964 copyright protection369PENANAHcdj13Kh63 維尼
〈一朵青蓮〉by 蓉子 8964 copyright protection369PENANATq5bMEtUPn 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAEMRyOZHG7q
8964 copyright protection369PENANApcmWMnzyEb 維尼
有一種低低的迴響也成過往8964 copyright protection369PENANAjVNkuP2KMF 維尼
祇有沉寒的星光 照亮天邊8964 copyright protection369PENANAze950lG5a8 維尼
有一朵青蓮 在水之田8964 copyright protection369PENANARomajbD7dh 維尼
在星月之下獨自思吟。8964 copyright protection369PENANAoWOElqOVPD 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA00y3QvIFnP
8964 copyright protection369PENANA7QnmYWj9hj 維尼
可觀賞的是本體8964 copyright protection369PENANA8cxaprSqyO 維尼
可傳誦的是芬美 一朵青蓮8964 copyright protection369PENANA6mRCC79XiC 維尼
有一種月色的朦朧 有一種星沉荷池的古典8964 copyright protection369PENANA7zeUnrD6Lj 維尼
越過這兒那兒的潮濕和泥濘而如此馨美!8964 copyright protection369PENANAvT7R7l6nfi 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAcENpBO0WtP
8964 copyright protection369PENANA5Dabr8LHnW 維尼
幽思遼闊 面紗面紗8964 copyright protection369PENANADfjmmtnst3 維尼
陌生而不能相望8964 copyright protection369PENANAG8dhNBENFa 維尼
影中有形 水中有影8964 copyright protection369PENANAIEO8jw8m6v 維尼
一朵靜觀天宇而不事喧嚷的蓮。8964 copyright protection369PENANA3mqcGTTn8F 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAu2e5fUt6ey
8964 copyright protection369PENANASQcXFd2PJv 維尼
紫色向晚 向夕陽的長窗8964 copyright protection369PENANAWjV1QL7Dr2 維尼
儘管荷蓋上承滿了水珠 但你從不哭泣8964 copyright protection369PENANA0bzz4Z2Gg4 維尼
仍舊有蓊鬱的青翠 仍舊有妍婉的紅燄8964 copyright protection369PENANA4OqiX56uqN 維尼
從澹澹的寒波 擎起。8964 copyright protection369PENANAfzwmY3KVGo 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAU5Zr6yRYHk
8964 copyright protection369PENANAxokiuhSutB 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANADHJsIW6mxz
8964 copyright protection369PENANAVZCECeEFUZ 維尼
非常勉強才稱為「後輩」的我——我只是喜歡寫詩,不算詩人——在今天 (Mar/11/2024) 也上架一首與蓮有關的詩〈蓮花〉,全詩如下:8964 copyright protection369PENANAAP6fuMB89c 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAVZLAloEaVS
8964 copyright protection369PENANAGn4fZpsGoj 維尼
〈蓮花〉by W.H.8964 copyright protection369PENANAsH5zTY84ZI 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAf9votF2bKU
8964 copyright protection369PENANAF1lPwR4aPT 維尼
Ta自許是一朵蓮花,獨冠池塘8964 copyright protection369PENANAu5SOkp83VF 維尼
底下蟲魚蝦,洋洋擎舉8964 copyright protection369PENANAorkNqO6vS4 維尼
屬於自己的強項8964 copyright protection369PENANAkp0Q5BDxms 維尼
無懼那風雨豔陽8964 copyright protection369PENANAiOVbIW6vlq 維尼
Ta最棒8964 copyright protection369PENANAbl3dLrp5zO 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANARxoVUA4EBg
8964 copyright protection369PENANArx0oFTkWqb 維尼
Ta自詡是一朵蓮花,脫俗自賞8964 copyright protection369PENANAy8mhhky2op 維尼
同流不合污,洶洶潑灑8964 copyright protection369PENANAJIgwiKxPyN 維尼
屬於自己的體香8964 copyright protection369PENANA8pu8Bb4b4X 維尼
然而眾人沒感覺8964 copyright protection369PENANAnOsYaaQFF2 維尼
難想像8964 copyright protection369PENANAYCU7TBS8W1 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAz4Q6DVjKY1
8964 copyright protection369PENANA6DWpOffMwr 維尼
Ta自視是一朵蓮花,優雅高尚8964 copyright protection369PENANAAwr3utKzRy 維尼
視蚊蠅無物,赫赫展列8964 copyright protection369PENANAPu4J3M7BjS 維尼
屬於自己的度量8964 copyright protection369PENANAXPVixfcYOd 維尼
正因腹笥窘得很8964 copyright protection369PENANA7hBxdAvu0g 維尼
空蕩蕩8964 copyright protection369PENANAqaYH0MVcll 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAZMiPtFAr4z
8964 copyright protection369PENANAxJjaeaDRUV 維尼
Ta自誓是一朵蓮花,慈恩遠揚8964 copyright protection369PENANA3UvHEF6kjF 維尼
聖良且有光,汲汲營造8964 copyright protection369PENANAHmeDc83nDf 維尼
屬於自己的形象8964 copyright protection369PENANAccVTvpRfIN 維尼
手指以筆畫蓮花8964 copyright protection369PENANA7LDMEP6iY0 維尼
真漂亮8964 copyright protection369PENANAE5hupoFrqD 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAwk2QQhKYGw
8964 copyright protection369PENANAs13bcjUEd2 維尼
嗯嗯8964 copyright protection369PENANA3evCRhbHxc 維尼
真的漂亮8964 copyright protection369PENANA5cqi4llfFg 維尼
