其實這首並不算正式的詩,78Please respect copyright.PENANAOtFRK1X1e9
幾乎沒有用到任何詩體,78Please respect copyright.PENANAmLVRoWVojT
就算真的有也只是巧合(沒有特別去查或故意使用)78Please respect copyright.PENANAx059x36q51
勉強來說是新詩(結構比較不嚴謹)吧!
這題一樣是先有答案才有題目的~78Please respect copyright.PENANAw41XZYl2tw
而這首詩是由昨晚的一場夢開始構築的。
夢中的場景是這樣的,78Please respect copyright.PENANACYvecDIRku
心中有著各種混亂(壓力或者恐懼或者哀傷、絕望),78Please respect copyright.PENANAYvbmJjp5ku
為了讓自己能夠靜下心來,78Please respect copyright.PENANArDLhQYfFWt
我開始寫書法。78Please respect copyright.PENANAZxcX8JoLVQ
這個書法的第一句叫做78Please respect copyright.PENANAFqEvjueMwz
「天地無用」78Please respect copyright.PENANAsujfznlyfA
結果用這個字偏小,78Please respect copyright.PENANA4ozAI6E4U5
潛意識告訴我那是因為我對自身感到無能,78Please respect copyright.PENANAXzl0jfpfQi
所以才會越寫越沒自信~78Please respect copyright.PENANAjcI05WVbwH
接著想要寫上另外三句,把整首詩補齊,78Please respect copyright.PENANASK5JmX0syf
所以最後的版本是:
天地無用78Please respect copyright.PENANABGaY1wNg2G
山河不移78Please respect copyright.PENANAWQgf8zKwVt
人間有情78Please respect copyright.PENANAHgM19sdrd5
日月無雙
在練習的過程中,78Please respect copyright.PENANAmzHWy9oBOm
似乎練了1~2個小時,78Please respect copyright.PENANAZfkUMR4IQT
不過字的大小幾乎一致,78Please respect copyright.PENANAhFwtvT9bVP
雖然一撇的捺還是如國小時那樣收尾收不好,78Please respect copyright.PENANAdnT6iX1oUl
但是心終於靜下來,78Please respect copyright.PENANAiHvUzAfPM5
只是手也爆酸~78Please respect copyright.PENANAa7k14CYjXT
於是我就醒來了。
先來分析到底這首詩(雖然可能不算詩)代表的涵義吧。78Please respect copyright.PENANAS2bvokSQxe
第一句的天地無用,78Please respect copyright.PENANAl98vyIJTPz
是暗指天與地也幫不了你,你必須靠自己來解決問題。78Please respect copyright.PENANAE5Joq01aWk
第二句的山河不移,78Please respect copyright.PENANAc9EyFmxmOM
其實也可以寫作山海不移,78Please respect copyright.PENANATfVsMXJgFy
但是好像是第二個字的平仄要跟第一句相反(地和河、用和移),78Please respect copyright.PENANArFn7vW67lA
所以才改用河。78Please respect copyright.PENANAqjz8IeZ4Ey
其實跟第一句類似,就是78Please respect copyright.PENANAd6ubPRHNGN
山不轉,路轉。78Please respect copyright.PENANAgKkViIgNTY
路不轉,人轉。78Please respect copyright.PENANA4tsHCHoPJR
的意思。78Please respect copyright.PENANA8p3njuivpP
第三句的人間有情,78Please respect copyright.PENANA0ABhcBVUnb
是說在困境中,還是要相信人間溫暖、相信愛,78Please respect copyright.PENANAyuNmqeSLZf
要看陽光面、不要鑽牛角尖,78Please respect copyright.PENANAnGYl9hP4Km
也可以說是如果自己不行時,那就找親朋好友幫忙。78Please respect copyright.PENANAEbs4bJJ6YE
最後一句的日月無雙,78Please respect copyright.PENANAXOzSAljeeL
指的就是一枝草一滴露,78Please respect copyright.PENANAuJqpeQ1cWB
也就是說每個人都是獨特的,78Please respect copyright.PENANAQ9n9riTZx6
即便是日和月,也都是唯一的78Please respect copyright.PENANATrBSwQKqTv
(就算是神話的九個太陽也只剩一個啦!)
這首詩是對應我的什麼心境就跳過吧!78Please respect copyright.PENANARlkbbPbaWA
但是我為什麼會覺得這首很適合獻給學長呢?