朵朵都是8964 copyright protection369PENANAEQxvtI1SRm 維尼
卓立安詳風範8964 copyright protection369PENANAoxIdcfbHZ3 維尼
大方親和模樣8964 copyright protection369PENANAZNSJBuLnps 維尼
冠冕堂皇8964 copyright protection369PENANAPxRGcIG0qt 維尼
結不了蓮8964 copyright protection369PENANAc8KWbCE8IK 維尼
子8964 copyright protection369PENANAjTmq506vRM 維尼
的8964 copyright protection369PENANAkGmPdUCvAc 維尼
塑8964 copyright protection369PENANATUL8pVnyCF 維尼
蓮8964 copyright protection369PENANAB3X4sKqynU 維尼
王8964 copyright protection369PENANARWToTCMl5I 維尼
。8964 copyright protection369PENANAz7pufNGfy1 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAnsoW9DXSkD
8964 copyright protection369PENANADP5MMIposQ 維尼
(因為是圖象詩,所以全詩置中~)8964 copyright protection369PENANA2vx8CVxWnJ 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAvYBKwDYNaK
8964 copyright protection369PENANAyKzPwDg9TM 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANALjSQJ8LxrL
8964 copyright protection369PENANAyogOgkLbqB 維尼
兩位前輩詩人的蓮詩,其蓮花意象都極其正面,也符合從古至今,中華文化裡面賦予蓮花的樣貌和形象。8964 copyright protection369PENANAS0dpWv8N8J 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAVXEv40pS03
8964 copyright protection369PENANAedi0dozpeo 維尼
然而,我的詩〈蓮花〉就不是這樣了;藉由這首詩,我拋出一個思考點:中華文化裡全然正向的植物,例如花中四君子梅蘭竹菊,例如宋代理學家和國文教科書大肆宣揚的蓮花,其形象只有單面嗎?8964 copyright protection369PENANAxuSNtcY2ZQ 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAYlTvNo2ixD
8964 copyright protection369PENANAGyAMt2Vqh7 維尼
就我讀過的蓮詩來說,都是「詠」,都是「褒」,還沒看到有「陰暗面」的⋯⋯連我自己寫的歌曲處女作 (詞&曲) 〈紅芙蕖〉,也是。8964 copyright protection369PENANA9Yay0GPttk 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAjTy9dYk3Cy
8964 copyright protection369PENANACzjfodCCqG 維尼
這是文化給予的既定印象。8964 copyright protection369PENANAMBUC3lsBY3 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA7zrkw4VAIF
8964 copyright protection369PENANAHYVDtMco7j 維尼
不過我第二首和蓮有關的詩〈密集恐懼症〉,就帶點負面氣息了——老實說,一大片蓮田,可能會誘發密集恐懼症啊。8964 copyright protection369PENANAFXvBE6BszB 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA0QLMhCQF9q
8964 copyright protection369PENANAVxrIE1fmAt 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANABvRG5rghL8
8964 copyright protection369PENANA6Pl91nub8g 維尼
也許,對於黑白分明、正邪一刀切的文化意象,可以試試「反其道而行」,雖說不一定要「為反而反」,但是從物體/事件的另一面來思考,例如:出淤泥而不染的蓮花,其實只是跑不掉,它忍很久了⋯⋯也頗有趣。8964 copyright protection369PENANADryKP36ahD 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAsBATCGeULI
8964 copyright protection369PENANA59i2iB32o4 維尼
或者加入其他元素混搭,像是一朵由工廠製造的塑膠人工蓮花,不知何時被頑童插進蓮田,還自以為是眾人稱頌的原始天然蓮花,洋洋得意,等知道真相後 (因為永遠結不了真實的蓮子),陷入自卑和恐慌,開始產生毀掉一眾真・蓮花 (=蓮田) 的念頭⋯⋯8964 copyright protection369PENANAEozAa8PCI5 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA84FxCNnywb
8964 copyright protection369PENANASsAAsheUXP 維尼
由這個構思發展下去,寫成新詩、(黑色) 童話、小說 (如推理小說經常有為了隱藏過去身份而產生殺意的情節,松本清張的《零的焦點》就是一例) 都不錯呢。8964 copyright protection369PENANAQ8m1IFP57l 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAMwLUxl1b6z
8964 copyright protection369PENANAmFn1I3YAfp 維尼
用這些方式,轉化定型物事的固有形象,再加以創作,挺有意思的。8964 copyright protection369PENANACnjQhQviHd 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANA5iUEZpnCzD
8964 copyright protection369PENANAQXOTU3Hjc9 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAVNnS0PNdso
8964 copyright protection369PENANAqTSCsHJuuH 維尼
附圖原畫作者是酒井抱一 (1761-1828)。作者去世70年以上,其著作財產權已經消滅,原畫圖檔屬於公有領域 (public domain),任何人均可使用。8964 copyright protection369PENANAza08vB7J4P 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAfzTjIyXyxI
8964 copyright protection369PENANA23c94OWkcx 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAlzhiFvkoRf
8964 copyright protection369PENANAspzQS7Wl1T 維尼
【我寫的〈蓮花〉原詩出處】8964 copyright protection369PENANApDUgGooP9t 維尼
https://www.penana.com/article/1344689373Please respect copyright.PENANANuz7YLAZyx
8964 copyright protection369PENANANhUfNNn6PD 維尼
373Please respect copyright.PENANAPy81oSDZVl
8964 copyright protection369PENANAbP0whAA0db 維尼
216.73.216.11
ns216.73.216.11da2