這邊我們假設學長的煩惱是控制慾(反向面則是不想被控制),78Please respect copyright.PENANACcKqY7UF6u
不要問我為什麼這樣通靈~78Please respect copyright.PENANAFU6n0a9nDJ
再回來看看那首詩:78Please respect copyright.PENANAPdP6faAbAa
第一句的天地無用,78Please respect copyright.PENANAWrTAeoH6nE
雖然學長出生在合眾地區的道館世家,78Please respect copyright.PENANATVRDKokDlS
然而他卻來到藍莓學園,78Please respect copyright.PENANAS8kDtLmSsb
並且成為聯盟社(學生高度自治)的社長~78Please respect copyright.PENANAlpq7skkiLz
即使平常看起來懶散,78Please respect copyright.PENANAeYS8TMDWQ8
對戰時卻不馬虎~78Please respect copyright.PENANAhM1baD0O5p
我相信這並不是因為他的家世背景或從小的訓練,78Please respect copyright.PENANADHx0p7kDou
就能達到這樣的成就~78Please respect copyright.PENANAKDFsRXdyTh
不然他也不會就這樣敗給烏栗(相較之下沒有那樣的背景)
接著第二句的山河不移,78Please respect copyright.PENANA5we8V39quq
雖然是馴龍師,但是喜歡寒冷。78Please respect copyright.PENANA0iG46TuKj1
對戰中會看到他的寶可夢有許多反制剋龍系的技能,78Please respect copyright.PENANAEd0WegBpj9
因此即使想要用剋屬性贏過杜若也不是那麼容易~78Please respect copyright.PENANAisfB9iWQQY(除非你作弊使用神獸)78Please respect copyright.PENANASyflJ3Ttyh
即便龍系也有弱點,78Please respect copyright.PENANA7uNcBZ80k8
他也能隨機應變讓自己扭轉局面、78Please respect copyright.PENANAGw2ImS2Mxj
反敗為勝!
第三句的人間有情,78Please respect copyright.PENANAilQKq2vIwx
儘管連工作人員都不信任他、78Please respect copyright.PENANAcdRlgmMWXi
紫竽又指責他、78Please respect copyright.PENANASH8eB69P2R
連小學弟赤松也希望他做什麼事情,78Please respect copyright.PENANA9Hj6ba3s4h
能跟自己討論,不然會被人誤會或讓別人反感~78Please respect copyright.PENANAj18ACttTrZ
他還是關心四天王的大家還有烏栗以及主角們。
最後一句的日月無雙,78Please respect copyright.PENANAmTOXfJeYTQ
這句其實是這首詩的重點,78Please respect copyright.PENANApUDdk6Cfdq
這個日月倒不是指太陽與月亮寶可夢~78Please respect copyright.PENANAPBqq4uaF6y
意思是希望他不要計較特別,78Please respect copyright.PENANAR6MJhCAM2I
而希望他能專注在獨特上面。
曾經有位友人出了一本書,78Please respect copyright.PENANAllNhEF8F54
其中一個觀點就是「Special vs Unique」78Please respect copyright.PENANA8FP4nc0cb0
我們常常會著重在Special上面,78Please respect copyright.PENANAUtgeXEbTRM
比方喜歡的人、偶像明星、老師長輩上司...78Please respect copyright.PENANAEdPjeRiwE1
這些都是各種意義上的Special,78Please respect copyright.PENANAn1jAIx7F89
而我們有時候也希望自己成為Special的人。
然而,78Please respect copyright.PENANAfWP26ixXsn
有時候這樣的執著也會帶給自己困擾,78Please respect copyright.PENANAOejTZqj42i
甚至舉步維艱...78Please respect copyright.PENANAKLFxAfqPLz
有些人甚至因此想不開、一直鑽牛角尖...
然而每個人都是獨一無二的,78Please respect copyright.PENANA0QvhCMsjS8
即便是長相類似的人、即便是雙胞胎,78Please respect copyright.PENANAe4Nw91zi2g
也有不同的個性、興趣、志向,78Please respect copyright.PENANAYXRMlPWWje
甚至我認為複製人,78Please respect copyright.PENANAlrN4VkWWkd
也會有不同的人生目標和原則~
為什麼會獻給學長這句話呢?78Please respect copyright.PENANApDcXR1NPl9
學長霸著社長的位子卻不認真做事情,78Please respect copyright.PENANAMvh3IvKUzW
這是為什麼呢?78Please respect copyright.PENANAmxjhZSNhnR
還有留級三年看似無所謂,78Please respect copyright.PENANAeVXAkbvvn3
但是他與八朔老師的對話卻耐人尋味~
畢竟這些都是我腦補的東西,78Please respect copyright.PENANAjPvT7SOQWa
所以就只是分享我淺薄的見解了~78Please respect copyright.PENANA5sHFRw7jtu
除了獻給學長這首詩,78Please respect copyright.PENANA9Y41yZqVy5
也希望自己能做到~78Please respect copyright.PENANApGBya4MmgN
彼此共勉之!
6/21 完
p.s. 這首詩絕不是暗指我的名字是詩字輩的那個詩喔~
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